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28 Days – (Chapter: Is it still me that makes you sweat?)
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‘Finally, reprieve. Could you have been any more boring?”
Throwing open the door didn’t make Ashley any happier. Standing on the front step was a very excited Aiden, and a much more subdued Spencer. In fact, Spencer looked practically panicked. Ashley just stared at them. What the fuck were they doing there? Rubbing it in her face.
‘Yes Davies, in fact any minute now they’re gonna strip of their clothes and go at it on your hallway floor. But only after they tie you to a chair so you have to watch’
“Hey Ash, where’ve you been man? I haven’t seen you for ages!” Aiden grinned, punching the brunette on the arm and totally missing her withering glare. “Want to come hang?”
“Uh… doing what?” she said cautiously. She wanted to slam the door in his face and scream obscenities through the wood panels but she knew she couldn’t. He didn’t even know what was wrong.
“Beach dude, you’re totally coming.”
And saying that he grabbed her and hauled her out of the house.
“Aiden!” She shrieked, “Bathing suit!”
“You have it on under your shirt, I can see the straps” he pointed out. “And we have towels and stuff. Come on, you’re coming!”
Damnation, she’d put her suit on thinking she might go for a swim later, not get hauled out to have her heart stamped into the sand. Spencer was saying nothing and fidgeting in the corner. Ashley gave her another withering glare and then followed Aiden. She didn’t have much choice; he was practically wrenching her arm out of its socket.
The drive to the beach consisted of Aiden fiddling with the stereo, hurling obscenities at other drivers and telling both girls how much fun they were going to have. If he’d bothered to look at either of their faces he would have noticed that they were unlikely to have any fun whatsoever. Ashley’s face was blacker than night and Spencer looked just about ready to throw up. Aiden, in typical boy fashion, didn’t see a thing.
There was a crowd at the beach. Ashley should have known Aiden would have friends there. Half the basketball team and, unfortunately, the whole cheerleading team. If at all possible, it just made Ashley’s mood worse. Spencer was eying her uncomfortably, like she was about to say something, and Madison was sashaying her way across the sand.
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NOOOOOOOO!!!!! It’s not right! I wanted to sit right there next to Ash and just cry! That’s all I can think about doing right now. What is wrong with Spencer? She just….she….grrrrrr. I’m really happy you posted though. Really really happy. Extremely really happy. I’m more happy than a….uh…well I’m just really happy. Let’s keep up the frequent updates with this story shall we? I don’t think I could take another lond break from it. Loved it!!!
OUCH! OUCH IN A BOX OF KITTY LITTER!(which is gross). man, i cant believe it. And aiden has no idea about anything. Although i bet if he did know, he would still go after spencer. PMS
“Aiden you fuck twit!” She growled. HA!!!!!”Madison, I’d rather scratch my eyes out with a spork than look at your heifer body.” DOUBLE HA!!!! You are so funny. I love this and I hate how Spencer is being a total ass! Get with the program Spence! Ash is right there. In a bikini. Half naked. Do something and get over pretending your not gay!!!! Hey Clom. Awesome post. Update soon. You don’t do it enuff! I’m all jittery and excited like Aiden. I can just imagine him standing on the spot fidgeting like a 5 yr old who has to pee. FUN-NY!
uh…ash…no you cant be happy! jeeze…i really hope spencer and ashley arnt going to go the whole ‘friends’ route, cause that is just so typical…*sigh* anyways, i’m absolutly over the moon right now that you updated! like WOW! lol and before the month was even up! look at that! i’m joking ya of course, you just update this story when ever you please! but you know, some time in the near future would be prefered…
Okay…this fic is burrowing into my bones, Sarah. I just bawled over this last post. It’s my mood and the crap day I had…but, mostly, because I can this situation happening to so many girls. Or boys. There’s no way to win. I want to envelope Ash in the biggest hug ever. I don’t know what’s worse…finding this beautiful connection and then having it ripped from you purposefully because Spencer can’t deal with the reprocussions of it all…or the big fat lie that will hover over she and Spencer and Aiden as long as they know each other. Every look Spence and Ash share will be so deep and meaningful, full of love and pain and shame. I know I couoldn’t live like that. But Ash has isolated herself and no doubt knows without these two, she has no one. Gah. Such a low low low blow by Spencer, but she is suffering also, because we live in a world where not everyone is free to love and right now I think that just sucks.
SOOOO glad that you updated! screw Aiden. he should be buried under the sand and left there to rot. “Its not about win or lose..” my ass it isn’t Aiden would go ahead and do what he wanted anyway. eh i feel Ashleys pain. avoid the friendship route at all costs!
im not in the greatest comment mood, but i wanted to let you know i read it. and i loved it. my favourite word; obscenities. and my fav phrase; web of lies. post more as soon as possible. i adore all of your writing, you sexy thang you.
