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    Chapter 1. Scorpion

    April 2009 Malibu CA


    The sun begins to set on the horizon and brilliantly cascades over the ocean giving off a purple hue. It’s quiet except for the waves crashing on to the shore below where a man and woman are standing on a balcony above.

    “Are you going to be ok?” The man asks staring hesitantly at the woman as her gaze stayed fixed out on the horizon. Her hands resting on the railing

    After what seemed like an eternity waiting for her answer she finally speaks

    “I just had to do the hardest thing I have ever had to do in my life.  What do you think?” The woman replies stoically as if the life hand been completely drained from her

    The man sighs and taps his finger against his lips in thought for a moment

    “You knew the risks. You knew something like this could happen”

    The woman slams her hands down on the railing

    “Yes! And I was selfish and because of me this happened!….I deserve to suffer…I am responsible and I can never forgive myself for that” the woman begins to cry as the man places a comforting hand on her shoulder. Knowing it would be pointless to argue with her for her blaming herself he gently pulled her towards him

    “Come…Let’s go inside….We need to figure out what we are going to do next”

    August 2012 Downtown Los Angeles

    “I don’t know babe…I really don’t feel like going out tonight it’s late anyway..Plus I have so much work to do here and I don’t want to get behind”

    “Tina you are always at the office.  You are never home and we don’t get to spend any time together anymore..I’m trying to put in the effort but you aren’t.  I want things to go back like they were. Don’t you?”

    Tina sighs as she turns from away from her computer screen and glances out the window that overlooks the Los Angeles skyline

    “Iris babe..Can we can discuss this when I get home ok.  I do want us to get back to where we were and I’m sorry.  I will do better.. We will go out tonight ok.  But right now I really need to get back to these reports”

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    1. Hi amethyst,

      Welcome on board!

      I am always happy to read new stories and so far i am intrigued. A lot of twists and turns you said, i look forward to it.

      This is a great start. Bette and Tina met again after a few years and it seems Bette is the one who broke Tina’s heart? The woman on the balcony is Bette? This part let me think she is and that she didn’t want to leave but had no choice when something terrible happened:

      “Are you going to be ok?” The man asks staring hesitantly at the woman as her gaze stayed fixed out on the horizon. Her hands resting on the railing

      After what seemed like an eternity waiting for her answer she finally speaks

      “I just had to do the hardest thing I have ever had to do in my life. What do you think?” The woman replies stoically as if the life hand been completely drained from her

      The man sighs and taps his finger against his lips in thought for a moment

      “You knew the risks. You knew something like this could happen”

      The woman slams her hands down on the railing

      “Yes! And I was selfish and because of me this happened!….I deserve to suffer…I am responsible and I can never forgive myself for that” the woman begins to cry as the man places a comforting hand on her shoulder. Knowing it would be pointless to argue with her for her blaming herself he gently pulled her towards him”

      Is Bette a secret agent and her nickname is Scorpion and she is very good with a rifle, I’m still thinking about the link between a scorpion and a sniper.

      Bette does have people who care for her and like to tease her, the banter is funny to read.

      And Tina, in a relationship with Iris who is very much in love with her, i don’t feel that Tina is in love with her, she cares and love her but it is not the same as being in love.

      So many questions already and i know that i have to wait patiently!

    2. I believe Bibi28 summarized it pretty well…

      Tina is in a relationship with Iris which appears to have grown stale. Tina is obsessed with work and doesn’t have much time for Iris.

      Bette and Tina meet accidently at a club having known each other from the past…. This is intriguing…

      Cannot wait to see more… Not sure if I like the fact that Bette is a hired assassin. That is not a very noble profession, but this is your…. lets see where it goes…

    3. Welcome on the site!

      So, Bette are killer. Main question for whom she working. Government or some criminals?
      Tina and Bette obviously know each other from the past, and i think if it was Bette who broke Tina’s heart it was something to do with Bette’s job.
      Waiting for the next!

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