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    Bedtime Stories (An Experimental Short)

    Story written on January 19, 2015 by BenMac.
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    It’s your turn. It was my turn last night. No, you forget, I finished last night’s story. You only started it. Okay, you make a point. [Pause.] All right, I have one. But you might not think it’s sensual enough. Anything you tell me is sensual. Really? Even when I told you about getting my

    It’s your turn.

    It was my turn last night.

    No, you forget, I finished last night’s story. You only started it.

    Okay, you make a point. [Pause.] All right, I have one. But you might not think it’s sensual enough.

    Anything you tell me is sensual.

    Really? Even when I told you about getting my tires rotated last week?

    [Giggle.]It was the rotation part that got me.

    Ah, you’re easy to please, I see.

    No, you please me easily.

    [Pause again.]

    So you say.

    [Yet another pause.]

    Go on. Tell me. I want to hear my bedtime story.

    We’re going to the opera.

    Eww.

    No ewws, you need to broaden your mind.

    Fine. The opera. The LA Opera House?

    No, one in Paris.

    Why Paris?

    This is my story, you need to wait.

    Sorry, go on.

    I’m in Paris on business. You’re there on vacation.

    Who am I with?

    You’re alone.

    That wouldn’t happen.

    It’s my fantasy. It happens.

    All right, your story, your fantasy.

    I call you at your hotel room. You’ve given me your itinerary, you see, hoping we could meet up.

    Ah, so it’s a clandestine meeting. And the opera. Like no one will see us there.

    You be quiet.

    Yes, ma’am.

    I tell you to put on an evening dress and I’ll pick you up at seven.

    Paris time or LA time?

    Stop being a smartass.

    [Giggle.]

    Anyway, you meet me down in the lobby and–

    Why don’t you come up to my room?

    Because I’m trying to control myself. It’s hard. You’re so beautiful.

    [Pause.]

    Thank you.

    So you come down to the lobby and we hug, a friendly but awkward hug. We haven’t seen each other in a long time. Then we walk outside to a taxi.

    We’re taking a taxi? Why not your Saab?

    My Saab’s in New York, remember? I’m on business in Paris. We’re both in Paris. Follow the story, please.

    Oh right. Okay go on.

    In the backseat of the taxi, we sit by our windows, as far as we can from each other because the temptation is so strong. But you keep smiling at me. I can’t take my eyes off of you, off your lips.

    Hmm, I lick them for you, don’t I?

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    1. This piece was something I wrote in a writer’s workshop this last summer, and the goal of the exercise was to see how much characterization a writer could communicate through dialogue rather than description and exposition. Of course, kinky me had to make it about sex. Imagine the awkwardness when the group work-shopped the pieces and we had to read them out loud! I was one very red-faced BenMac! I didn’t write it originally as a TiBette story and hadn’t planned on posting it, but I felt like celebrating. So hence the revision. Have fun reading it.

      • I loved it. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. That must have been a very interesting class and highly successful. There is a book titled “The Ladies Sewing Circle” that mentions quite a number of actresses in Hollywood that were either lesbian or bi-sexual in the heyday of Holloywood. Very interesting. This was a delightful story, very sensual and it captured the girls characteristics as we saw them on the show. As soon as I saw the first giggle, I knew who was talking when. Tina always giggles and so does sweet Laurel, apparently that is a trait of hers and was not some stage affectation by some director. Lovely. Thanks for posting. Come back when you can.

    2. Thanks for your story, you know when I read that you wrote one new story gave me joy and sadness to see, but thanks us laugh, I would like a new history of more than 100 chapters and where tub is the alpha female and bette be a pussy whipped, I would like a story of drama and comedy, and lots of love and jealousy and without men fools course! Thanks again for sharing your talent.

    3. You should have warned “not to be actually read at bedtime”. Wonderful short! Thank you for reworking it and sharing it with us, your adoring fans!

    7. I thought it was amazing and clever. I guessed w/i the first page who was who but I don’t know if clues were added so soon into the story. I thought you showed great understanding of the characters and how they would speak, what they would say. Just a delight to read. Thank you.

    8. So great to see you posting! I always let out a happy squeal. If the point was communicating characterization through dialogue, that was a very, very successful experiment. I agree with the others, feel free to experiment on us anytime you want!

