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Fée Marraine: A Fairy Tale in Four Parts (2)
Previously…
Tina blinked and looked up at the woman, who was silhouetted in the headlights. All Tina could see was a mane of hair. “Um…um…fuck…” Tina swooned as her body began to shake with the shock. She glanced down at her legs, wiggled her toes, making sure she was in one piece. Then she looked up at the woman who was now kneeling down beside her. She blinked a few more times and then her eyes focused. “Beverly Hills! Shit, lady, you almost killed me!”
The woman recoiled a bit. “Beverly Hills? What? Oh you mean—” and she pointed back toward the store.
“You’re the woman from the market. The Ferrari and the GPS,” Tina said cutting her off. She winced as she felt the weight of her backpack pull on her shoulders. She was still in the shadows and her limbs continued to shake with the shock of nearly being killed.
“That’s right. At the market. I saw you at the market, saw you missed your bus. I thought I’d follow you and see if you needed a ride,” the stranger said. She was squinting to get a good look at Tina, but her own body cast a shadow and kept Tina’s body and face from the path of the headlights.
“Why would you do that?” Tina asked, unfamiliar with an act of kindness actually coming her way. She moved forward and pushed the groceries from her legs. Something had broken and was smeared all over the front of her. When she rocked forward, her body came within the beam of the headlights and the stranger gasped.
“Oh hell! You’re bleeding!” She covered her mouth. “Did you hit your head? Did I break a bone?”
Tina scowled and looked down the front of her. There sprayed across her pale pink button down was what looked like fresh blood. She touched her forehead and felt the sticky substance at her temple. She brought her fingers to her nose, sniffed, then gingerly tasted it.
The stranger gagged.
“Oh.” Tina giggled. “Spaghetti sauce.” She spotted the shattered jar. “A whole jar of it. Great, just my luck. I’ll never get the stain from this shirt.”
“Thank god. Oh thank god,” the woman said with relief.
“Yeah, thank god,” Tina said wryly and she shifted to her knees and felt her laptop move inside her backpack. A sinking feeling gripped her and she closed her eyes. “Damn. Damndamndamndamn,” she cursed and she pulled her backpack around and unzipped it quickly.
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BenMac says
I haven’t finished part three and have part four only outlined. I will do my best to get the next installment up by the beginning of next week.
Dainty says
Hi BenMac, this is a great story. I’m enjoying it a lot. Didn’t think I would when I started reading the first page of the first chapter. This chapter was a sweet one so full of promise for their futures. We understand that you have a real life with real responsibilities, so post when you can. When you told us you had more classes, etc., then you have more to do than normal so take your time, we aren’t going anywhere we shall be here when you are able to post. Don’t hurt yourself. Thanks for taking the time to post.
pikiangelica says
I liked the story so much, I wish tub at the party fall in love with bette and helena is also in love with bette bette but fall in love with the beauty of bath tub at the party and be jealous of Helena.
Bette0Porter says
Oh my God, you should have seen my face when I figured out who the fairy godmother is. Haha! I LOVE it. And my little T is so cute I could hug her for hours.
Thanks for another amazing story! Can’t wait to read more.
Hellbent says
…put them together and what have you got….?!?!!
bibbidy bobbidy boo!
wkm says
Love this story. Charming!
SassyGran says
Well, if you are going to be run over and covered in spaghetti sauce who better than our lovely Bette to do it! She is the Godmother and Princess Charming rolled into one and what a package!
Love the story and look forward to Parts 3 and 4.
Bibi28 says
Amazing story! Looking forward for the next parts.
lipitora says
I have been looking forward to this chapter. I loved it.
I immediately recognized the previous chapter, the story of Tina script. because it is one of my favorite stories! :)
I look forward to the next chapter.
mamadoc91 says
Kinda stirring it altogether are you? Keep on sister – love your creativity!
toby4ever says
Loved it! I got the “ella” connection to our lovely JB. Post when you can BenMac, we’ll all still be here.
mscully says
Benmac, worshiping their história.Você not only has a history,
His story brings wonderful messages of love, respect
and kindness, as when Bette tells Tina about her kindness
with the old lady at the supermarket, and difficult today to see acts
goodness, because most only think and himself, and that is very sad.
And in my opinion Ella is Stella …
All stars.
Labrys7575 says
Waiting ever so (im)patiently for Chapter 3. I have one complaint though; 4 chapters will not be enough and you know this, ma’am!
Ps: I always describe myself as a cynical optimist. Good to see I’m not the only one.
lodeerca says
…Unrealistic! There was a situationist graffiti in Paris , May 1968, reading :“Soyez réalistes, demandez l’impossible”, Be realistic, demand the impossible! Go Cindertina!
Sharod says
Stella warning is that Tina should not believe in Helena but choose BETTE. Gotta love Shane, Max and Gus.