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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 25)
Ashley called that night and it was so, so, so hard not to scream over the phone that I was coming to visit, especially since she was starting to sound more bummed, too. In the days that followed, it only became more difficult. I also found it tricky not to break the news to Michelle. She was usually pretty straightforward about… well… everything, and to not act the same towards her wasn’t easy. So when she called me up Sunday, 5 days before I was leaving, my heart pounded rapidly and my palms began to sweat. Must… not… tell… Michelle…
“Hey Michelle.”
“What’s up, Spencer?”
“Nothing, just working,” I told her.
“You need to come to L.A.”
“What?”
“You need to come to L.A.,” she repeated. “Now.”
“Why? What happened?”
“Well, nothing. But something’s up with Ashley. Remember how I told you she was all smiles when she got back?”
“Yeah?”
“Well, I think it’s wearing off or something. She’s been a moody bitch lately. And it’s pissing me off.”
“What does that have to do with me?” I asked.
“It has everything to do with you, Spencer. She misses you. The other day, I went over to her apartment because she wasn’t answering her cell, like, the whole day… I have a key and everything so I let myself in. And she was lying down, looking at an old picture of the two of you. I swear she might have been crying. I haven’t seen her cry since she was in rehab.” My heart ached at the thought of Ashley crying; I even felt a few tears well up in my eyes.
“She doesn’t… um… she doesn’t sound that upset… on the phone.”
“Well, obviously. It’s Ashley. You know how she gets about that kind of stuff.”
“Yeah,” I replied. And I did. When Ashley was scared or unsure, she would put up walls to defend herself and her emotions. I guess I had forgotten; when she and I were together, she basically always felt comfortable enough to talk to me about things. That was something I loved… it was like I was entrusted with something delicate that nobody else could see or have. And of course, I had managed to ruin it. “Well, I’ll come soon.”
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clomle44 says
TEASE!
cheeralstar13 says
Ahh!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!! Ok so enough filler chapters and get to the good stuff! Lol. UD SOON!!!
redglitter says
Ok so I’ve NEVER left a comment before but I just had to write and say that I love love love this story! :D
jazzy89 says
you know you COULD leave the update for tomorrow today!!!! like right now!!! that update just killed me and I feel as needy as Ashley. Great job. PMS!!!!!!!(by soon I mean now!!)
hdgallant says
I`m so excited to see the next chapter. I cant wait untill ashley see spencer again. great chapter. PMS
Kyden says
you cant go on break and leave us that little of a chapter that is plain mean
PM76 says
must.post.more.dying…
ngasi_lei says
*SWOOSH* that so made my day m’lady. That was fantastic. I’m telling you that girl is from Krypton. She’s got to be my long lost sister. Mischelle however, not from krypton. Had no patience. But we love her anyway, because she keeps us on her toes. I cant wait for your next update. Have a safe holiday, and call me if there is any trouble. I am the man of steel after all *Loop-the-loops, with a grandeous swish*
tylo says
grrrrrrrrrrrrrr post now longer
NotTwinny says
Oh Jesus! Just post the surprise already. I need to see ashely’s reaction. I NEED TO! I mean it. If I don’t see it with in 24 hours of posting this comment then I will hunt you down and force you to right it. I’m so ancy right now. I’m gonna go try and not pee my pants. Love!
clomle44 says
TEASE!
cheeralstar13 says
Ahh!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!! Ok so enough filler chapters and get to the good stuff! Lol. UD SOON!!!
redglitter says
Ok so I’ve NEVER left a comment before but I just had to write and say that I love love love this story! :D
jazzy89 says
you know you COULD leave the update for tomorrow today!!!! like right now!!! that update just killed me and I feel as needy as Ashley. Great job. PMS!!!!!!!(by soon I mean now!!)
hdgallant says
I`m so excited to see the next chapter. I cant wait untill ashley see spencer again. great chapter. PMS
Kyden says
you cant go on break and leave us that little of a chapter that is plain mean
PM76 says
must.post.more.dying…
ngasi_lei says
*SWOOSH* that so made my day m’lady. That was fantastic. I’m telling you that girl is from Krypton. She’s got to be my long lost sister. Mischelle however, not from krypton. Had no patience. But we love her anyway, because she keeps us on her toes. I cant wait for your next update. Have a safe holiday, and call me if there is any trouble. I am the man of steel after all *Loop-the-loops, with a grandeous swish*
tylo says
grrrrrrrrrrrrrr post now longer
NotTwinny says
Oh Jesus! Just post the surprise already. I need to see ashely’s reaction. I NEED TO! I mean it. If I don’t see it with in 24 hours of posting this comment then I will hunt you down and force you to right it. I’m so ancy right now. I’m gonna go try and not pee my pants. Love!
martha5 says
your killing me here with all your suspense and damned anticipation, I’m having severe problems not screaming at the moment. I just want the next one!
martha5 says
your killing me here with all your suspense and damned anticipation, I’m having severe problems not screaming at the moment. I just want the next one!
_barely_breathing_ says
Noo! i soo wanted spencer to go to LA in this chapter lol i cant wait for them to see each other again! Great chapter! Update soon!
_barely_breathing_ says
Noo! i soo wanted spencer to go to LA in this chapter lol i cant wait for them to see each other again! Great chapter! Update soon!
slayerfan101 says
awww poor ash. she sounds like a lost puppy. i love your story so so much. the pace and the storyline is so believable and beautiful. :D
slayerfan101 says
awww poor ash. she sounds like a lost puppy. i love your story so so much. the pace and the storyline is so believable and beautiful. :D