Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
HIDDEN: Part 1
HIDDEN
Part 1
She was sitting nervously on a small couch facing the queen sized bed, the hotel room was quiet and only the sound of her $500 Jimmy Choo shoe on her right foot tapping the carpeted floor was the only thing playing in the air, but all she could hear was the loud beating of her heart. She rubbed her palms together to somehow lessen her uneasiness but to no avail. She had been waiting for three hours trying to think of the best thing to say, trying to gather the right words to let her know how she truly felt. She worriedly glanced at her watch and noticed that its five minutes before nine in the evening
“Fuck she has to come! She better come!”
The words that escaped her lips were in a low tone with an unlikely mixture of fear, uncertainty and hope. She stood up only to sit down after a few seconds, she had been waiting for this moment for a long time and there’s no more turning back.
Then as if her heart fell to the floor she heard a soft knock, she rose to her feet to go for the door and as she started to take a step she couldn’t help but noticed how her knees seemed to wobble. In an attempt to calm herself down she took a deep breath, she tried to ignore the doubts that kept on clouding her head as she knew that there’s no other chance but only now.
She didn’t know how many steps she took to get to the door all she knew was that the person standing behind the door was the only one who had stolen her heart and that no matter what the consequences would be she just had to tell her.
+++
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
phacey says
Dear Readers,
I came from a not so conservative background and although I’m not an American, I’m pretty much used to American culture or shall I say the western culture since I was a little kid. I love watching Hollywood movies and US television shows and seeing a man and a woman kissing or even having sex (in a non-gratuitous way) is somewhat normal to me.
Then I discovered The L Word about January of 2011 and the moment i watched the first episode i was like super glued right away to my “now dead” television (-; I didn’t stop until i finished the entire series and it went pretty past (that’s how good it is!) The first character that really got my attention was Marina, played by the beautiful Karina Lombard and the way she seduced Jenny. It was very sexy but i didn’t think they had a future together given their situation (both were in a relationship when they met.)
So Marina was out and i was like aw shucks, now what? Then as I continued watching the show, i suddenly found myself in love with Bette and Tina. I mean how can you not love those characters? Granted that those are flawed characters but that’s what made the show much better and besides i don’t like perfect characters, they bore me a lot and for me there’s no such thing. (Just my opinion)
I’m a grown woman and I have “knowledge” when it comes to lesbianism but when I saw the pilot episode of the L Word, man I was so blown away for I have never seen something like that before! I mean my eyes grew big when I saw girls kissing girls and women having sex with women, I was like whoa!!! I became so addicted to the show that I finished the entire series if I still remember correctly in less than five days!
However, what really made me addicted to the show are the two main characters, Bette Porter and Tina Kennard, which were brilliantly played by Jennifer Beals and Laurel Holloman. Not only JB and Luh are beautiful women they are great actresses too. I guess everyone will agree with me that the chemistry between them was off the charts that’s why there were speculations made that there was something romantic going on between the two, that’s how believable it is when they played the role of a couple who had been together for over 7-8 years.
In Lydia Martin’s blog in Miami Herald she tackled about how Tibette fans can go on about how hot Jennifer Beals and Laurel Holloman are together. Especially in those worn out love scenes of old — because, come on, how many times has everybody hit the rewind button to catch every whisper and every nuance of those steamy exchanges? That first love scene after the unsuccessful (ridiculous) threesome, the post-ultrasound “brief encounter” involving a very pregnant Laurel, that unbelievable kiss at Shebar, the stir fry sex scene followed by the very intense lovemaking in Tina’s apartment in Season 5 episode 6 and the list can go on and on…
As I was watching a steamy video clip on YouTube I asked myself WHAT IF this actually happens in real life? Which brought me to this story that I wrote about two and a half years ago. To those who still remember, I received different reviews for making this. Some liked it, others don’t. I lost the interest of continuing it at that time but I received several requests to continue the story and that includes from one of my favorite TIBETTE FanFiction writers and I think I’ll give it a go this time.
