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The letter on the subway
Story written on March 25, 2011 by kins40.
Chapter 7
"Tina…..what are you doing here? …… I did not know that you knew Dana…" Bette suddenly said at her surprise discovery, she did not let Tina finish her sentence.
Seeing Tina unexpectedly had been a very nice surprise indeed for the brunette. "This woman is totally angelic…" she thought inwardly as she looked on at Tina’s slight awkward demeanour and her face instantly lit up with her amazing smile.
"God…she is so beautiful" Tina thought at the exact same moment.
A knot had formed in her stomach and she could feel her resolve slipping away from her. The words she had rehearsed while she was expecting the gallery owner’s arrival were stuck in her throat and formed an impossible lump to swallow.
"Uh….. Yeah I know her ……." Tina said trying in vain to clear her throat I’ve known her for a while actually…I’m sorry I did not mention it"
"It’s ok … It’s a small world….. you are bound to bump into someone you know …right" Bette was looking around the room to see if she could spot the other brunette, "So ….. what was it that you wanted to tell me?"
The blonde was squirming on the spot. She felt like she had been called to the headmaster’s office to be reprimanded.
"Oh…uh…..well ……the thing is…" the lump in her throat was getting bigger and bigger, "the thing is….Bette….." she felt like she was about to choke "Bette ….uh ……" Tina wished really hard to be struck down so she would not have to come out with the truth and then she heard herself say, "Dana is not here…..she was held up……so she won’t make your meeting but she asked me to show you around!" . She finished her sentence almost in one breath.
Bette did not know whether to be pleased or disappointed. There she was alone with the beautiful blonde, the person who had single handedly occupied her thoughts for the last while and she was completely unphased at having been stood up by her appointment.
Bette spoke, "I am sure you are more than capable of doing that….evidently it would have been nicer to have Dana here…you two seem to be very close." Bette’s statement was more an affirmation than a question but Bette could not help but feel the sharp pangs of jealousy hit her.
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lizmar says
Aww! This was perfect! I can’t wait for the next one. I wanted to be in one corner and observe the scene!
bombasticbully says
Waaaaah! I now have the biggest smile on my face! And you missy is the one responsible for putting it there. I am watching a rerun of AI and just saw JB. Oh what a wonderful moment this is. Teehee! I am glad Bette acted above her anger and feeling of deception. I still wish though that Tina came clean but all is good and I am a happy camper here. Thank you for posting! It was worth the wait. :) PPS
Journey1962 says
Okay so now I’m glad that part is exposed. But now Bette needs to let her know that she got her letter :) Great story. Only one problem. Chapters are way too short :) Waiting for more.
MSFS says
Excellent update.
don70 says
I love this story and I cant wait for more, thank you.
Kword75 says
Ahahah, I suppose my line must have sounded like a cheesy pick up line indeed! LOL, but please know that I don’t mean it any less! And thank you for the return of the compliment, it’s a nice one coming from such a great writer. A dire vrai, reprendre l’écriture me titille régulièrement, et il est fort possible que j’y revienne. Il faut juste le bon moment et la “bonne histoire” à raconter. Je ne prendrai pas l’excuse du manque de temps, car quand on aime quelque chose, le temps on le trouve toujours. Mais merci de ton intérêt, ça me touche. Anyway, great update (was eagerly waiting for it), and I’m glad that Bette finally figured it out! And again I have to point out another fantastic line of yours: “No, not seeing you ever again is not an option”. It’s like Bette’s heart is saying to its owner “I don’t give a fuck how angry you are, you are NOT letting this woman go. You’re just not!” Love it, you have a way with words. Thanks! Kw
Querida says
Ah!
Querida says
Ah!
talaula says
Nice;-)
AmandaMG says
bette is so smart… so glad the game is over… just wait till tina hears she found her letter…Beautiful… pps
modengo says
LMAO!! Love your style! Damn!;) You really twisted it around and made good at the end. Great chapter, loved it!
Tanishaa says
Wooooo! :D
Dainty says
So glad that Bette figured out that Tina was the artist, now she just needs to tell Tina that she found the letter on the subway, well maybe, maybe not. She might want to keep that bit of info to herself until a crucial moment. Personally I think she should tell her now. Fanastic chapter. Thanks for posting. PPVVS
Lgirl87 says
YES!! for a minute I feared Bette would go ballistics. Great post kins, please post soon!
Merlion says
Wow!! Kins you nailed it!! :-) …. You really have way on words!! Can’t believe that English is not your mother tongue! I can’t imagine how great it’ll be if you writing in your mother tongue language!! I love this story!! And looking forward to your next post, PPVS, thanks :-) … (my silent prayer: and I hope it’d be soon and or longer.. ^^, please??) Anyway.. “She is like a big sister to me”?? LOL hmm where did I heard that before?? ;-)
Merlion says
Wow!! Kins you nailed it!! :-) …. You really have way on words!! Can’t believe that English is not your mother tongue! I can’t imagine how great it’ll be if you writing in your mother tongue language!! I love this story!! And looking forward to your next post, PPVS, thanks :-) … (my silent prayer: and I hope it’d be soon and or longer.. ^^, please??) Anyway.. “She is like a big sister to me”?? LOL hmm where did I heard that before?? ;-)
lodeerca says
E-x-c-e-l-l-e-n-t!
lucybelly1 says
I’ve read this chapter four times as it is so perfectly written. First having Tina hesitate to come clean and then having Bette realize the truth. I loved it! I can’t wait to see how Bette reveals the letter and what Tina’s reaction will be to her having found it. Anxiously waiting….
rocknchick57 says
Amazing chapter..wonderful story!
ut says
That was great and love how Bette figured Tina out, love the kiss too. Please post more, thanks!
didi1956 says
YES !Thank you for the update,amazing story.
JBtlw90 says
This is my favorite chapter so far!! I loved it, what a great story :) But I have to agree with Journey1962, your chapters are waaay too short ;D
pattifloatn says
I am sorry that I fell behind. The fear that Tina must have had in her heart had to have almost killed her. How does one go and tell the woman that she has fallen for that she is the artist. What Tina does not realize is the letter she wrote is now in Bette’s possession.
mette hartmann says
Perfect update, thanks.
cvu says
What more can i say?…. GOD YOU’RE TOO GOOD!… Every word spot on. every line is clear. …LEAVE ME BREATHLESS.