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    My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 10 THE COME BACK

    New Pasadena, 9:00 p.m Thursday, February 17, 2056. Arroyo Park Cyber observatory border with Old Los Angeles ruins

     

    Angus was searching on his htab, a way to interface with the remains of the supercomputer and make a survey of all the damage due to the storms and vortices, the recount was devastating, all communication with the satellites were broken, the defense program (HEARDP) had been disarmed and the emergency system had been immobilized; he went to talk to Sharon who has been taking care of the wounded ones, among them the still unconscious Franklyn.

    Angus: “Sharon, everything has been ruined, we are uncommunicated, and it is not only here but in the whole state; the storm is still hitting us, it may destroy us anytime.”

    Sharon: “Angus, don’t be pessimistic, the lightning has stopped; there is still hope”

    Phyllis: “how is our situation?”

    Angus: “It couldn’t be worst, no satellite connection, no defenses, the emergency system is unresponsive and I’m seeing that besides very few local hphone calls, there is not communication, the net-cloud is unreachable we are isolated but I have confirmation that the whole state of New California is almost in the same situation”

    Sharon: “can we do something to help?”

    Angus: “you may help me to check some connections; I want to, at least, reestablish the short range communications, maybe we could connect with New LA”

    The professors were working with their htabs and Angus with the few parts of the supercomputer that were in good shape.  At that moment a strong shaking of the ground, a huge explosion, and a big fire rocked everything from the foundations; most people fell down.

    Phyllis: “oh my God…, what was that?”

    Angus: “a huge earthquake (running to the window pointing to the restricted zone) it happened at the RZ”

    Sharon: “what…?, NO, IT CAN’T BE (crying)…, LOUISE…, NO…”

    Angus and Phyllis move toward the PE professor to console her; the explosion, earthquake or whatever it was, had happened at the RZ  where Louise’s vessel was and now the place is on fire.

    Sharon was desolated, her colleagues gave her a sedative and after a couple of minutes, the light has gone; the only good thing that came up was the end of the storm and the cease of the rain.

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    1. Ah man, you can’t stop here! You tease!

      A fantastic update! And i am happy that Louise and Tasha made a safe landing. I knew Tasha is a good girl and is on Louise side.

      Being catched twice by Louise, poor Bette and Tina, but she is happy that they are a couple.

      Update when ever you are able, i will wait patiently!

      • Hi Bibi:

        Thanks for reading and commenting, I had a little bit of overload work in my job, so I wanted to have a little bit of fun, I was afraid that it could be boring; but telling the truth I really want to post more frequently because the chapters are making a long-line in my brain and they want to be released asap.
        Thank you again.

        P

    2. Wow! finally managed to read the tenth chapter!
      The melody of a couple is essential for the relationship to be right, and
      Bette and Tina reached this level. I believe that most, if not all, people who start a relationship intended to something close to perfection.
      This strong family bond that Bette and Tina have with Louise, it’s because he created a
      very large family affective environment with them. And being an atmosphere of affection and friendship makes us safer, motivated and felizes.Eu have this link with
      my family and that’s wonderful.
      And I read that the scientist Stephen Hawking published a new theory about black, very interesting holes.
      My friend has to sleep, it’s too late, and tomorrow have a medical examination.
      entire universe.
      Forgive my English, it took nearly forty minutes to write and makes compreencível my comment.

      “Love ,” says science is nothing more than a chain of chemical reactions that occur in the brain.

    3. Hi my friend:

      I agree with you about family, congratulations for your family. Stephen Hawking came into reason changing his old point of view about black holes (~1970s) which proposed black holes will destroy information (like something just disappear or loses its individuality) but in 2004 he modified his theory accepting that information won’t be lost in a black hole, which by the way gives support to the existence of wormholes and white holes (I will use this in chapter 12 where Tina and Buckley will argue about it). And my friend ‘Love’ may be, as some scientists say ‘a chain of chemical reactions that occur in the brain’, but we are not only brain and each of us is different, and reactions are different depending of the composition of your body, the surrounding environment and a very big amount of factors, finally we could even be just a hologram (or like in the movie THE MATRIX) or as Calderon de la Barca said in “la vida es sueño” “Life is a dream”

      ¿Qué es la vida? Un frenesí.
      ¿Qué es la vida? Una ilusión,
      una sombra, una ficción,
      y el mayor bien es pequeño.
      ¡Que toda la vida es sueño,
      y los sueños, sueños son!

      or in english:

      What is life? A frenzy.
      What is life? An illusion,
      A shadow, a fiction,
      And the greatest good is small;
      For all of life is a dream,
      And dreams, are only dreams.

      My dear friend, thanks for reading and commenting, you’re uma muito agradável amiga.

      Bear hug

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