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    That Was Close

    “It’s Bette…” Tina whispered, looking closely at the phone. “When was this taken?”

    Will squinted his eyes to look closer, “looks like our motel in Coleman Falls.”

    Tina looked up at Will with slightly wide eyes when the phone began buzzing again. Opening up the new message,

    Meet, NOW.

    745 State Road

    Vinton

    Your game begins.

     

    Vinton, VA, November 2, 2009- Monday Night

    The slam of the car doors echoed through the darkness of the field.

    “You know-this is how every single horror story begins,” Delia whispered, walking towards Tina and looking at the semi-abandoned building.

    Tina looked at the building, shaking her head. “It is the beginning.”

    “We goin’?” Will asked, walking to stand beside Delia.

    “Yeah, just hold on a sec,” Tina said, taking out one of her many prepaid cellphones. Opening up a text message, she typed Bette’s number into the bar.

    “What are you gonna tell her?” Delia asked, tightening her jacket around her torso.

    Tina bit her lower lip, “she should have gone back to L.A.”

    “You think she would have stayed there if she tried to call you and you didn’t pick up?” Will asked, arching his brows. “I know if my girlfriend didn’t answer my phone calls after a couple of days, I’d start to get suspicious.”

    Tina pursed her lips and stared down at the bright screen. Taking a deep breath, she began to type:

    Watch your back

    Tina xx

    “That’s all?” Delia asked, watching the blonde flip the phone shut and toss it in the street.

    “She’s smart,” Tina mumbled, beginning to walk towards the abandoned factory. “She isn’t useless- she’ll take the warning and act accordingly.”

    Will nodded, “she seems tough.”

    “She is,” Tina smiled, “but there are different degrees and subgroups of toughness. When it comes to me and Angie, she would do anything. She is intelligent and tough when it comes to her business-but this,” the blonde gestured towards the building, “this doesn’t fit her.”

    “Does she know the real reason you decided to pursue law enforcement as opposed to going towards your second major?” Delia asked, climbing over a small railing. “Because it damn well didn’t just have to do with your parents.”

    Tina shook her head, “I don’t necessarily like to discuss my childhood trauma openly.”

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    Comments

    1. Dr. A says

      You, m’lady, are one helluva writer!! I just know that you have all of us readers perched on the edge of our seats awaiting the next chapter of this thriller!! I also believe we (your fans) want to see this evil, deranged, monster eradicated in the most painful manner possible, ASAP, ending his horrific reign of terror. Please keep our beloved Tina 😘 and all those she loves, safe and unharmed! As you can see, I am really into this exciting tale of suspense and mystery. I do have unanswered questions at this point. What video is Bette afraid for Tina to see? Does the depraved killer have an accomplice in collecting all this private personal information? Why does Tina continue to follow his instructions and fall into his traps when she is aware of his MO and likely outcome of doing so? How did he get close enough to kill, so horrendously, her former lovers? How did he escape his incarceration to renew his seriously pathologic ways?

      • Kylie says

        First, thank you for the comment :) must appreciated.
        1. The video of Bette and Kelly is the tape.
        2. it’s mentioned that there are a few more people than just him.
        3. Tina does remember a few things that have happened in the past, but she also remembers who was hurt as a result. The UnSub’s MO has changed- instead of threats, he has proven that he will harm.
        4. We’ll just have to see ;)
        5. It wasn’t mentioned that he was incarcerated- it was just a thought to explain why he waited so long.

        Glad you’re enjoying the story!
        -Kylie

    2. OneStorm1 says

      Wow, this guy is a lunatic. How can he keep coming so close to all those that Tina loves? I’m beginning to think he is someone in the bureau. How else can he know so much about Tina and her life, unless he has cameras all over her home, office, and has someone following her 24/7. I am just too confused. This is brutal, but I still can’t wait to see what happens next. I hope no one is hurt too badly and Bette and Tina make it through this fresh new hell. Please post soon.

    3. JBLH says

      So many questions but I know in time they’ll be answered!!! This guy is all kinds of messed up and it’s interesting that he still gives a ‘way out’ for each of his little games. Makes you really wonder what Tina endured the first time!

      Thanks again Kylie and PPS!!

    4. Bibi28 says

      Oh god Kylie, this is such a incredible story!!!

      How is it possible that man knows so much about Tina and her friends, family ? Like OneStorm1 said, there must be a insider.

      I am looking forward to the next chapter!

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