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    Technology – Wrong Number

    Story written on August 17, 2014 by tibettenation1.
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    Weho – 2005 Bette Porter – California Arts Center Director-Weho’s player of all lesbians Tina Kennard – Head of Development for Alphaville Studios   It’s been a long and stressful day for Bette Porter, all she wants to do is come home and strip down to her bra and lace panties, curl up and read a

    Weho – 2005

    Bette Porter – California Arts Center Director-Weho’s player of all lesbians

    Tina Kennard – Head of Development for Alphaville Studios

     

    It’s been a long and stressful day for Bette Porter, all she wants to do is come home and strip down to her bra and lace panties, curl up and read a nice book until sleep comes calling, no distractions, especially from her bestfriend Alice Pieszecki which she knew wouldn’t happen, and as if on cue her phone rings, Bette doesn’t bother to look down….

    Bette: “Alice I’m not in the mood right now.”

    Alice: “So I guess you’re not getting any tonight again, huh?”

    Bette: “and you guess right, which right now is perfectly fine with me, so if you don’t mind Alice I’m going to bed!”

    Alice: “Aw! Come on Porter, you promise you would come to Milk with Shane, Dana, and I. You never come out anymore, all you do is sit in that house and be a lonely woddler, you might want to find someone tonight to dust those cobwells.” Lol…

    Bette: “Alice! What the fuck is a woddler????”

    Alice: “It’s when a person…(Alice tries to come up with a definition of woddler when she knows it’s a word she just made up on the spot)….um…well who give a shit about that, the point is you need to get laid Porter!” I mean seriously how long has it been? Do you even remember what it looks like? How long are you”………..

    Throughout the conversation while Alice ramble on about Bette sex life, or lack thereof, Bette mind drifted off, although she wanted to tell Alice to Fuck Off! she knew deep down inside she was right. Bette’s bed has been cold for a while now, three months to be exact, which is a lifetime to Weho’s legendary Bette Porter, who has bang more women than any lesbian in town. For Bette she didn’t want a hot bed for one night anymore, she wanted a permanent lover, and besides after you’ve tasted all the candy you can taste, it really becomes less exciting, she needed a different taste that would keep her wanting more. She couldn’t keep using the Porter charm forever…..

    Back to reality….

    Alice: …”really going to buried yourself in your work, I mean”…

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    1. Well!
      Been reading your comments for a while!
      Well done! Great idea and good start for your first!
      Happy you’re using Tibette,, my favourite couple too! I do like them happy and together though if you could bear that in mind!
      Look forward to the Text Message!
      Don’t be too long in posting.
      BTW I’m not a Writer either and I think you’re very courageous. Don’t think I’ll be that brave anytime soon!

      • thanks SassyGran, don’t think I too haven’t notice that we comment on some of the same stories all the time, I said I guess great minds think alike lol, but it means a lot that you like the story I don’t really know what im doing writing but just having fun, oh and by the way I always believe and bringing tibette together, don’t worry ;-)

        • Don’t know about the ‘great’ bit as relating to my mind but I’ll be happy to join you on having ‘fun’ reading your stories!
          I am happy to shed tears at the stories I read but prefer them to be of happiness and not of sadness!
          Looking forward to our journey.

    2. started very well, I like, I ask only one thing. bette and tina finish together, and I like na tina idea one creeps me poco.tina like it very sexual with bette, bette changing roles and soaking controller to passive-writing agresiva.sigue do it very well.

    3. TN1,

      Congrats for your wonderful start. I think I am going to follow this story.

      Btw, I am looking forward for your other stories after this one. We like more Tibette Writers here in Lesfan to keep the TiBette love alive so have fun writing your stories bcoz we will also have fun reading it.

      XOXO,

      Scribe

      • ok I love the nickname lol TN1, maybe I will change it lol.. and omg you are one of my inspirations that I mention I love all your stories, so this definitely means a lot to me that you read, and of course you know I follow all of your stories and we need that update from you soon. If theres anything I can do to keep Tibette alive I’m doing, whether it’s reading or posting….Always a pleasure Scribe!

