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    Three Cheers Private!!! Sequel to What have I done? Chapter 59

    Chapter 59

    “Ok Jake – my MAIN MAN! You ready to go strutt your stuff? Time to go surfing!!!!!!!!” Jake danced in circles around Bette. Truth be told – she was as excited as he was to get out into the pool and show off! Bette bent down and put Jake’s life jacket on him. “Ok Jake – let’s hit the waves! Oh…and buddy…let’s do our best to torment the guests! If we do – you KNOW what that means for me don’t you?” Here Bette was expecting Jake to answer her again. “Well Jake – it means FUN for me later! So let’s find someone to pick on!” Jake did one final HAPPY DANCE around Bette’s legs and then headed out the door. Bette followed – surf board in hand!

    When they reached the pool, Bette noticed that Alice and Dana were in it. They were close together – dangerously close together! ‘Hot damn!’ Bette thought as she looked at them in the pool. Bette’s opportunity to be REALLY bad stood before her – and there was no way in ***** she was going to pass up this fine opportunity!!!!!!!

    “So hippy – you doin’ the nasty in our pool? You’re looking mighty hot and bothered right now – how about a cold shower – it’ll cool you down!

    “Shut up Porter – I really thought we were calling a truce.”

    “A truce – UNLESS the opportunity arose…well – here it is! So – tell me Alice – exactly where is your left hand right now?”

    “Shut up yuppie!!!!!” Alice brought her left hand up to Dana’s shoulder. Dana let out a heavy sigh. She was obviously frustrated by the interruption. Alice looked at Bette. “You damn yuppie – why can’t you mind your own business?”

    “OH PALEEEEEZE! God Al – you’re up my ***** all the time – all’s fair in love and war.” Bette knew that the ***** comment would eventually come back to haunt her! She hopped that the WAR comment would go unnoticed.

    Just then, Jake pawed at Bette’s leg. “Hey buddy – looky who’s in the pool – Auntie Alice and Auntie Dana. You ready to rumble?” Jake danced happily but then stopped to stare at Dana. He growled. Bette jumped into the pool – grabbed the surf board and then picked up Jake and lowered him onto the board.

    Dana – who was watching ‘the rodent’ intently -attempted to make a mad dash out of the pool. She was halted by Bette who pushed Jake on his surf board directly in front of her. “Ha – this is Jake! He lives here – you don’t!” Bette winked at Dana. Dana stepped backwards a few steps. Bette stepped forward…Dana stepped back…Jake just growled with each movement of his surf board.

    “Bette!!!! BETTE!!!!” Bette turned to see Tina – nope – General Kennard-hands on the hips!- staring down at her. “Bette – please remove Jake, the surf board and yourself from the pool! Then please come over here. I need to talk to you.”

    Bette did as she was told. In her mind – all she thought was, ‘I am in so much trouble….so much trouble! YES!’ Bette did her own little happy dance.

    Bette walked over to General Kennard. “Now Private Porter – your behavior tonight is inexcusable. What do you have to say for yourself?”

    “Well – ah—-you would be General Kennard – correct?”

    “Yes Private – that would be correct!”

    “Well General – I regret to inform you that I have been guilty of many – many – many ….”

    “Private – please save your breath – I’ve seen what you’ve been up to – and I must tell you that I am very displeased with your behavior tonight…”

    “Really – you’re displeased with me General? Is there anything I can do to make this up to you? I’ll do anything you want me to do.”

    “My …my private – are you begging for my forgiveness?” Tina raised her eyebrow and winked at Bette.

    “Well General – I had something else in mind actually… I thought you might show me some of your disciplinary moves.”

    “Private Porter – please meet me in the bedroom in 20 minutes. Oh…and Private – please strip before I get there – you need to be ready when I arrive.”

    “Yes General – I’ll be ready for you!!!” Bette winked at Tina.

    “Oh – and Private – that wink – quite the insubordinate move – that is going to cost you. You’ll have to pay for that!”

    Bette turned away from Tina and was smiling. She was sure that 20 minutes of wait time would seem more like 20 hours! But once time was up…well…


    As Tina – or – that would be, General Kennard – made her way through the house – she walked through what seemed to be rooms of naked bodies. She finally made it to the bedroom door. She turned the *****, opened the door and slipped inside. She locked the door behind her. There in front of her stood Private Porter – in all her glory. “Well – three cheers for the red, white and blue – PRIVATE!”

    “Yes General – three cheers!”

    “Turn around Private – hands on the wall! Over there.” Tina pointed toward the spot that she wanted Bette to stand in. Bette did as she was told. She felt raw desire course through her body. “Now spread ‘em Private!” Tina walked over to Bette and after dropping her clothes to the floor pressed her body firmly into Bette’s. Bette was keenly aware of Tina’s belly – and the feel of it plastered against her made her swallow hard. She moved her hands up to Bette’s ***** and focused in on her nipples. “My …my Private. Your nipples are certainly standing at attention.” Tina pinched them hard – Bette moaned. Tina pulled away from Bette and ordered her to stay in her current position until further notice. Again – Bette obeyed! Tina moved her hands slowly down Bette’s back until they were resting on Bette’s *****. Bette swallowed hard again. Tina pulled her hand back and then slapped Bette on the ***** – harder than she ever had before. A soft cry escaped from Bette’s lips as her excitement soared. Tina slapped her again – harder – this time leaving a mark.
    Bette trembled. Tina used her feet to kick Bette’s legs further apart. She leaned into Bette again and entered her with two – then three fingers. Her other arm was wrapped around Bette’s waist and her hand rested on her opposite hip. Tina thrust in and out of Bette at a furious race until she felt Bette contract around her fingers. Tina whispered to Bette. “It’s ok Private…I’ve got you…you can ride the wave! I’ve got you.” She continued thrusting until Bette’s contractions stopped. Tina slid her fingers out of Bette and moved them to her mouth. “Turn around Private…” Tina continued to suck her fingers into her mouth – she moaned. Bette dropped to her knees in front of Tina and buried her face between her legs. “That’s it Private – faster – harder. Stick your tongue in me Private.” Bette obeyed the command. Tina placed her hands on the back of Bette’s head and pulled her in closer to her. “Suck me harder Private…yes…that’s it….now slide your tongue in and out…faster Private!!! Faster!!” Tina pulled Bette’s face into her one final time and her body shuddered as her ***** ripped through her body.

    Bette stood up and was now face to face with Tina. They kissed passionately. Tina took Bette’s hand. “Let’s go to the window and look at the stars…” Bette followed Tina’s lead. Bette stood behind Tina and wrapped her arms around her and held her close. They couldn’t help but notice the two naked women who had found the secluded part of the yard outside their window. Bette whispered into Tina’s ear. “Let’s watch Baby…let’s watch…”

    TBC

    Comments

    1. yes Lisa…we certainly have missed you..damn…you can’t leave for such a long time. but this story made up for it big time. jakeman surfing…LOL…great stuff. and let’s not even start on the court marshal bette recieved…hot damn…if all punishment is like that in the army then sign my ass up! hehehe jk

    2. Again…as usual good writing. Just please remember
      “What went right, what went wrong, Doesnt really matter much when it’s gone!” I don’t want to lose it.

    3. can’t help my big green that’s plastered all over my face while i’m reading this. Too funny and fun!!! the jakeman on a surfboard and dana action… it’s priceless. awsome!!!

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