    9. BM, I find it really fascinating that you can convey so much about the characters through conversations and conversations alone. Without the description of their expression and movements, the readers wonder what the situation really is, what they are doing, are they physically together, and it turns out that they were phone calls! I think this idea is brilliant! It would be something I’d like to try out sometime. You truly inspire me! Lots of Luv.

      PS I didn’t know Greta Garbo was a butch…?

      • Hey RT,
        I’ll post a photo of Garbo as Queen Christina of Sweden (a known lesbian) on twitter for you. She (a Swede) along with Dietrich (a German) and a few other actresses of their generation often cross-dressed. On top of that, their personalities were very strong and powerful. So Garbo wasn’t considered a butch as we envision them today (from Stone to Boi and all the in between) but she had a “classy” butch personality as Tina says in the story. If you think about it, Bette’s character in TLW is just like that. On the outside she’s a fem, but her personality makes her a “classy” butch in a way. That was the point Tina was trying to get across.

        Anyway, thanks for the comment. You inspire me too! I’ll send you a msg via twitter so you can see what I mean.

    11. What a treat! Though, you never disappoint, my friend. The rating should’ve been warning enough, but in my impatience (and lack of free time these days) I read this while on break at work. Wheeeeew! HOT!
      Oh, and I knew Bette was in bold print even before the Saab hint. Let’s just say, I know my Bette Porter, or maybe it’s that you write so well there’s no mistaking her or Tina.
      As always, waiting anxiously for whatever story you will gift us with next.
      xoxo, Amber

    14. Oh my sweet lovely lady..This is no regular bedtime story but when I saw my sweet BenMac posted a story I had to check it out..Been preoccupied lately so I’m late in getting here. But it was refreshing and I loved it.. *blows kiss* ; )

    16. BenMac, Thanks for your thoughtful comment on my story, Alice Surmises. I think here with your latest you’ve done a good job, no a great job, of building the tension in a love scene by prolonging it over a span of time. I have never done that in one story, but it works well, especially with those two. I’ve written love scenes with them where they’re in the moment, and one of them will flashback to a time before, and fantasize about another time in bed with each other then drift back to their present in flagrante delicto. That method works as a wonderful way to prolong the Readers’ need for a longer experience with them, however; I really like what you’ve done here with a long experience over time using a bedtime story. Interesting and creative.

      Writing love scenes, as you know is difficult. On the one hand neither of us are the kind of writers who get slurpy, a description in sex with them I find repellant. It just pops me right out of the story if I hear too much of that kind of thing. But the necessary building of tension to prolong the reader’s experience by getting into the character’s minds, or moving across their bodies through just the right amount of tactile description, AND the tricky part of inserting with perfect timing their dialogue of saying this or that arousing thing to one another – well, as you have illustrated is an exquisite way to write Bette and Tina when they are building up or exploding with their fire.

      You know what would be fun? It might confuse our readers, but maybe not, is if you ever had the time to plot out with me a One OFF short series. You write one episode, and I write the next, etc. We’ll probably never to do it, but the thought crossed my mind just now.

      All for now,
      Blackbird

    17. Phew! after so many difficulties and my request for
      sos with you yesterday, finally finished reading.
      Benmac do everything you’d like to try, with our
      Bette and Tina, I know it will work ..
      It was something totally different from what you wrote, has already
      to know who was who in the first chapter.
      Two women distance from each other and have a telephone call
      making up stories before bed with themselves. and a final
      with them together, it was beautiful and seductive at the same time with a dialogue
      wonderful without describing the movements of the body, only two
      in a telephone conversation.
      Loved !! you might as well continue with these experiences.
      Not to mention that Greta Garbo was considered one of the women
      most fascinating passado.ele century was elegance in person.
      The entire Constellation for you.

    19. and this is why I’m obsessed with you…yeah I said obsessed…wait don’t run I’m sorry…honestly I don’t think I blink one time the whole time I was reading…you’re so amazing to me it blows my mind…absolutely perfect from an absolute brilliant writer. The Best To Ever Do It!!!!

    20. I just wanted to drop in and say that I adore this story. I don’t know what it is, but I’ve read it four times lol. I’m such a sucker for a dominant Bette and sweet, loving Tina. This story is great. Thank you for writing!

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