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    It’s my fault…

    “How did you get the time frame?” Bette asked, confused.

    “Well,” AJ shrugged, “one victim each month- each was tortured for approximately a week based on the wounds, dehydration and starvation. They were always reported missing in the middle of the month.”

    Bette nodded, biting her lower lip “how did she die?- Victoria?”

    “It’s difficult to tell,” AJ said looking at the photo of the body, “she also was bludgeoned, burned, carved, and electrocuted…”

    “Not strangled?” Bette asked, looking closely at the neck of the body.

    AJ shook her head, “it seemed to be a pattern, each victim appeared to be less tortured than the next, but all consisted of a carving.”

    Bette noticed the etching of symbols on the woman’s chest, “what does it mean?”

    “We don’t know,” AJ shrugged before laying another photo out. “Third victim, Alyssa Middleton, she was a defense attorney. Fourth victim was Monica Garrett, a professor at Howard University. Fifth victim was Claire Hayden- a homicide detective at the 12th, Sixth victim was Brenda Densier- a sociological researcher at Georgetown, seventh victim was Taylor Stewart- the head financial advisor for Brown Software.”

    “All top-notch jobs…” Bette said, realizing the profession denominator between all the victims.

    “Eighth victim…” AJ whispered, “Christina Kennard- a Supervisory Special Agent with the Elite Behavioral Analysis Unit.”

    “Was he watching her the whole time you guys were on the case?” Bette asked softly.

    AJ nodded, “he would taunt us-send us pictures and what-not of Tina. We tried to hold multiple press releases to try and see if we could spot a man with a camera-but nothing. Tina was stubborn as always and said not to worry about her and to focus on the victims that are dead.”

    Bette swallowed hard, “is there any pictures of what happened to her?”

    AJ shook her head, “Kenny had all the original files. Delia and Will had the others, but they took them with them when they left… there really wasn’t much to go off of because Ken didn’t tell us a lot.”

    Bette nodded and took a deep breath, “so Greyson is right?”

    AJ cocked her brow at Bette, “what do you mean?”

    “He said something about how he thinks the UnSub doesn’t want to kill her- but destroy her psychologically.”


    1. So good but difficult to read!

      Please post again soon !

      I like the new characters and their input into the story.

      I would love Bette to get stronger and smarter.

      Thanks for the post more please

    2. It’s difficult 😔 for me to fathom the extent of heinous evil
      this psycho inflicts on his victims! I hope this ends soon, with
      proper retribution against this sicko in a ghastly and very
      painful manner! It is just too difficult to read about our heroes and heroines being slaughtered. Yes, this is fiction; however, it is
      uncomfortably close to the reality of today’s criminal world revealed daily on our TV screens. I think this speaks well of
      your crime writing abilities/talent, but I am hopeful that, unlike
      some real life outcomes, this story will conclude with the “good”
      guys rousing victory. Especially for Tina, Bette and all the BAU
      family, and without mental/emotional scarring for the remainder
      of their lives; which is what this insane perpetrator seems to want.
      Thanks for another riveting chapter, Kylie. Eagerly awaiting your next post.

    3. So many tortured with unmeasurable cruelty just to break one person???

      So how did FuckShit get access to Jenny’s iPhone video?

      How is it that the Team is unable to get even a single step ahead of this Demon?

      What is the purpose of everyone dying a torturous death?

    4. This was so hard to read. I wanted to enjoy the new characters but I felt something bad was going to happen so I wouldn’t allow myself that joy. I just can’t understand how someone can be so vile! I know there are people like the unsub and I am so grateful for professionals that make finding them their life’s work. They just scare me!…

    5. Finally was able to catch up on this chapter and just wow. I feel completely torn myself. What a complete nightmare! I hope this UnSub dies a VERY slow and painful death in this story since its fiction.

      Thanks again and PPS!

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