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Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Twenty Four, Part Two (based loosely on HYD: Returns)
CHAPTER TWENTY FOUR, Part Two: White Flag of Surrender
Previously..
“Miss Tina? Excuse me Miss?”
Tina shook herself free from her thoughts and turned to face the man who was looking at her through the rearview mirror. She hadn’t even realized that the limo wasn’t moving, they hadn’t left the set.
“Where to Miss Tina?” Jonathan, her assigned driver from the estate, asked politely.
Tina swallowed hard and looked down at her lap. Indecision was waging a war inside of her. But she knew she had to make up her mind. Where to now? She had to make a choice. She sighed and raised her head. She just hoped that this was the right one. “Jon, take me to..”
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The Porter Regency Lodge, Snowmass Village.
Aspen, Colorado.
She had expected more.
Standing here at the sidelines, watching the contract signing unfold, she exhaled deeply and acknowledged the thought that yes, she had expected more.
This occasion, as auspicious as it was, deserved more fanfare. A bit more drama. A little more flair. Bette Porter let her chocolate brown eyes sweep through the small conference room, scrutinizing everything and everyone in it. She allowed herself a sigh of displeasure for the plainness and dullness that she saw. Yes, she really believed that this thing should’ve had more oomph to it. It was just too bad that her father thought otherwise. And much to her chagrin, so did William Grisham. The two powerful tycoons wanted the momentous event as simple and solemn as it could be. They ditched the over-the-top plans presented during the numerous planning meetings held before this day, gave a thumbs down to all discussions about turning the contract signing into a big business world spectacle. They were at the top of their game, and unlike smaller companies, they did not need to resort to silly stunts just to create a buzz. What’s the point when whatever they did would get talked about regardless? With this in mind, both CEO’s scowled at the idea of doing it in front of an audience comprising of a hundred representatives from various branches of the famous hotel chain. They wanted to set an example in these trying times and practice austerity. After all, they already had a big press conference scheduled right after the contract signing, and after the expected media frenzy that would ensue, the businessmen and women from both companies would rest and recuperate before meeting again at dinner – during which a celebratory party would be held in honor of the birth of the Porter-Grisham Regency Hotels. To Melvin and William, that was enough.
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m_s_gypsy says
“I see you” very Avatarisque Alch ;) Enjoyed so much where Tina drew the line with Jill. But she didn’t do anything evil with our beloved Tina up in the mountains right? Urgh
don70 says
Love this story ,please post soon and dont leave Tina in the snow for to long.
sgtmags says
Aclh….You really didn’t do that did you? Keep refreshing the page….still the same. You are so very bad. Bad, bad fanfic writer! LOL. I enjoyed the whole Tina / Jill exchange. Good stuff…PPS
sgtmags says
Aclh….You really didn’t do that did you? Keep refreshing the page….still the same. You are so very bad. Bad, bad fanfic writer! LOL. I enjoyed the whole Tina / Jill exchange. Good stuff…PPS
pattifloatn says
Wow, finally Tina is going after her woman. It took a lot of courage for her to face Jill. But now Tina is missing, and Bette is falling apart. Hope Tina is safe.
buggs666 says
love this story but for some reason sometimes the pages won’t open then my piece of crap comp freezes and then shuts down. glad you still have it going tho
Journey1962 says
I love your story and your long chapters. I’m up way pass my bedtime :) I just had to finish reading. Looking forward to losing more sleep reading your story. Thanks
bombasticbully says
You are really good at writing and leaving us with damn cliffhangers. :) Thanks for the post! Loved it as always! :)
monrazz says
I love your story. I love that your chapters really give us a lot to take in. Can’t wait to find out where Tina is. PPS
alejita_57 says
Wonderful update.. Loved the ‘snow fight’ and the fuck, kill, marry game.. they cracked me up.. I hope Tina’s okay.. Thanks for posting. PPS
KirbyP says
Oh, I didn’t see that coming! Good twist and amazing post as usual. PPS!
talaula says
Awesome! Love the “fuck, kill, marry” game. I recognize the ski trip episode there, will you follow along the lines or gives us an alchy version? Either way it will be loved. Thanks for the update.
jayrr says
Aggghh! You kill me with your cliffhangers! I love your story so much so pps!
ut says
That was amazing and everything is awesome. Please let Tina be ok and Bette will find her soon. Please post more, thanks!
Jacky says
I’m so glad to see you posting! Do you need any helping creating books to add chapters to the book? If so, just email me, and I’ll be happy to walk you through it. admin@ lesfanf.com (remove the space).
topcat says
Alchemy im so pleased you are back posting iv so missed your writing please tell me if you are going to post the wedding chapter soon it seems like years since we read chapter 2 please post soon and im not shy in begging pretty please with a cherry on top pps.
buggs666 says
I LOVE THIS STORY
didi1956 says
Glad you are back,I love this story.
talaula says
Did this story not get transferred from the old site? That would have been a sad loss. Although, I still have the copy that you sent me Alchy. In a flash drive sitting a fish bowl without fish or water. You are the bomb diggity!
buggs666 says
are you gonna do anymore parts to the story?
buggs666 says
you gonna do anymore parts to the story?