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    Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Two

     

    The first thing Tina saw of her rescuer before her eyes closed on their own volition was their feet.

    Bare.

    Tanned.

    Long, thin and manicured.

    When her rescuer spoke, the voice seemed to come from very far away. A female voice, even toned, low in timbre. It was a nice voice Tina concluded but could not muster the strength to open her eyes to meet the face who very obviously must have been perplexed by her dramatic arrival.

    A sigh escaped her cold lips when she felt herself be lifted off the ground and taken inside in the warmth. It immediately enveloped her like a fuzzy blanket. It felt like a dream almost, one she really wished would last especially when she was brought to a sofa so deep and soft that she believed had been laid out on a cloud.

    A loud sharp voice this time however pulled her abruptly out of her dreamy state.

    “What in the name of God, are you doing around these parts?”

    Tina’s eyes shot opened at the abruptness of the tone. A serious face with dark brown eyes framed by unruly long dark curls, devoid of any warmth, compassion or worry was scrutinising her severely.

    A woman, mid to late thirties, clad in a pair of bleached jeans with tears and rips which were not there as a fashion statement but more because they had been worn to death and were hanging together through some kind of Holy intervention and a top, an old lumberjack shirt which seemed to have stemmed from the same decade as the jeans and were a faded shade of its once vibrant red and black chequered pattern. This woman definitely took the vintage look to a higher level.

    Tina was taken aback momentarily. The rudeness she was being subjected to made her forget for a second what had brought her here and even the pain in her left ankle.

    “Well…” the woman continued visibly irritated by the fact that Tina had not yet replied to her first question, “ Are you going to answer me?”

    Tina pushed herself up from her reclining position but the move painfully brought back to her attention the fact she had hurt herself.

    “My foot!” she grimaced.

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    1. That was great! I am very intrigued how this story wil develop.

      Tina must not assume things by how someone looks. She is one spoiled rich girl.

      But i believe she will learn that.

      And Bette, you surely made her sound like a hard woman, but with a caring side.

      Love this story and i am glad you are back!

    2. Kins,

      There is a piece of code you sometimes have to put into the story in the TEXT editing window. You can find that in the upper right part of your editing window next to a tab titled, Visual. Click on Text and you’ll see the codes WordPress uses to make your story appear in its format. I’ll put the little piece of code below this paragraph and hope that WordPress doesn’t make it disappear because that is what this little string does – it makes blank spaces. WordPress may “see” it and make this little bit of simple coding magic vanish. You’ll want to use this code for your stories so they are more readable in appearance.

      The code should appear here:  

      If it’s not above this line then WP disappeared it from this comment box’s text. To find it to use take a story you’re editing and tap the spacebar several times to lift your text, then click the TEXT editing window and you’ll see the code to use. It’s where you’ve inserted the blank spaces.

      Sometimes using the space bar between paragraphs and dialogue bites works and sometimes it doesn’t. But this ALWAYS works.

      Blackbird

    3. I absolutely love your style. I feel like a fly on the wall observing Tina’s new surroundings for the first time with her. I can even smell the beeswax & lavender, and I love it!

      It’s really great to have you back, Kins. I have a feeling this story will be as epic as all of your other masterpieces. Looking forward to the next chapter.

      Regards,
      Labrys

    4. Ok so what does Bette really do for a.living? How do she know Tinas father? Why is she so rude to Tina? Questions questions….oh how I love stories like this and it keeps you anticipating, excited, and intrigued at the same time…nice chapter

    5. Loved it! I think Bette is a very rich lady and she has business with Tina Dad. She might just work for him and she owns that cabin. Tina will learn the true meaning of being a simple person and not judging other by there looks. PPS

    6. great update, I really liked this chapter. whether the story’s title refers to Bette’s heart? what a Tina Kennard can be thawed? :P
      so early in the story, I have so many questions, but I’m sure that you’ll be slow to answer them all. I have been so enjoying the beginning of this story, I’m sure that by the end, I’m hooked.
      I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

    7. Very nice. I will definitely keep reading. It’s been a very long time since I’ve been here and had to reset my password like 20 times just so I can comment. Don’t worry, I wrote down my password I’ll remember. I have even write a story or two, but first I need to finish the others.

      Anyway Kins, you’re awesome as always.

    8. Mmmm would really like to know the occupation of one Bette Porter.Definatley not a cabin maid.Some kind of executive probably.Anyway we will find out at some point.Pleased I got the occupant of the cabin right anyway and it was Bette to the rescue.Poor little rich girl Tina will be brought down to size I imagine.2 weeks on their own together.Time for feelings to grow.Love will be in the air as well.Instead of snow.Definately a winner with me.Great second chapter dear friend .Look forward to the next amazing chapter Kins..Cxx

    9. Wow you’re coming back in style.
      Only today could conclude both parties
      his new story and I confess that I was already
      very pleased with what I read.
      Loving this little game bette and tina.
      Love all your stories.
      Ten Stars !!!

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