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The letter on the subway
Story written on March 22, 2011 by kins40.
Chapter 6
"Dana, focus on what I am telling you..you need to be ready for when Bette arrives…" Tina was pacing up and down in her studio in front of her friend.
Dana looked back at her dubiously.
"Tina, I think the game has gone on too long….you are going to have to come clean about the truth….be serious for a second…she is interested in your paintings…this is the chance of a lifetime…don’t ruin it"
A week ago, Dana had left the gallery owner’s office having agreed to a studio visit and today was the day. Bette was on her way to see the artwork for herself.
The personal trainer recalled Bette’s expression as soon as she’d opened the portfolio. A look of total amazement had washed over her beautiful face.
"She must have been very much impressed by what she saw in your portfolio …she hardly spoke and was just taking in the pictures page after page….mind you as I recall rightly…she looked at me kind of funny" Dana elaborated further, "You know…she did not ask much…so all what we had rehearsed was for nothing …all she wanted to do was come and visit the studio….so I agreed to it."
Tina listened to her friend and was slowly coming to the realisation that she was in deep trouble.
She had not accounted for two things, one that her portfolio would make such an impact on her employer and two, she had definitely not factored in the incredible attraction she felt for the brunette.
Their first meeting was perfectly etched in her mind. Tina had felt instantly physically attracted to the beautiful art dealer.
She recalled her first impression at the door and her awkward stumble into her as she let her eyes wander over the back of the brunette.
Their close interaction during her first week had not eased any of her feelings and she had found herself fighting off millions of butterflies at the anticipation of meeting Bette every morning.
A couple of days after her meeting with Dana, Bette had called Tina in her office. She invited her to seat next to her on the leather sofa which adorned the wall opposite her desk.
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lodeerca says
Never had any doubt that you would only consider Danette as a yogurt! Love this story! Ready for the next -crucial-chapter!
bombasticbully says
I hope Bette takes the news well although I don’t doubt that she may feel deceived. This line made me gasp: “Suddenly, Tina felt a slight tug on her hand, she turned slightly to look at Bette and felt her hand change from cupping to interlocking fingers.” I found it so simple yet romantic. Only to find out that I will be romanticized even more in the next page. Your story leaves me in a dreamy state. I loved the way Tina described the painting. Hell, I love this story! :)
bombasticbully says
BTW, is there anything that I can do to make you post the next chapter sooner? :D
Querida says
Wow, the way you build the suspense is incredible! Great story.
caramel4vanilla says
That was cruel to leave it there lol, Danette oooo could never imagine that in a million years; the yoghurt thing made me laugh though. How will Bette react? I’m thinking she will feel hurt but then glad its Tina the letter was from on the subway :D can’t wait for more Caramel
natamari36 says
Just loving it- Please post soon.
lucybelly1 says
God, kins. I loved these last two chapters. I can’t wait to see how Tina’s going to explain things to Bette. I’m glad you’re not planning to drag out things with poor Dana…I can imagine her totally uncomfortable. hahaha. Loved Bette’s line that her hand was made for Tina’s. Swoon…
AmandaMG says
wow… this is so GOODDDDDDDDD… and what a place to stop… please post soon… i love it
Merlion says
OMG… Kins40 your writing is so amusing! I love this story! And the way you build up the tender moment is so sweet and romantic :-) looking forward to your next post! PPVS :-) thanks!
Kword75 says
I’m in love with this story… *sigh*…
Kword75 says
And if I may add: “My eyes feel like they were made to read you…” ;)
mette hartmann says
So relieved that Danette is a yoghurt and not a possible romantic liason!! Can´t wait for your next post.
Dainty says
So happy that you are not making them or us wait to hear the truth. I love this story. Hope Bette receives well the news she is about to hear. It will be a shocker but the letter will be even more of a shocker and I want her to know it all very quickly, so she can get over the shock and still accept Tina in all her lovliness and independence. Yes, their hands, hearts, bodies, and souls were made for each other. Hope you post the next chapter very quickly. Thanks for posting.
Ozgal says
I hope Bette doesn’t freak out when she hears Tina’s confession. She has a tendency to over-react and run off before talking things out. Great chapter. Thanks for posting.
azmama says
Such a wonderful story with wonderful story telling.
Sammer says
Aaah…what a cliffhanger. Please post again soon! I love this story.
robbeedee says
Hi Kins, I am just loving the gentleness romance of this tale as Bette and Tina tiptoe nearer each other. I don’t think Tina will reveal herself just yet. Interesting time ahead. More please. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
rnm2112 says
This is a comment that is for all previous chapters as well. You are fantastic. Lovely story. With hint of Luarel’s current working style.I mean she does paint with loud music playing in background. And the letter and the writing and the romance. I am all dreamy-doe eyed right now. I hope Bette takes the revelation well, and this love story proceeds without a hitch.
cvu says
“Bette, i have something to tell you..” Now question is Will Bette accept Tina’s explanation or..Bette can’t. Cuz she feels betrayed or..Tina have to question herself “Is this the right thing to do?”….or… …I’M BEING THE WRITER HERE… hehehe!…moving on….. I’ll just have to wait…Be patient…….And I’ll behave..
Journey1962 says
Please let it be the truth
ut says
This is good and come on Tina, just tell her the true. Please post more, thanks!
JBtlw90 says
I hate Danette, both the couple and the yoghurt, but I absolutely love your story!! I can’t wait to see what happens, PPS!
didi1956 says
Beautiful story.How will Bette react?Looking forward to the next chapter.
favcouple says
Just read both your updates. Beautifully written and I hope Bette allows Tina to explain. Thank you for this story.