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    It’s my fault…

    PRESENT Vinton, VA- November 4, 2009: Wednesday

    AJ sat in the back of the café, the entire back end to herself. The large table filled with opened dusty files and an old laptop.

    “What’s this?” Bette asked, holding two cups of coffee as she interrupted the blonde’s thoughts.

    Smiling, she accepted the peace offering, “the files of the case.”

    “Tina’s?”

    AJ shook her head, “the past case-the one we were working on before she was kidnapped.”

    “April 1997?” Bette asked, looking at the messy files scattered over the table.

    AJ nodded, smelling the coffee, “I’m just hoping something comes out of these that we didn’t think of years ago.”

    “What was the case about?” The gallery owner asked, looking at a picture of a medical examiner’s report on the laptop.

    “Seven women disappeared in 7 months,” AJ said, looking at Bette. “First victim was Beth Windsor, a psychiatrist at a large clinic in Boston. She was in the D.C. area attending a conference when she was kidnapped.”

    “Where?”

    “On the way back to her hotel. She called a car service-the car she got in wasn’t the one she was supposed to.”

    Bette nodded as she stared at the picture of the blonde woman, “were you able to trace the car?”

    AJ nodded, “it was caught on fire by the time we got to it.”

    “So, no DNA,” Bette mumbled, taking a sip of her black coffee.

    “Nope, and the car was stolen so we couldn’t trace it to the UnSub,” AJ confirmed. “She was tortured for hours on end: bludgeoned, burned, sliced, carved, strangled, electrocuted…” the profiler listed off the techniques used. “Second victim, Victoria Tyler- a neurosurgeon at MedStar Georgetown University Hospital.”

    Bette turned to look at a picture of a brunette woman with glasses. Tilting her head, she looked at the next picture of her lying flat down in the field.

    “No DNA,” AJ said, handing Bette the report. “She was taken from her home.”

    “Like Tina?”

    AJ nodded, “less security than Tina’s place-but it isn’t that hard to unpick a lock.”

    “That’s how he got in? Picked a simple lock?” Bette asked stunned. “How did he know the time?”

    “He surveillance his targets,” AJ answered, staring off in the distance. “He would spend approximately 2 to 3 weeks watching them; understanding their routines, behaviors.”

    Comments

    1. So good but difficult to read!

      Please post again soon !

      I like the new characters and their input into the story.

      I would love Bette to get stronger and smarter.

      Thanks for the post more please
      SG

    2. It’s difficult 😔 for me to fathom the extent of heinous evil
      this psycho inflicts on his victims! I hope this ends soon, with
      proper retribution against this sicko in a ghastly and very
      painful manner! It is just too difficult to read about our heroes and heroines being slaughtered. Yes, this is fiction; however, it is
      uncomfortably close to the reality of today’s criminal world revealed daily on our TV screens. I think this speaks well of
      your crime writing abilities/talent, but I am hopeful that, unlike
      some real life outcomes, this story will conclude with the “good”
      guys rousing victory. Especially for Tina, Bette and all the BAU
      family, and without mental/emotional scarring for the remainder
      of their lives; which is what this insane perpetrator seems to want.
      Thanks for another riveting chapter, Kylie. Eagerly awaiting your next post.

    3. So many tortured with unmeasurable cruelty just to break one person???

      So how did FuckShit get access to Jenny’s iPhone video?

      How is it that the Team is unable to get even a single step ahead of this Demon?

      What is the purpose of everyone dying a torturous death?

    4. This was so hard to read. I wanted to enjoy the new characters but I felt something bad was going to happen so I wouldn’t allow myself that joy. I just can’t understand how someone can be so vile! I know there are people like the unsub and I am so grateful for professionals that make finding them their life’s work. They just scare me!…

    5. Finally was able to catch up on this chapter and just wow. I feel completely torn myself. What a complete nightmare! I hope this UnSub dies a VERY slow and painful death in this story since its fiction.

      Thanks again and PPS!

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