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All For Believing
I really am starting to hate this alarm clock more and more every day, I try to wake up just to turn it off before it goes off.. Waking to its sound brings me bad karma during the day, I told Bette I hated it but she laughed and thought I was being silly, she thinks it goes very well with our room which is true.. I think I better stop thinking about the damn alarm clock and get out of this bed to check on Angie, I can hear her breathing through the wireless baby monitor, which is a real relief, I really don’t feel like getting out of bed yet.. I turn onto my side, and there is my baby sleeping peacefully, I love looking at her when she’s sleeping, she doesn’t look much different than Angie when she’s sleeping, just like a child.. God how much I love her, I want to kiss her but I’m afraid she’ll wake up, something I really don’t want to do, she’s been staying up all night again, taking care of Angie while I get my beauty sleep. Things have been like that for the last couple of months; I’ve been coming home late from work and try to avoid Bette by going to bed as soon as I can. I’m still not sure what the main reason is behind my actions but I know one thing, I’m just not ready..
Bette: Tina..??
Oh my god, I feel my heart beat faster at the sound of her voice, I’m not sure if it’s cuz I thought she was sleeping or because she called me Tina, I know that nothing good comes after it.. Her eyes are still closed, is she still sleeping? I whisper in case she is..
Tina: Yes baby..
She opens her eyes, and looks me straight in the eyes, she doesn’t smile neither do I, her eyes say many things, I’m trying to read what they say, is that sadness I’m seeing? Is it concern? Or just exhaustion?? She moves her lips a little bit, trying to get something out but she hesitates and stop.. We are still staring into each others eyes, she closes hers and sighs.. Then opens them again..
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Safisio says
Hi! I really like your story…
Great job!!!! Keep going…
strtgirl1 says
Very good story, please keep it up
missyang says
I am so glad to see you turned to be a fanfic writer now (dunt deny it, heehee). Just saw you said you wrote sth in the thread and found your writing here rite away.
I read a lot of your posts in the bbs and found you very thoughtful and I agreed on most of your opinions on TiBette.
It is a very good start. I mean it is really an approaching point worth a lot of discussion. And your words are very fluent and sophic. So please do keep on. =)
jjll says
nice beginning…pls continue
ensconsed says
Fa6Fa6 you’re such a talented videographer I can’t say I’m suprised at all that you’ve come over from Media Blvd. to give fan fic a spin. You’ve got a good thing gong on with this story’s perspective so run with it, I know you are passionate about B&T so its’ all good, post soon…
Brooke says
I hope there is more to come. Great start, sad but also very tuching. They do need to talk.
albeez says
good start. lets see where it goes. thanks
pancha305 says
I enjoyed this and hope you have more to say. I’m always admiring of people post stories and English is not their first language. Nice job.
vi says
This such a great idea, please continue!!
B says
That was really good would love you to continue with it.thanks
ut says
This is good and please keep coming, thanks!
grannyJean says
Quite impressive for a 1st one F. Cutting right to the heart of it huh ? This does actually beg for another posting…
Isn’t that what i always wanted? isn’t this the family i always dreamt of?
Then drop the fence and let her read your fear…she can’t see the true colours because you built it too thick & too high.
munkies_2005 says
Fa6Fa6 so pleased u posted! amazing story, and u HAVE to continue it :0) and ur definatly a writer weather u deny it or not :op dont make us wait too long for the next chapter or ill have to stop whipping u ;)
crissu says
Hey girl! :) This was a really nice surprise. Feels like the S3 of my dreams has already started – TiBette together with Angie and finally the promise of an in-depth discussion between these two. A great job and I hope you’ll make a comeback soon with another chapter ;)
wo`wo says
yo there Fa6Fa6! this is great..!! keep them comin!
kasbre says
very nice chapter . keep it going
Dd1704 says
Hi Fa6Fa6 :) Sorry I have not got back to you sooner but I have been so busy with work that I have not had time to even get on to the site…. I love your stories keep them coming it was beautifully written. You certainly have a way with words.I am already your biggest fan :)
pandora007 says
really great start… please post more..
tibettenation1 says
liking the start but I see hurt in my heart coming on