    4. Hey look at you! You are a writer now and i’m so freakin proud! But hell don’t tell us that this story is not meant to be part of the credible fanfics on this site! There’s a lot of room for all the wonderful tibette fanfictions and this story sure deserves to have one(-;

      So glad you joined the bandwagon and have i told you already how you always make me laugh with your comments? Well if i haven’t, now you know and i’m pretty sure the rest of us readers will have fun with this story. Looking forward to your next post so keep up the awesome work sweetie!

      • Phacey I have to calm down right now, once I seen you read the story my heart jumped with nervousness I was scared to see the comment, I love your writing to the heart, I wait patiently for updates from you, you really don’t have a clue how happy you just made me. Im trying to do 1/3 of what you do every week by creating a story, I can never compare to you but I hope one day. Thanks Phacey from the bottom of my heart

    5. Love your story so far. I do follow you. When you read a story and comment, I will go and also read that story, because I know its about Bette and Tina. And I love them. Pps and keep up the comments

      • Thank you pinky3001 im happy you like, im new to this so bare with me! And yes Im going every story written about Bette and Tina, I started in November and won’t finish til I read them all, I hope you read them also. Thank you again

    7. Hello, welcome as a writer! I loved this one off! Can’t wait for another! I too LOVE all Tina and Bette stories. Especially the HAPPY and together ones. Can you name some of your favorites? Now, if you can just write the one off where they look each other up on google. Make sure there is a picture of each other. That would be wonderful. PPS for I’m off today and its raining. I have the time to read all day. PPS Thanks

      • First all thank you, and wow there’s so many on here I read but you should try one called I’VE GOT YOU UNDER MY SKIN that was real good, and of course Home Again, and It’s A Small World by browneyedgirl28… those are awesome stories but I can’t remember them all I just go through all Bette and Tina stories and all authors who write about them.

    9. It was a great way to start. I’m Tibetter forever! ;) I really liked it. mainly because it isn’t the typical Bette and Tina start. I’m glad that the happiness and sense of humor did you base this story. I hope there will not be a lot of drama :)
      I look forward to the sequel, and how they will meet.

      • Thank you lipitora, I’ve seen you comment on many stories so I’m honored. I’m so on board will you, there a lot of stories about them that are filled with drama and even though those are good, I also love the ones you just get to laugh at them.. so on page with you

    11. Yes, you ARE a writer, my dear!!! I’m so proud of you for having the courage to post. Like you, I read a bunch of stories (on the old site) before I could commit to posting one. I know how scary that was for you, but look…you overcame that! Yeah!

      So I was really intrigued by your statement in the AN about technology taking us over. Even now there is this barrier between us and yet I’m responding to you as a writer and a person. It’s like fire, isn’t it? We can use it (technology) for good to reach out beyond our physical limitations and make connections with others, which is a good thing. But it also can burn up all our free time and our sense of boundaries. Hmm, I think I’m rambling. Anyway, I like the story and I admit that the idea of talking to someone with JB’s deep, smooth voice in the middle of the night would set my ears on fire and melt the paint from the walls. And if I heard LH’s southern sweetness over the phone line, I’d probably melt. This is a very sexy and sensual way of having them connect for the first time. Voices are one of the first triggers for me, after eyes. :)

      So thanks for sharing and stay with it. I’m far behind in my reading of other authors on the site, but I’ll keep my eye out for your next installment.

      And like Phacey mentioned above, your comments have been wonderful. Thank you for going back in the archives and commenting on all my old work. Now that you are an author, I can PM you and thank you more properly :)

      • YOU ARE SOOOOOOOO WELCOME! OBVIOUSLY I’M OBSESSED WITH YOUR WRITNG AND EVERYTHING YOU SAY LOL THAT’S WHY IM USING CAPTIALS TO EXPRESS JUST HOW MUCH YOUR COMMENT MEANS TO ME. The External Rock was omg how can I put…FUCKING FANTASTIC..excuse my language but I never read anything like that in my life. I cried and laugh, and cried all over again. Just like Phacey, but more so you are my number one inspiration, the way you words things are just 100% brilliant…ok im rambling now but wow this means a lot, I am Honored, Thankful, Appreciative, and everything more for you taking the time out to read. Thank you soooo much!

    12. I love this..It’s fresh!…I also love the Alice and Bette banter…..Although I am Danish at heart I have a special place for TiBette..Keep going..This is great!

