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    Get The Girl—Chapter 4: Bowling and Serious Talk

    I chuckle at that earning me a  glare

    “What’s so funny?” She hisses crinkling her brow…God she’s cute when she’s annoyed

    “Nothing..Relax ok..Got it covered” I assure her as the man comes back with our shoes

    “I need a pair of socks also” I tell the guy

    He nods and reaches below the counter pulling out a single packaged pair of socks

    “1.50” he says.

    I give him the exact change and grab the socks and shoes handing Tina’s pair to her

    “Y’all are on Lane 7”

    I nod as we make our way to our assigned lane.  We sit down at the bench and I immediately hand the socks to Tina

    “These socks aren’t the most comfortable in the world but they’ll do”

    “Thank you” she smiles and shakes her head chuckling “I can’t believe we are doing this”

    I smile “Well..You want Alyssa right?”

    She nods enthusiastically

    “So this is her favorite thing to do…It always has been and she’s very good.  Although my bowling average was higher than hers before I..uhm..left” I trail off and quickly change the subject “..Anyway..Now we have to pick out a bowling ball” I announce standing up and wait for her to tie her shoes

    “These feel slippery” she says sliding her feet back and forth on the floor as she stands up

    I chuckle “They’re supposed to be…You can’t have resistance in your feet when you are in the motion to release the ball..I’ll show all that in a bit.. but follow me first” I motion to her to follow over to the racks where the bowling balls are sitting.. Tina immediately sets her eyes on a particular one

    “Oh a pretty pink one …Can I use that one?” She excitedly points

    I smirk as I eye the pink bowling bowling ball and see that it’s 10lbs..I grab it off the rack and turn the ball so the holes were facing her..”Stick your middle and ring fingers in the top two holes and your thumb in the bottom one” I instruct her

    She eyes it warily but does as I tell her and she giggles then looks up at me

    “Fingers in holes huh” she says giggling again

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    1. I am enjoying this story…. but oh what a mess. No one has a straight forward relationship with anyone else. Everyone has someone they like but isn’t available. I am sorry that Bette is still having pain from her injuries. I do hope that some of that will heal as time goes on. I understand her fear that her scars might be repugnant to others, but her fear is not keeping her safe or comforted. This is something Bette is going to have to work through or she needs to get some counseling on. Everyone has body issues and some are worse than others. But when someone cares for you or falls in love with you, they accept you for who you are: flaws and all. Bette has a beautiful personality and a lovely charm and a scarred body. She is going to be a very lonely person if she allows her past and these scars to keep her from her from the future possibilities of her life…..

      As to Alyssa? A senior in high school forced by her parents to date another girl to assist the merger of two businesses? That’s the sort of thing that royal families did in the middle ages. Arrange marriages and relationships between families to enhance the bank account. Oh well…. got to see where this goes.

      Keep it going…. thank you for the chapter.

    2. A truly good story!

      This is a mess like Martha already pointed out.

      I love what Bette does for Tina despite her own feelings for Tina. And Tina is so in denial about her feelings towards Bette, unfortunately also because she now only has one wish and that is Alyssa, her first crush. But she’s a sweetheart to point out to Alyssa that there’s a reason Bette shuts herself off from everyone. If anyone brings Bette and Alyssa together as friends, it’s Tina.

      I feel so bad for Alyssa that she is forced to be with someone because of a corporate business, the merging between her fathers and Holly’s companies. That must be really terrible.

      And poor Bette, so insecure because of the severe burns she has suffered and so much pain, even though her nerves may start working again, the scars on her body and mind will never go away. Perhaps with therapy, the trauma of what happened to her will become more bearable, but it will never go away completely.

      I’m very curious how this will all go.

    3. Boy, such a tough plot to resolve with Bette’s scars needing time to heal, yet her emotions/hormones being so active when she’s near Tina.

      U’ve really taken on a literary challenge. But keep goin’ as we come along with ya!!

    4. Love your story, hope you post soon. I like all the twists and turn… our heart takes us on a ride sometimes with out a clear path and at this age can be extra confusing.
      And it has a feel of a mobster world first Bette and her step dad now Alyssa’s dad. Just has that feel but i like. Thank you

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