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    That Was Close

    Tina watched as the raven-haired woman disappeared before clutching onto her jacket. Walking down the cold concrete hallway, she came to an open dark room.

    Seeing the flashing red exit sign, she went towards it. Digging her heels into the floor, she pulled the door handle-but it didn’t budge.

    “Fuck,” she whispered before the sparkling object caught her eyes once again. “What the fuck is that?”

    Walking towards the complete darkness, she couldn’t see anything in front of her besides the gleaming object.

    “Honey, where are you taking me?” A familiar voice echoed through the room, making Tina stop in her tracks and break out in goosebumps.

    “Just follow me,” a very familiar voice said afterwards.

    Tina turned around to see a TV pop on, playing an old video recording.

    “Kenny!” the male voice said, laughing as a younger Tina dragged him towards the park. “AJ, what’s going on?”

    “Jason, would you just hold on for a few seconds,” a younger AJ said through the videotape.

    “Yeah,” the camera panned towards a 22-year-old Tina. “Calm the hell down or you’re not getting your birthday present.”

    “I’m looking at my birthday present,” Jason smiled, pulling a young Tina into his arms.

    Younger Tina rolled her eyes and gave him a peck on the lips, “stay and no peeking.”

    Jason laughed and nodded as he closed his eyes while a younger Tina disappeared behind a tree, “you better not scare me.”

    “Shut up!” a young Tina laughed as she came towards him holding something in her hands. “Open.”

    Jason opened his eyes to see a small German Shephard in the blonde’s arms, “holy shi-you didn’t?” he smiled as he looked down at the puppy.

    Tina nodded and rubbed the dog’s ear, “you like him?”

    Jason laughed and nodded as he opened his arms for the dog to jump into them, “I can’t believe you go me a dog!”

    A young Tina shrugged, “you happy?”

    Jason smiled again and nodded, bending down to kiss young Tina, “Thank you, I love you.”

    “I love you, too” young Tina smiled back and wrapped her arms around his waist. “AJ-you can turn the camera off now.”

    “Yeah-yeah,” young AJ laughed as the TV screen went to static.

    Tina stood still as she stared at the now black and white buzzing screen-her heart beating rapidly.

    Comments

    1. Dr. A says

      You, m’lady, are one helluva writer!! I just know that you have all of us readers perched on the edge of our seats awaiting the next chapter of this thriller!! I also believe we (your fans) want to see this evil, deranged, monster eradicated in the most painful manner possible, ASAP, ending his horrific reign of terror. Please keep our beloved Tina 😘 and all those she loves, safe and unharmed! As you can see, I am really into this exciting tale of suspense and mystery. I do have unanswered questions at this point. What video is Bette afraid for Tina to see? Does the depraved killer have an accomplice in collecting all this private personal information? Why does Tina continue to follow his instructions and fall into his traps when she is aware of his MO and likely outcome of doing so? How did he get close enough to kill, so horrendously, her former lovers? How did he escape his incarceration to renew his seriously pathologic ways?

      • Kylie says

        First, thank you for the comment :) must appreciated.
        1. The video of Bette and Kelly is the tape.
        2. it’s mentioned that there are a few more people than just him.
        3. Tina does remember a few things that have happened in the past, but she also remembers who was hurt as a result. The UnSub’s MO has changed- instead of threats, he has proven that he will harm.
        4. We’ll just have to see ;)
        5. It wasn’t mentioned that he was incarcerated- it was just a thought to explain why he waited so long.

        Glad you’re enjoying the story!
        -Kylie

    2. OneStorm1 says

      Wow, this guy is a lunatic. How can he keep coming so close to all those that Tina loves? I’m beginning to think he is someone in the bureau. How else can he know so much about Tina and her life, unless he has cameras all over her home, office, and has someone following her 24/7. I am just too confused. This is brutal, but I still can’t wait to see what happens next. I hope no one is hurt too badly and Bette and Tina make it through this fresh new hell. Please post soon.

    3. JBLH says

      So many questions but I know in time they’ll be answered!!! This guy is all kinds of messed up and it’s interesting that he still gives a ‘way out’ for each of his little games. Makes you really wonder what Tina endured the first time!

      Thanks again Kylie and PPS!!

    4. Bibi28 says

      Oh god Kylie, this is such a incredible story!!!

      How is it possible that man knows so much about Tina and her friends, family ? Like OneStorm1 said, there must be a insider.

      I am looking forward to the next chapter!

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