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Friday Night at the Club (Time of Day 17)
The woman motioned to her, and Tina set her beer down. “I’m going dancing,” she announced, walking over to meet the redhead.
The two went out on the dance floor.
At first Tina found it disconcerting, to be in the midst of so many women, and dancing so close to a virtual stranger.
She used to love going out dancing with Bette. Knowing that wherever they went, that she was with Bette. She could be close to Bette, and Bette would keep her safe.
Now, here she was, dancing with a stranger. That wasn’t she same. She didn’t know this woman, didn’t know her moves. Didn’t feel the same feelings for this woman.
She saw Shane and Paige who were not far from her on the floor and envied them, envied their closeness. Their trust in each other here, amidst this sea of strangers.
The beats were good, though. Getting into the feeling, Tina just let herself enjoy the moment, and not let herself regret what was not happening that night.
As she and the redhead were dancing, a third woman, shorter with black spiked hair, approached, carrying a beer. Tina gave a shrug to her dancing partner, and accepted the beer, finding herself now dancing with the new woman.
With the beer and the music, the chance to dance gave Tina a sense of freedom. She was in the moment, not worrying about tomorrow or thinking about yesterday. She found herself dancing with a string of women; sometimes more than one at a time which did make for some interesting maneuvering. Some of the women she was dancing with were getting a little close, perhaps, but Tina had no problem asserting herself if she felt they were crossing a line.
This was the type of night she’d rarely had before. She was out with women, ostensibly available, and not trying to be anyone. She wasn’t Bette’s partner, Bette’s ex, Helena’s girlfriend. She was enjoying this feeling of independence and of self.
With the non-stop dancing and the ever-present beer, though, she was also beginning to feel too hot and a little tired. At a break in the music she excused herself from her current partner, a woman she probably couldn’t pick out of a crowd if asked a minute or so later, and headed back towards her friends.
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bettyvhall says
Bette is still so in love with Tina. The need to communicate and not in the bed They know they are good there, To talk. thanks
ririn1013 says
thanks for including the kiss. pps.
ecstasythrumusic says
Pseud its okay to be a lil confused.Loved the chapter I was hoping that Bette would follow her.Great job as usual. PPS.
brazilian_bossanova says
Love your writing! :) PPS!
albeez says
hopefully shes not drunk. that was great and yes you are a great writer. thanks.
ut says
Thats awesome!
Speed_Racer says
Well that kiss is interesting. Hopefully Bette isn’t drunk and she knows what she’s doing. Tina’s getting out there and getting meat tagged is great. Shows Bette what she’s missing. Hence the kiss. Hopefully a drunk Alice set Bette straight. As always I enjoy this. Great stuff. Thanks.
strgrllvslwrd says
Never ever say your bad!!!! It was just a little error. We forgive you and still love your writing.
funnyone says
See what happens when real communication takes place? Yippee!
azmama says
I love your writing. They have a chance.
funnyone says
And pseud, you’re not a bad writer, just a little confused.
Nanc says
Never worry, pseud. Do whatever you like with the timeline; your story, your rules!
akalittlered says
I love your writing!!!! This is so great. I hope Alice let Bette have it when Tina walked away. I am glad they talk. Tina and Bette have a chance together now I hope. Thanks PPS
jp22 says
The three words “Bad” and “writing” and “pseud” do not go together, in any way, shape or form, so let’s hear none of that. This chapter was on a par with everything else you’ve posted, and I quite enjoyed it. Now, I hope that kiss was borne out of Bette needing her actions to speak louder than what she’s been afraid to say, and it’s not just the jealousy (the presence of which speaks volumes anyway). Great stuff, pseud, thanks.
Lamentamini says
I picked up on that blip in the last chapter but chalked it up to creative liberty or whatever it’s called. I’ve seen worse mistakes. I figured Bette would show up, but I wasn’t expecting that kiss! PPS
Rau says
oh yes