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    Disturbance – The beginning and the end Part 1

    Previously…

    Henry: who was that?

    Tina: oh that was the lawyer I told you that I’m working with, he seems to have grab my papers by mistake.

    Henry: um hmm

    The movie finish and Christie was already asleep.

    Tina: I’m just going to go lay her down, be right back honey.

    Tina put Christie into bed and went back to the living room but Henry was nowhere to be found.
    Tina: Henry?

    No answer.

    Tina thought maybe he went out to the store for something so she decided to go ahead and do her nightly routine and get into bed.

    Two hours later a drunken Henry comes stumbling through the door, yelling and shouting.

    Henry: YOU WANT TO CHEAT ON ME, WELL I WILL SHOW YOU!..

    Disturbance – The beginning and the end part 1

    Tina woke up immediately at the sound of Henry’s voice, she had never heard him sound so angry before. Henry walked towards the bedroom and by the look on his face she could tell that he was pissy drunk. Fear began to overtake her body as he just stood there looking at her.

    Tina: (clearing her throat) Henry honey, what’s going on?

    Henry: you think I’m fucking stupid that’s what!

    Tina: Henry I have no idea what you are talking about.

    Henry walked towards Tina who was now standing up in front of Henry.

    Henry: I’m going to ask you one time, are you fucking him?

    Tina: Who?

    Tina was really oblivious to whom Henry was referring to.

    Henry: your new lawyer boyfriend!

    Tina: Marcus? What! Are you kidding me? Henry I will not cheat on you. I have always been faithful to you honey, where is all this coming from?

    Henry: YOU FUCKING LIAR!

    Before Tina could process anything, she felt Henry’s hands strike her face, the feeling of a hot sting lingering on her cheek and the taste of blood in her mouth. Tina began to sob and Henry then punched her dead in the nose, knocking her back towards the bed with blood immediately pouring out of her. By this time she was hollering, screaming for her life.

    Tina: PLEASE STOP! I DIDN’T DO ANYTHING!

    Henry: that will teach you to lie to me you fucking whore!

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    Comments

    1. Just caught up with the rest of the chapters to this story. Nice job handling a very tough topic. Sad that this happens every minute around the world and that anyone has to endure something like that.

    2. Thank you for a wonderful update. Your elaboration makes a very important point. Some people falls into depression not just because of relationship. Depression can lead to violence, first is the feeling then they have to act on it to relief, these people mostly feels that the world owe them something or they are not being treated fairly. People change from time to time due to environment and people they are with. Just watch out, sometimes love and care is not enough for them, I believe is inner self of an individual…. No explanation at all. You did great….. facts written are well supported. Pps…

    3. I have been looking forward to a new update this story. although this is a difficult subject, you’re doing a great job and I really care about this story.
      I’m very sorry that the end is approaching, I wanted to read the sequel. Bette and Tina start a life together with the girls and you know, a happy ending ;)
      I know it was hard to Tina, but there she was, made ​​a mistake, that she forgave him! It was not just a slap in the face, Henry, bloody beat her!
      I look forward to the next chapter.

    4. Domestic violence “, read this story does mess with my
      emotions as every great story has to make us reflect
      and think, “why it happened.?”.
      You bring the sensitivity of the matter and exciting way
      as you write, putting deTina a victim of this
      violence.
      Benvinda Levy, Minister of Justice of Mozambique said:
      A small trexo of his speech: “In one way or another, we live violência or because we’re part of it or because it happens on our side?”.
      Congratulations.
      I’m your fan.
      11 stars.

    5. I know this is a hard topic for you to write about but you are doing a great job.There are far to many women and men that go through this ordeal day after day and feel as if there is no hope and they are to scared to do anything about it but there is if only they can be brave and stand up and say im not going to allow you to abuse me again times are changing police who once upon a time turned there backs on domestic violence now its law to interfear anyone want a great true movie about this matter hire the Tracy Truman Story one of the best examples out there once again great writing pps.

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