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Choose Me—Chapter 1
Bette’s POV
I am currently standing at the entrance to the country club where my best friend is currently having her engagement party and I’m dreading this with every ounce of my being. I don’t know how I’m going to make it through this because you see I’m in love with my best friend and have been since we were 15. We are 23 now and I never confessed my feelings to her because she never took an interest in girls and has always dated boys and of course is now engaged to a man . I came out to her our sophomore year in high school and being the kind, considerate and compassionate soul she is she pulled me into a hug and said she was proud of me and would always be my best friend and nothing would change that. I wanted to tell her I had feelings for her then but of course I didn’t because she was always going on about this boy and that boy and she seemed genuinely happy and never let on that she was even interested in me much less another girl. So…I have kept quiet…And she is the reason I can’t make any relationship work. I’m always comparing them to her and the simply fact is…they will never be her…The only person that knows about my feelings is currently the person poking me incessantly in the ribs…My annoying little sister Laura.
“Bette go!…Quit standing like a statue and go inside already” she prods me again with her finger
I slap her finger away from my rib “I swear Laura if you don’t stop that shit”
“Quit being a pussy” she grumbles
Did I mention my sister is blunt and says anything without caring when it comes out or how it sounds coming out. I’m more reserved than her but I guess being 2 years older I do need to have a better level of maturity which thankfully I do.
“Fine. Let’s go…I’ll say my congrats and then we go to Mason’s” I say ready to down as many fucking shots as I can consume without needing a liver transplant in the morning
“Sounds like a plan sis” she says linking her arm with mine. My sister is a pain in the ass but I wouldn’t be where I am without her. She is my rock and my sounding board and I’m grateful she is helping me through this
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AReader says
I love bumpy Tibette stories. Im gonna follow this story till the end.
Rayne says
Thanks!..I appreciate it!
Escorpion2494 says
Hola me gusta esta historia veremos qué decide Tina si casarse o darse la oportunidad de ser feliz con Bette.
Rayne says
¡Gracias! .. Creo que Tina tomará la decisión correcta al final
Bibi28 says
I would love to read this story but only if am sure you are going to finish it.
Rayne says
I completely understand that Bibi. There are a lot of unfinished stories on here and I’m sure the authors never intend to leave them unfinished as I have done this as well but since I couldn’t get into my other account for a long time I wanted to finish them but decided not too and refocused on new stories so this is where I am at… So if you don’t want to invest your time I completely understand but I do hope you follow.
I appreciate your comment and hope you follow. I am invested in my two stories and plan to complete them
Jane says
I strongly agree with Bibi. So many good stories have had untimely deaths which have left me and others extremely disappointed. I know about writers block but if the writer can’t finish the story perhaps it should be deleted. They’re no different than the cliffhanger that Marja left us on the show. I am hesitant to invest myself in a story that leaves me at a precipice. I won’t name them but I don’t understand why the writers start a new story but do not finish the story that have already put out here.. it boggles my mind. Strange thing is that they put “tbc” at the end of a chapter but it never happens. All I want is closure in one form or another. Thank you for hearing me out.
Rayne says
Jane I completely agree with you. As readers it is frustrating and as far as authors lives can happen but yes if I story does not intend to be completed then it should be taken down as not to give the reader hope it will be continued.
I guess I can only say as an author I want to complete the two stories I have going. And it is my goal to do that. I did not finish my others and took them off because it was hard to put my head back to them and I did delete them. I do not intend to bring those back.
Thank you for your comment and expressing your feelings on the matter. Hopefully you will read mine once they are complete. And that goes for anyone that wants to wait until they see a final chapter. I have no problem with that….But I also welcome feedback if you would like to contribute
Thank you Jane!
Bibi28 says
Hey Rayne,
Thank you so much for your response. I will follow both of your stories. But i will try to read them up this weekend.
Westy20 says
Love it already. Please continue.
I enjoy all your stories.
Rayne says
Thank you so much Westy20!