      • yes I notice you are a true Danish fan, and I love your story Find Our Way I’m keeping up with every posting, and even though you are a Alice and Dana fan I see a lot of Tibette in there so im loving you right now ;-)

    13. Dear TiBettenation1, aka The Perennial Commenter,

      I have been wondering for months and months now if the writer’s bug would every bite you after your immersion in hundreds of stories, the titles of many I realize you dig way into the archives to find.

      A story about two people connecting through the anonymous features of technology is a good way to build up the tension because as long as each person stays in the shadows we know they can become emboldened to take risks and reveal things they normally wouldn’t if someone could look them in the eye. I like it. You can definitely turn the tension up like this so they can twist themselves up into an erotic state of mind as they fantasize about who the person is on the other end of their faceless communications.

      As a new writer trying your hand at storytelling take a look at some of the writing and storyteller’s websites where many tips about how to write using the omniscient narrator’s style will give you some great guidelines about what an omniscient narrator can and cannot reveal as the “knower” of the inner thoughts and motivations of the characters and also how omniscient narrators can effectively describe and set up the landscape, the world where the characters will play out their dramas.

      Often new writers over tell things when they use the omniscient voice as their storyteller. There is a real trick to the trade and it’s, “show don’t tell”. To put a finer point on this you will become a better writer if you come to your story with a framework and the best tried and true tools of narration storytelling and plotting. Also, reading more about the omniscient voice will let you learn how to use parentheticals and when not to.

      It’s fun to leave little packages inside the narrative to be opened later. Morsels you may or may not wish to use but have populated in your narrative just in case you want to in the future. An example is the unanswered question in our minds as readers of your story – how did Kate get Bette’s number? You can either use it or not later but as I say it’s good to drop little pieces of foreshadowing in stories so they can be amplified later if you need a steady piece of stone to step on to get to the next part of a tale.

      In my own mind I began to wonder if Kate copied this number down from the door of a bathroom stall that said certainly something more interesting than, “For a Good Time Call 310-565-2230”. So, you had me imagining the scratched door of a WeHo bathroom and it amused me to think what the graffiti associated with Bette’s private cell phone would say. Certainly more than for a good time call. And this is my point – you may never go into that mystery but you had me as a reader going off in my mind thinking up the scene and using that bathroom door as a visual touchstone for the progression of comments from Bette’s candy store of previously licked lovers and what they might have added by way of their critiques and experiences with her. I did like the phrase, “besides after you’ve tasted all the candy you can taste…” to get the foreshadowing that Bette is looking for a finer wine to interest her palate.

      Lastly, because punctuation is an important factor in the flow of reading giving it the right look and the right flow for our eyes to absorb I can say it is the biggest pain in my ass because I can read my stories over twenty times before posting them and go back a week later and see dozens of goofs that infuriate me that I never saw before. To that end there is a handy writing tool to use if you are using the LesFan writing template and it’s a little icon on the writing dashboard that when the cursor hovers over it says something like “proofreader” or something helpful like that. When you click it then the story text gets all kinds of little squiggles under it and you can go back and correct it from there. Also writing in Word will give you all kinds of squiggles that show you where your text needs to be corrected. It may sound tedious but it will help you become a better writer because it will help us read your stories and understand their meanings more clearly.

      Lastly, let me promise you that just the art and dedication of framing up a story, examining it carefully for its flow and the elements you want to tell us, plus the COURAGE to delete paragraphs of great stuff you labored over after you’ve read your draft and realized, “That bit that I thought was so great really is dragging my whole story down and hobbling its flow,” and then throwing that away is actually the ongoing and painful blood initiation that keeps you in the wounded club of writers. Deleting is always hard and it never gets that much easier. Just remember you cannot let anything you write become too dear to you. You have to be surgical to make your drafts better and better. I’m sorry but you have to bleed for us, TiBettenation1.

      As I was imagining what I will to do with Bette and Tina in my story that will follow _Malibu_ when I begin Season 7 I went back last night to read from the beginning of my WeHo timeline to get back into their minds. Stories like Ultrasounds and I Remember Rivers that I wrote back in March of this year when A. I didn’t know until a week before I began writing here (February of 2014) what fan fiction was, and B. Stories I thought I’d done a great job with the first go round last night I mercilessly threw out paragraphs of stuff I was formerly in love with. What I’m saying in part is: We fall in love with our characters, it’s hard to torment them to create the necessary drama, and it is very important to not fall in love with our paragraphs because we have to throw them in the trash when they drag our stories down. Just remember this is a craft, an art, and we are never finished growing as writers unless we get lazy or impatient and just slap a sentence down to move on.

