I just finished reading your Left Turn chapter. Don’t let the comments from readers get you down. You are writing this for you at the end of the day and with over 4,000 views clearly people are interested in what you have to say.
I saw a chapter where things are hard, therapy is hard, talking is hard and finding their way even harder.
I think they can reach a middle ground. Maybe instead of adopting Bette can get that need met through a volunteer agency or maybe Tina can produce her own stuff independently without having to join a new company.
Or Ben lets her do whatever she wants or or or or or
the possibilities are endless. You said from the beginning that you are TiBette so I trust you will get them there. Write for you, the rest will follow.
Hiya BK! This is new – I don’t think anyone ever wrote on my wall before, haha … Thank you. It’s weird sometimes, maybe you feel the same, when you work on a chapter quite intensively and then post it and realise there is another way to see what you’ve written? I am constantly surprised and interested in what people see and like or dislike in the story. But you’re right, I couldn’t write it at all if I didn’t trust my own instincts first and foremost. Thank you for the comment! X