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    Reunion Challenge…I Never Should Have Taken Her From You

    Chapter 1

     

    Tina looked up from her laptop suddenly realizing the house had been quiet for too long. Leaning back in her chair she stretched while taking one last look at the screen before reaching forward and turning the computer off. 

    "Angie?" Tina called out to her daughter, her soft voice echoing off the walls as she made her way to the back of the house. Turning the corner she continued down the hall, hearing the beat of muffled music coming from under her bedroom door.

    "Angie?" She repeated as she opened the door, the sound of her voice being swallowed by the vocals of none other than Kit Porter coming from the CD player on her dresser.

    Hearing her name, the eight year old turned, and watched as her mother reacted to the sight before her…her hand raising quickly to cover her mouth in an effort to hide her gasp of shock.

    "Oh baby…" Tina rushed to her daughter’s side. "What are you doing?"

    Angelica stared back at her mother and whispered through tears, "I just wanted to look like you."

    "Oh God!" Tina’s own tears began to fall as she reached out and with only her fingers tried to wipe off the cream colored make-up that caked Angelica’s face…streaks caused by the little girls tears betraying the true color that lay underneath.

    In a determined attempt to look like her pretty, white skinned, blonde mother, Angelica had raided Tina’s make-up drawer with the failed results now staring back at both mother and daughter. Tina felt panic explode in her chest as she grabbed a near by t-shirt, desperately trying to wipe off the light color.

    "Oh baby…why?"

    "Ow!"

    In her rush to remove as much of the make-up as quickly as possible, Tina was pressing down too hard against Angelica, causing the little girls head to be forced back.

    "I didn’t mean to make you mad," Angelica hiccuped through her confused tears. "I just wanted to look like you mom." Watching her mother’s reflection in the mirror Angelica thought she had done something really bad. Reaching up, she tried once again to get her defiant hair to lay down flat. However, after dousing her hair with a liberal amount of Tina’s hair gel, it was standing straight up, and was rigid to the touch.

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    Comments

    1. I really like this beginning. I take it that B & T are not together and that Bette may not be a part of Angie’s life. Or that Angie is ashamed of looking more like B than T, eh? Sea….In your hands, this story can only soar. PPS.

    2. WELCOME BACK SEA! I’m sad to see Angie like this and worst of all it seems like Bette may not be a part of her life. Angie needs her Mama B right about now. I’m happy for Kit! Grammy….yeah!

    3. Poor Angie…Poor Bette…to be seperated and not in each other’s lives. Will Angelica see Bette on the Grammy Awards and get curious. I am curious now…please post soon. It’s a good day when you write Seahurst. Thank you.

    4. Hi Seahurst. Fantastic to have you back posting and a new story. The powers that be do answer some prayers then. Am jumping with joy at your return. Big question is whether or not Bette and Tina are together in any way shape or form. It does read like they aren’t but as the hopeful romantic I am, I want this story to recify this tragedy. I love your wonderful blend of humor and pathos as Tina tries to comfort her child while explaining their physical differences. Kit’s news was phenomenal and even more so as she spread it across the family. Can’t wait to see where this journey leads but my bags are packed and ready to go. Thank you so much for an interesting beginning. Your Loyal Fan.

    5. I have been waiting for you to write something. You are so talented and I can’t wait to read anything you write. This story is going to be as good as everything else you have written.pps

    6. Sea… its always a pleasure seeing you name on a story….i’m so glad you writing again… and it looks like another winner… i hope bette and tina can find what they gave up… each other… PPS

    7. O.o WOW! :D Im so glad you’re in this with me, sea! I have to say I was a little bit afraid noone would wanna join me… There are so many stories to be told, and one scenario can lead to thousands of different stories! I allready know Im going to love this one… Heartbreaking: Angelica and the make-up. Heartjumping: Kit asking Bette for the award… Now I wonder… Is there a Henry? Thanks for this amazing start! And thanks so much joining me :)

    8. I feel bad for Angelica…sounds like she has been out of Bette’s life. Seahurst..it is wonderful to see you post and can’t wait for more of this story..I will continue to pray for Snow in Seattle. : )

    9. Another story by Seahurst!! Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are one of my most favorite writers. I will read anything you write even if it makes me cry and I don’t cry easy (but you manage to make a big cry baby out of me). This is a great start and I feel for Angie. As you may know, the color of skin in the African-American community has always had it own issues (light vs dark) and that with two African-American parents. I’m sure being bi-racial and living with only one predominant image can have its own issues to be addressed. Looking forward to see where you go with this.

    10. So glad to see that you are writing for us again. I’ve often thought about the longterm effect on Angelica if Tina chose to renege on her promise to Bette. I am happy to see this theme explored in your story. Thanks. Lin

    11. Do I hear some regret coming from Tina? Does she somewhere in her heart harbor some sort of love for Angelica’s other mother Bette? I can’t wait to read what is going to happen next. I would find it interesting to read how Tina takes the viewing of her once wife and lover on the tv screen while they sat and watched Angelica’s favorite singer receive her Grammy.

    12. Oh poor Angie, sad to see her like this, I guess she not know Bette and B&T are not together, now let see how Tina explain this to Angie. Happy for Kit. OK post soon please, thanks!

    13. Wow so sad for that poor baby to feel that way. Parents should think more about their children feelings before they go making life decisions…if she would just kept Bette around Angie wouldn’t be putting makeup on smh

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