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    the things we do for love…..

    Okay…..I am venting a bit right now……I say we go ahead and have Bette kill Jason off……and get away with it…..although everyone doesnt know the whole story……it may be important to do this now……whatcha think?

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    1. Jason definitely needs to go, but unless your Bette has a dark side that you haven’t shown us I think an accidental death would be better for the sake of their relationship in the long run.

    2. have jason get killed on the job

      BTW i have been a fan of your stories for the past year and was so happy when you came back to us. I have just chanded my name.

      Thanks for the comments on my story it means a lot when another writer comments

    3. Well this is a little funny but I think Tina and Bette need to tell Jason that they in love and want to live together and Tina want to get divorce and that is the good ending for 3 of them!

    4. samnang…..and everyone else……i want you to know that this is sort of a biography of my life since i met my gf 7 years ago…this June……..I have wanted to take him out for a long time……lol……but i have children…..which will come later……in the fic…..i was actually just venting from anger……..but…..however…….he will be out of the picture eventually….even though he is still very much in the picture at my household……i will hold onto my fantasies about that one……..to put in the fic……..everyone, thanx for the comments…….and i shall later, TAKE THA MAN OUT…………..

    5. (Smiling) Thank You…Miss Amanda, and may I say I enjoy your story as well. I may not had comment on any of it, but only because your story is too, too hot. All the NC-17, wow, I had to click out immediately after I finished reading your story, because the things that I was….

      My hats off to you, any woman who could write like that consistently without…(still smiling)…it’s just sexy, real sexy in book.

    6. I like Samnang’s idea of it being a dream. Maybe you can make it real soap opera-ey and Jason realizes that he is gay and decides that is best to leave Tina with Bette. After finally achieving every man’s dream of sleeping with two women, he still finds himself unfilled and decides to call it quits. That’s all I got. I’ll look forward to the direction you take with this story. And again, I really like Samnang’s idea.

    7. I have to be honest, I read the first chapter and skim the the next two, because I did not like the idea of Bette and Tina with someone else, especially Tina’s Husband?! So, I was just praying you would take Jason out of the equation. Now I see this…..
      LMAO! I had never laugh so hard reading something so short and simple. Though, I have to ask, when you begin to write this story, you knew where you were headed with your first chapter. So, why the changed of heart all of a sudden? You know, you could of made Tina a widower, then you wouldn’t be in this kind of predicament.
      Now, Personally, I think you should change the whole story direction instead of killing Jason and the kids off, because I don’t think theres’s any logic way to do that. Even if, Jason dies in a car crash. Is it right for Bette to take advantage of Tina in a vunerable time? I think you should make it a dream that they both shared, while watching a movie(at one of their house) : about a woman falling in love with a married woman and doing whatever she can to be close to her. Both fall asleep, then they wake up and stare at each other, both thinking what a crazy dream they just had, not realizing that they had the same dream. Bette was happy that it was just a dream, because the thought of her woman having kids with another person breaks her heart. Tina was also relieved that it was just a dream, because the only person she wants to make a baby with is Bette. Then they look at each other again, thinking did I just think what I thought, because they had only known each other for just a couple of month. ( Here’s the twist: they have an open relationship, Bette is seeing two other ladies, and Tina is seeing another man)
      I really hope you consider this,
      One last note, if I have the talent to write wonderful fan fics like you and all the other writers on this site . I would write forever, and write only beautiful things about the Bette and Tina’s relationship ( with a litte drama of course, for excitement)
      That’s all folks. Sorry, If this is too long.

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