I LOVE UR STORY!!! Just thought I’d drop by and say that…and UD SOON!!!!
this fic is killing me slowly. i want ashley to run, because in the real world, there’s no happy ending to this story. but maybe in the world of clomle spencer will get her head out of her ass! (couldn’t help it.) gah. it’s great stuff.
As much as I sympathize with Ashley, I can’t completely blame Spencer for what she’s doing…yep, had to play pretend for a long, long time to avoid a family shutout. Don’t sacrifice your happiness, Spencer!! And poor Ash…that torturous battle of trying to make yourself despise someone when you love them so much….freaking nightmare.
You know, Spencer is my favorite character on this show (as you well know) but I’m finding her the least sympathetic character in this fic and it’s breaking my heart. Spaiden?! That’s almost worse than Ashden…..ALMOST. NOTHING is worse than Ashden, I tell you. NOTHING. I mean, even Aiden should be sympathized with because the poor lug has no idea what’s going on. He really thinks Spencer digs him and he has NO idea what really happened between them. Ugh. And don’t get me started on Ashley. Seriously.
i sooo get what peglegmeg said. and in the real world prolly spencer would run and run forever leaving ash in the dust. not that she want to, but she need to. not everyone can make the brave decision to step out and love freely and leave everything else to be dammed. gosh i’m getting emotional here. but i cant help it. AT you are incredible, utterly sensational!!! u make me wanna cry beside ash too. and pick her up and look for other girls cos spence is being a egghead. a cruel egghead. waitaminute goob!! u dun mind me calling u good do you, goober? you forgot to tell AT who was the one who captured her earlier. see i’m her new bodyguard so i need to know these things to keep her safe. ;)
My roomies are not a very big fan of yours right now. Well, that’s what you get for making me laugh out loud – really really very loud – at 4 am with this brilliant line: “Madison, I’d rather scratch my eyes out with a spork than look at your heifer body.” Hahahaha. Darn, there I go again. Very much not appreciated by the roomies, but so worth having them hate me.
i hate how much better than me you are at writing! but not enough to keep me from loving your stories. and spencer needs to get her act together..because..ashley’s there in a bikini, and they’re both in love with each other. she’s being a little ridiculous, yeah? annyways…i always forget about this story til you post a new one. but it makes it that much better..like a surprise you knew about, but forgot. or something. not that that made any sense, but whatever. keep up the good work :]
hey that was a great update. i totally loved it.. damn ash has some good zingers in there lol.. no not the kfc ones the one liners :P i totally wish that going to the beach all u see is gorgeous girls in bikinis… come to where i live… right on the beach.. all u see is overweight men with no shirts, wheres all the GURLS!! ARGH LOL anyway after that tangent… i LOVED it
Aiden is such a ass. How could spencer do that to ashely. I dont blame ashely if she never talks to spencer again. Ashely needs to tell both of them to fuck off for good. PMS
Spencer sucks(literally) for treating Ashley this way. This is sweet torture for me. I hate it and i love it. I feel so bad for Ashley for having to watch them together. Spencer nor Aiden is a good friend to Ash. They could at least give her space & time but…. then we’d have nothing to read. And that’d suck more. I loved the Spencie-wencie name. And I also loved how ashley told Spencer to fuck off. Way to go girl! Atleast she’s not crying in front of them playing the victim role. Like Spencer who’s just bending over and taking it (literally). I’m so glad I’m not in high school anymore. Because the truth is, Aiden means no real harm. They (Aiden&Spence) “like eachother”. And its really that simple in high school (most times). My friend dated my ex and my ex dated her sister and her sister and I dated……Please post more soon.
I loved it, so much. and i’m dying for more.NEW EPISODE TONIGHT! i cant wait. …I love you.
Please please keep updating this story! I love it, it’s sooo good. Spencer is just COLD man, did she tell Glen that Ash forced herself on Spence? Man…I understand being scared but I don’t know how Spencer’s gonna talk herself out of this one. Can’t wait to find out!! So PMS!!
NOOOOOOOO!!!!! It’s not right! I wanted to sit right there next to Ash and just cry! That’s all I can think about doing right now. What is wrong with Spencer? She just….she….grrrrrr. I’m really happy you posted though. Really really happy. Extremely really happy. I’m more happy than a….uh…well I’m just really happy. Let’s keep up the frequent updates with this story shall we? I don’t think I could take another lond break from it. Loved it!!!
