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Chapter 9
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Chapter 9
The Planet, Alice, Shane and Dana sit at a table having coffee and waiting for Bette to join them.
(Alice) So, I have a name…
Alice holds up a piece of paper proudly.
(Alice) And a cell number
She places the piece of paper on the table triumphantly. Shane picks it up and examines it, and then hands it to Dana.
(Dana) Tina Kennard
She looks at Alice, impressed.
(Dana) Good work
Alice smiles.
(Dana) Will you give it to her now?
(Alice) No I’m going to wait until after her opening next week. She’s so stressed and focused on that, I figure this can be a nice surprise on the other side
Shane takes a sip of coffee and then looks over at Alice.
(Shane) Nice job Al. Though what’s the plan here?
(Alice frowns) What do you mean? Give it to Bette. That’s the plan
(Shane smiles) Well ok, but if Tina didn’t want anything more when they left Majorca, why do we think now will be any different?
(Alice) Because it’s Bette fucking Porter we’re talking about
Shane and Dana smile at her.
(Alice) Tina will have come around, I’m sure. And anyway I can’t stand another day of this sad, moping excuse for a fucking…
(Dana) Bette!
(Shane) Hey, Bette!
Dana and Shane both look past Alice with broad smiles on their faces as Bette arrives and stands behind Alice, eyeing them all suspiciously. She watches Alice not so subtly slide a piece of paper from the table and place it in her purse.
Bette takes a seat next to her after a moment and picks up a menu.
(Bette) Whatever you lot are plotting please just leave me out of it
Alice smiles over at her.
(Alice) No problem
The waitress brings over a coffee for Bette and takes their breakfast orders. Alice looks Bette up and down while she orders and then speaks to her once the waitress has moved away.
(Alice) Is it just me or do you look particularly done up today?
(Bette) I shouldn’t take that as a reflection on how I usually look?
(Alice) Ah, no. You always look fabulous, but there is something about today, isn’t there? Am I wrong?
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I love this story sooo much!!!
Bravo!!
WTF, Tina. I am so heartbroken. Bette deserved better. I’m a huge fan of Tina, but this chapter kicked me in the stomach.
I WASNT xpecting all the lying from Tina. And now it makes me wonder what Helena might be it to.
Tina & Andrew having to book all a sudden will be a chall for Tina. Her hetero-planned life may not be as gleeful as she thinks.
Andrew gonna be real busy as a prospective Govenor. Lots of beautiful ladies in his path . . . .
Well, I knew that for Tina, there was someone back home… but I did not realize that back home was LA nor did I ever suspect that someone would be man. And I am like Bette – a woman traveling alone to a well known lesbian destination would more than likely not be a heterosexual. But after a verbal confirmation that she was gay? Well, I would have had a huge kick in the gut too if I were Bette. And now as they say in the good ole days: The plot thickens. The attraction is still very much there and Bette’s new buisness partner is engaged to the woman whom you are truly smitten with… Tina Kinnard….. All are public figures and one is a political figure on his way to the Governor’s office. And so the likelihood of Bette and Tina being just casual acquaintances is not very high. And now that Alice knows… Helena will soon know…. Shane will know… and the moral of the story: There is no such thing as a secret.
Wow, Tina lied about everything? Damn, what a gut punch! Let’s see how long that works for her. I believe that their chemistry will overcome this little heteroblend comfort zone. PPS
Hmmm… Some details about their time in Majorca makes sense now. Tina not taking any photos, how she was captivated by their visit to a museum on law and politics, that phone call she made in private before they had dinner in a place where another woman hit on Bette and the strange fact that they didn’t even exchange details, not even surnames. Maybe Tina went on that holiday to get all that gay feelings out of her system before she gets married. But then she met Bette. She lied about some stuff but I think she’s in complete denial of her true feelings for Bette. Poor Bette though. The dream vacation, holiday romance she had has turned into a fantasy she must now try to forget.
I have a few questions, katynd: Will Bette fight for her feelings for Tina and confront her on her true feelings for her too? Their holiday romance was all on Tina’s terms; Bette just went along with it. Will Bette just let this go without a fight? And what’s the significance of Helena in this story? Does she know that Tina’s in the closet or was she surprised by the mention of Bette’s name? Hmmm… Very intriguing and well-written as always, katynd! Many thanks again for writing and sharing this lovely story! I can’t wait to read the next chapter! :D
I hope you are getting some answers to these as the story goes on Mightymouse :)
Thanks for reading and for your supportive comments! katynd
Wow!! This turn of events took me and I guess everyone completely by surprise. Well done!!! Nicely setup. Can’t wait to see where you will take us. Love this story!!