      Good luck and good hunting for all those right words and rhythms in your writing that will tell your story to us. I join the other writers here in welcoming you in your debut and for coming out of the comment box and onto the page.

      Blackbird

      • aka The Perennial Commenter, I love it! Thank you Blackbird I have read all your stories and your writing is amazing. I hope to be some good but wow the pressure you just put on me, but in a good way. Thank you for that knowledge and important information, I definitely want to do my research on how to become better at this but Im not sure if it’s the direction I wanna go, I’m a reader at heart I love what you authors create because the stories touch my heart, I just want to make people smile, I don’t know if I can do what you do but hearing your words I will definitely try. Thank You it’s always a pleasure if you are involved so thanks!

        • I believe you will give it a go and have a good time. However, if you go back more to commenting I will tell you the first time I ever saw one of yours I fucking choked it was so funny. It was months ago but I remember it went something like this,

          tibettenation1 wrote:

          “WTF??!!!??? Are you telling me that Bette is still in that well three months later? Get her out! Move on! This is impossible.”

          So, bring that humor to your stories and you’ll be fine.

          Blackbird

    14. Great job! I enjoyed it very much and am looking forward to your next installment. Thanks for being brave and stepping out there. I just started writing too and it’s so much fun! I just keep telling myself that it doesn’t have to be perfect. The best part is that if I’m writing it, I have complete control over where the story goes and I can keep B&T safe and in love. ;)

      Keep it up girl! You CAN do it!

      • thank you azmama, I’m trying to be brave very much so, but it’s hard with Tibette story because they all are so brilliant and well written, but I’m a true reader at heart too, thank you for taking the time out

    18. Before you even decided to become a writer you already entertained me with your comments on some of my favorite stories. It only shows how an enthusiastic person you are. And now, I’m glad to see your name as a writer. We really appreciate your efforts to keep the Tibette spirit alive. 

      Hope you enjoy writing as much as you enjoy reading and commenting. This is a nice read. Keep up the great work.

      • Aiyahnah thanks a lot, and my purpose is to entertain and make sure tibette stays alive, so I’m glad to know I achieve that purpose somewhat..I’m glad you like it , this is new to me but I’m trying to entertain so bare with me :-)

    19. Hey tibettenation 1 – like many others have said I too follow your comments on the archived stories. I’m in awe of how many you read and comment on. I am an avid reader of Bette and Tina stories and I thought that I’ve read the majority of them but you’ve brought some new ones to the forefront that I missed along the way so thank you for that and thank you for your enthusiasm and encouragement to the many writers on this site.

      I know my story ‘A Beautiful Gift’ is giving you grief right now because it’s not TiBette but I appreciate you sticking with it and continuing to read and comment even though it’s painful.

      I am happy to see you decided to take the plunge and post a story of your own. You’re off to a great start and now you are in control of the characters so I imagine we will have many happily ever after TiBette endings to look forward to. I hope you will stay with it.

      • Hahaha yes BAT2012 grief will describe it perfectly I so want them together, but you are the writer and who knows maybe you will have a change of heart ;-) but I’m sticking to your writing. Thank you so much for taking the time out to read this, I have read all your chapters you are a very good writing so thanks!

    20. Congratulations on your new addition!
      Be welcome tibettenation1!
      I just read your story and I
      say that I loved! his story has a
      creativity and originality, this is something
      indispensable in a great story.
      I wish you MUCH success as a new writer,
      the winds blow to his side.
      I look forward to the next chapter.
      Five Star!
      Note: I am a TiBette !!!

      • Thanks mscully, and I have to say that I feels as though we are one you and I, we write comments on the same old stories at the same time, I swear I’m not following you lol, seriously thanks for taking the time out to read

        • I have to confess … I read all the stories
          you read, because I know they are stories TiBette.
          I love B & T.
          Now you became a writer, I think wonderful!
          I will continue to follow you.
          Congratulations!

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