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    Disturbance – The End of a Nightmare

    Previously…

    Outside the hospital…

    The deputy was about to make his departure but forgot one important detail, he forgot to have Tina sign off on her statement so that proper charges could be filed. He got out of his car and started making his way back to Tina’s room.

    Back in Tina’s room…

    Henry walked over to Tina’s bed and looked down at her with a dark anger in his eyes.

    Henry: I’m going to make sure you keep your lips closed.

    As soon as that sentence left Henry’s mouth, he reached over and grabbed a tight hold on Tina’s neck. Her monitor started buzzing and she was grasping for air but none was received. Tina got one more look into Henry’s face and her whole life with him started flashing before her eyes as she felt them slowly shutting and feeling herself fading into a bright light.

    Disturbance – The end of a nightmare

    Tina felt her body drifting into that light and just before she reached it, her body immediately pulled away and the light began to go out. The sounds of mens voice brought her back to reality..

    Deputy: HANDS IN THE AIR…ON THE GROUND NOW!!

    Henry looked over to see the deputy standing in the door way with his caliber pointed directly into Henry.

    Deputy: GET ON THE GROUND NOW!!

    Henry dropped to his knees.

    Deputy: LAY YOUR HANDS OUT WHERE I CAN SEE THEM AND FACE DOWN!!

    Henry did as told. The deputy picked up his walkie talkie and called the altercation in.

    Deputy: This is the deputy, I have a 217 requesting back up.

    The deputy walked over to where Henry was lying face down and pointed his knee in the middle of Henry back, slapping the cuffs tightly around his wrist.

    Deputy: DON’T YOU MOVE!!

    The deputy went over to check on Tina but with his gun still pointed at Henry.

    Deputy: Ms. Kennard can you hear me? Are you ok?

    Tina had slowly opened her eyes when she heard the deputy voice shouting at Henry and then watched as Henry was cuff and arrested.

    Tina: (gasping for air) y..yea im fine.

    Deputy: Are you sure, he didn’t hurt you did he?

    Tina: I’ll be ok.

    The nurses and doctors were also running in at that moment.

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    Comments

    1. I’m sorry that Tina had to go through so much, but it wouldn’t stop until she stopped it. If you know anyone out there please encourage them to get help. Change starts with ourselves remember that.

      Thanks to Pie_Fie, BetteOPorter,Mamadoc91, Mscully, Pikiangelica, Lipitora, Bibi28, SassyGran and those who followed the story from the start and to all silence readers I appreciate you as well.

      Thanks again guys!

    2. An horrific and different story with an important message.
      Well done TN1 for bringing attention to a problem which is worldwide and affects all regardless of their class creed or sexual orientation and for offering a solution to those who summon up the courage to take it.

    3. Thx TN1 for this post…hopefully it will open some eyes and those people been abused can know that they are not alone…there’s help and need to realize that it starts with them!…take that first step, be strong. TN1 I commend you for writing this knowing how much it meant to you…great writing; like your style…Boom!

    4. I can only agree with the others, my deepest respect to you for posting this story.

      I really hope that it will help people to step out of a violent relationship and find the strenght to move forward.

    5. I can only repeat what the others said: It was wonderful of you to write this story, and thus give strength and courage to those who are suffering from domestic violence. hopefully they’re going to ask for help.
      you’re really amazing, not only to draw attention to this important issue, but I’m sure it was very difficult for you to write this story. Thank you!

    6. It is very important what you did by using this story
      the characters we love so much to tell a fact that occurs
      worldwide.
      You did a superb job telling this story for sure
      was very difficult to write.
      Congrats!
      10 stars.

      Note: Domestic violence in Brazil
      09 / Jul / 2014
      The media have reported some alarming statistics on domestic violence, given that they realize that “in Brazil, every two hours a woman dies of domestic violence” that “ten women are victims of violence every hour,” or “every hour, ten women are victims of abuse. “

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