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    Let’s give this another try, shall we?

    ”Hi, it’s me.”

    Bette could barely hear Tina’s voice, but she knew immediately that something was up.

    ”What’s wrong?” she asked.

    ”Nothing…nothing’s wrong,” Tina replied. ”Are you doing anything?”

    ”We were just going to go play in the pool,” Bette replied, still suspicious of Tina’s motive in calling. ”Angelica isn’t in the mood to nap, so I thought I’d let her work off some energy.”

    ”Is it okay if I join you?”

    Bette was completely caught off guard at this request.

    ”Sure, I guess,” Bette replied. There was really no reason why Tina shouldn’t join them. They had made excellent progress towards an amicable co-parenting arrangement. They had even gotten to the point where they were considering themselves friends, independent of their former romantic liaison.

    ”I’ll see you in about 20 minutes?” Tina confirmed.

    ”See you then.”

    Bette hung up the phone and tried to let the odd feeling pass. She glanced down at the bright yellow bikini she had on and contemplated changing.

    ‘Fuck that, she invited herself over,’ Bette thought. She tightened the sarong that she had resting low on her hips before she went to get three-year-old Angelica from her room.

    Bette walked in quietly and saw her daughter sitting on the bed, gazing around the room.

    ”You’re not very tired are you?”

    ”No mom,” Angelica replied.

    ”Would you like it if we spent some time outside instead?”

    Angelica’s sour countenance was soon replaced with a mischievous grin.

    ”Pool time?” Angelica ventured.

    ”And there’s a surprise for you too,” Bette teased.

    ”A s’prise?”

    ”But you’re going to have to wait and see,” Bette teased. ”Let’s get your bathing suit on.”

    ”Mom,” Angelica scolded her as she furrowed her brow and put her hands on her hips.

    Bette couldn’t help but laugh because she’d seen Tina do that exact same thing so often, it was clear where Angelica got it from.

    ”Let’s get ready for the surprise,” Bette said excitedly. ”We have to put lotion on too, it’s really sunny outside.

    Bette made sure Angelica used the bathroom before putting her one-piece bathing suit on. Then she slathered on the high SPF sunscreen that had become required around the household. A sunhat topped off her little curly haired head and they were on their way through the patio doors.

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    1. Oh my God!

      I am so happy that you are back!

      I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.

      But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!

      You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!

    2. Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)

    3. I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.

    4. I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.

    5. @JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)

    6. WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!

    7. Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
      It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.

    8. Finally I managed to finish reading!
      I was slowly reading this story.
      And I confess that it was a great trip.
      Pretty and wonderful.!
      And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
      It remains very current.
      The entire universe.

    9. Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.

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