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    The Most Distance Course

    “Don’t get me wrong, I’m not a creepy voodooist or vampire, this is not my type, I often use some mild method, such as…the paintings you gave to Bette.”

    Horror starts to leak out Tina’s emotionless eyes, Bette’s body shakes a bit, not obvious but enough for Adele to see.

    Adele smile out of victory.

    Those paintings…those paintings are like Tina’s vision, a part of her, they have such meaning and speak to her soul, it indicates her memories, her feeling, and her core. Her only faithful friends when she’s alone in the foster care, it will kill Tina if any piece of it being destroyed. And the only people who know this secret, is Bette and Shane.

    “Everybody has a weak spot, even you, Tina Kennard, all I need to do is ask what it is and where is it.” Adele looks at Shane, slowly pulls down the tap on her mouth. “And I got my first answer.”

    “Tina, I’m so sorry, I didn’t mean to—”

    “Shh…quiet,” Adele put her finger on Shane’s lips. “I’ll tell you when it’s your time to talk.”

    “Stop it.” Tina whispers.

    “The funny thing is,” Adele raises her hand, Kelly quickly hands her a picture frame, it’s Tina’s favorite painting, the beautiful work she introduced to Bette the night she came. “I’d already known your precious works right before Shane told me, ironic, isn’t it, looks like Shane is not as loyal as the reputation said.”

    “Take your dirty hand off my painting!” Tina is outraged, she’s slowly losing control.

    Adele shakes her head, pretending to be carefully observing the painting, she’s provoking Tina, peeling off her armors, slowly, gently, using the cruelest way to crush her. Apparently, it is working.

    “Relax, I won’t stain my hand for a broken painting, but I have to say it looks really good though, well done Kennard, I’ll keep it.”

    Bette nervously watches Adele playing with the picture frame, she is so afraid that the painting will drop any second. Bette likes that one, as much as she likes Tina, she will do anything to make sure that piece of great work remains no harm.

    “I know, I know what you thinking, you must be wondering, this painting was hanging on your wall in your house, how come a high school student got it so easily? I presume your high IQ should think of it already, isn’t it?”

    Comments

    1. Jane says

      Where were the teachers and school officials during this violent debacle on school property? I went to a tough school in NYC and fights like this were always broken up with people being suspended and expelled.

    2. Zhenya says

      Hi! I must say i don’t even know what to say about this chapter.

      I write earlier that i don’t like this Bette – well now i think this character not even human. Maybe trash and her future definitely to hook up with another trash like Adele, Kelly or Alice. Funny thing – i don’t think even if they all say that Bette”brain” of “GC” it’s true. Only one member of them has brain – and it’s Adele. And Kelly, Alice and Bette – just stupid, spoiled her pets without own opinion. I don’t buy any exuise for Bette to not protect Tina AGAIN (ha-ha Alice stopped her – it’s bullshit, Bette just too scared) or even worse – to give Tina’s painting to Adele (yes Bette if you think that you don’t want “friendship” witn Tina – you achive the goal)

      On this site there are some stories where even i, who loves Tibette, don’t want them together. Because authors made them to different or they to much hurt each other and abysm between them where to big. Your story is definitely one of them.
      I don’t think that Tina might trust this Bette ever again after this. And i don’t think that this Bette deserves something good in her life.

    3. Bibi28 says

      I can only 😭😭😭 and be intense 😡😡😡

      What a mess, Bette, i am so disappointed and mad at you, you broke your promise to Tina and with that the little trust Tina had in people, in you!!!

      CJ,It will be interesting to see how you are going to clean up the mess they are all in.

    4. proteonomics says

      Hi CJ:

      Hard chapter, but unfortunately, I have seen these type of things in real life, when we were teenagers, sometimes our own friends gave us away, because of fear; in real life, sometimes children and even teens are cruel, because of the lack of maturity and commitment.

      I’m also amazed by the absence of teachers and guardians in the restaurant, not even the cooks and other employees went out looking for the teachers; I have seen a little resemblance to this scenario in other countries in very few schools, it was a long time ago, but not in the USA (the total absence of teachers in student’s conflict); but I think the only explanation is that Adele has terrified all students and employees in the restaurant and they are too scared to call the professors.

      Well, it looks like it wasn’t Bette the only one who betrayed Tina, it was also Shane, she confessed things to Adele, about Tina’s paintings, (perhaps about Tina giving Bette some of them), that is why she apologized with Tina when Adele removed the tape on her lips (if I didn’t misread).

      Shane did it because she was physically tortured, Bette, because of emotional manipulation, immaturity and lack of commitment; I said to myself that I couldn’t do that, but I was never in that situation, so I can’t judge but only feel pity for Tina and anger for Bette.

      As Bibi, I want to see how you are going to take them all from this mess.

      P

    5. Pie says

      Hi CJH! I am trying to go back and read all of these stories that have been posted lately and slowly making my way to comment. I must say that this story has involved into a quite a conundrum for Bette and Tina.. I for one have seen this type of bullying and evilness from teens in high school. And it’s not out of the realm that the school faculty and staff turn a blind eye if they are influenced by prominent parents of those bullies. With that being said, I like the others that have commented will wait and see how Bette digs herself out of this hole she has created with Tina. Thanks!

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