Now this is just a product of pure imagination and I don’t mean disrespect to the two actresses. But I just want to do something that I guess have lingered to the minds of most TIBETTE FANS for some time. If you think that you don’t like this theme, I will totally understand and feel free to read other great tibette fanfiction (-;
This will be a short story and do let me know what you think and I promise I’ll be open to all opinions.
phacey
You can also check my personal site:
http://w11.zetaboards.com/MyTIBETTEFanFiction/index/
tibettepk says
Love your stories, especially Lover in the Dark. Waiting for a new chapter :-)
Pie_Fair says
This is incredible!..I absolutely love the way you started this out!…No complaints here!
SassyGran says
Yes please continue. As PF says no complaints here either!
Hellbent says
Bring it on ! …may all our wishes come true! lol
tibettenation1 says
I remember this story abd was wondering what the name was, omg I love this and can’t wait to read more but come on you gotta finish Lover in the Dark, we been waiting to long for them to get together and Tina to meet as Angelica, long time no see my friend!
kingg says
You’re right on w/ this Tibette story. I agree w/ Sassy n PF, no complaints…Keep it going, this should be another page turner story that you do so well. You’re a great writer and I like your style. Bam!
Dee22 says
Good start so keep it coming.
Bibi28 says
Yes, please continu with this story.
I remember it from earlier and are glad you are posting it again.
But please don’t forget your other story, Lover in the Dark.
topcat says
Yes id like to see were you go with this story so please carry on pps
bubcris1 says
are you going to finish this story?
Labrys7575 says
As a loyal TiBetter from day 1; I’ve also been mesmerized by JB & LuH’s palpable chemistry. Needless to say, I’m on board – hook, line & sinker.
cellphone48 says
Hi, what happen to my comment from yesterday? I remember this story from before! PPS Please finish your other stories. PPS
pinky3001 says
Thank you giving us another great story. you are a very talented writer. Your stories moves my heart too. Do whatever you do best and is great to know you are enjoying doing it. I am a Asian and also my first time watching lesbian series… I just fall in love with the L word. In here the characters didn’t end after season six. Thanks to all the fans to support this site and Kudos to the passionate great writer like you.. keep it up !
phacey says
Hey cell i think five comments are missing i don’t know what happened probably a glitch in the system? Just like everyone else i keep on getting error 404 when i read some stories hope this will be fixed asap. thanks to Jacky for all her hard works! Btw I’m working now on a new chapter of Lover in the Dark and will post it asap, thanks for your continuous support (-:
dazzlecarol says
Loving this story and the different take on Bette and Tina.Looking forward to your next chapter very much.PPS
Spumoni says
phacey, I think it is inappropriate and disrespectful to weave JB’s and LuH’s personal lives into a story. Opinions differ, though, and I wish you good luck with this tale.
mscully says
Dear Phacey, I remember that story at the time I was a silent reader, and I’ll tell you what I think: I agree with you they are great actresses, that’s true, but when they’re on stage, everything seems so real that it’s not just acting as something beyond. I downloaded the kitchen scene when tina seduces bette and tina’s House with the original sound, where you lose me, and both moan and whisper that the scenes had to be edited even. But if they had or have something, it stays under wraps absolute.
In Brazil the series just passed the canal closed and with many cuts was a horror.
But luckily I bought the 6 seasons and can Watch my favorite scenes.
Phacey you have to go on with the story on behalf of all the Tibette worldwide!. Please “night lovers “, I’m in the watery chapter again.
10 stars!!
teegirl says
Hi Phacey,
I will read whatever you write and opinions be damned.
Aiyahnah says
Phacey I know not all Tibette fans will like this theme and you’ve lost enthusiasm to continue this story before. But since you’ve decided to post this, then I think you have to finish this.
I don’t think writing this story is being disrespectful to JB and LH. I’ve read some fanfictions where the writers wrote the real name of the actors starred in the movies or shows and it doesn’t necessarily mean that the writers were just making a complex story out of the actors’ personal lives.
Fiction itself defined as a story invented by the author that is not real, rather imaginary. And I’ll say it again, we love your imagination so please continue with this. We’re just fans who have strong admiration to JB and Luh’s chemistry and it’s just for pure entertainment and nothing personal about it.
This is the first time I’ve done this; commenting twice in a chapter. But I hope you’ll read this before this comment will vanish again.
Please keep writing…
Thanks!
ut says
Love this