OUCH! OUCH IN A BOX OF KITTY LITTER!(which is gross). man, i cant believe it. And aiden has no idea about anything. Although i bet if he did know, he would still go after spencer. PMS
“Aiden you fuck twit!” She growled. HA!!!!!”Madison, I’d rather scratch my eyes out with a spork than look at your heifer body.” DOUBLE HA!!!! You are so funny. I love this and I hate how Spencer is being a total ass! Get with the program Spence! Ash is right there. In a bikini. Half naked. Do something and get over pretending your not gay!!!! Hey Clom. Awesome post. Update soon. You don’t do it enuff! I’m all jittery and excited like Aiden. I can just imagine him standing on the spot fidgeting like a 5 yr old who has to pee. FUN-NY!
uh…ash…no you cant be happy! jeeze…i really hope spencer and ashley arnt going to go the whole ‘friends’ route, cause that is just so typical…*sigh* anyways, i’m absolutly over the moon right now that you updated! like WOW! lol and before the month was even up! look at that! i’m joking ya of course, you just update this story when ever you please! but you know, some time in the near future would be prefered…
Okay…this fic is burrowing into my bones, Sarah. I just bawled over this last post. It’s my mood and the crap day I had…but, mostly, because I can this situation happening to so many girls. Or boys. There’s no way to win. I want to envelope Ash in the biggest hug ever. I don’t know what’s worse…finding this beautiful connection and then having it ripped from you purposefully because Spencer can’t deal with the reprocussions of it all…or the big fat lie that will hover over she and Spencer and Aiden as long as they know each other. Every look Spence and Ash share will be so deep and meaningful, full of love and pain and shame. I know I couoldn’t live like that. But Ash has isolated herself and no doubt knows without these two, she has no one. Gah. Such a low low low blow by Spencer, but she is suffering also, because we live in a world where not everyone is free to love and right now I think that just sucks.
SOOOO glad that you updated! screw Aiden. he should be buried under the sand and left there to rot. “Its not about win or lose..” my ass it isn’t Aiden would go ahead and do what he wanted anyway. eh i feel Ashleys pain. avoid the friendship route at all costs!
im not in the greatest comment mood, but i wanted to let you know i read it. and i loved it. my favourite word; obscenities. and my fav phrase; web of lies. post more as soon as possible. i adore all of your writing, you sexy thang you.
I LOVE UR STORY!!! Just thought I’d drop by and say that…and UD SOON!!!!
this fic is killing me slowly. i want ashley to run, because in the real world, there’s no happy ending to this story. but maybe in the world of clomle spencer will get her head out of her ass! (couldn’t help it.) gah. it’s great stuff.
As much as I sympathize with Ashley, I can’t completely blame Spencer for what she’s doing…yep, had to play pretend for a long, long time to avoid a family shutout. Don’t sacrifice your happiness, Spencer!! And poor Ash…that torturous battle of trying to make yourself despise someone when you love them so much….freaking nightmare.
You know, Spencer is my favorite character on this show (as you well know) but I’m finding her the least sympathetic character in this fic and it’s breaking my heart. Spaiden?! That’s almost worse than Ashden…..ALMOST. NOTHING is worse than Ashden, I tell you. NOTHING. I mean, even Aiden should be sympathized with because the poor lug has no idea what’s going on. He really thinks Spencer digs him and he has NO idea what really happened between them. Ugh. And don’t get me started on Ashley. Seriously.
i sooo get what peglegmeg said. and in the real world prolly spencer would run and run forever leaving ash in the dust. not that she want to, but she need to. not everyone can make the brave decision to step out and love freely and leave everything else to be dammed. gosh i’m getting emotional here. but i cant help it. AT you are incredible, utterly sensational!!! u make me wanna cry beside ash too. and pick her up and look for other girls cos spence is being a egghead. a cruel egghead. waitaminute goob!! u dun mind me calling u good do you, goober? you forgot to tell AT who was the one who captured her earlier. see i’m her new bodyguard so i need to know these things to keep her safe. ;)
My roomies are not a very big fan of yours right now. Well, that’s what you get for making me laugh out loud – really really very loud – at 4 am with this brilliant line: “Madison, I’d rather scratch my eyes out with a spork than look at your heifer body.” Hahahaha. Darn, there I go again. Very much not appreciated by the roomies, but so worth having them hate me.
i hate how much better than me you are at writing! but not enough to keep me from loving your stories. and spencer needs to get her act together..because..ashley’s there in a bikini, and they’re both in love with each other. she’s being a little ridiculous, yeah? annyways…i always forget about this story til you post a new one. but it makes it that much better..like a surprise you knew about, but forgot. or something. not that that made any sense, but whatever. keep up the good work :]
hey that was a great update. i totally loved it.. damn ash has some good zingers in there lol.. no not the kfc ones the one liners :P i totally wish that going to the beach all u see is gorgeous girls in bikinis… come to where i live… right on the beach.. all u see is overweight men with no shirts, wheres all the GURLS!! ARGH LOL anyway after that tangent… i LOVED it
Aiden is such a ass. How could spencer do that to ashely. I dont blame ashely if she never talks to spencer again. Ashely needs to tell both of them to fuck off for good. PMS
Spencer sucks(literally) for treating Ashley this way. This is sweet torture for me. I hate it and i love it. I feel so bad for Ashley for having to watch them together. Spencer nor Aiden is a good friend to Ash. They could at least give her space & time but…. then we’d have nothing to read. And that’d suck more. I loved the Spencie-wencie name. And I also loved how ashley told Spencer to fuck off. Way to go girl! Atleast she’s not crying in front of them playing the victim role. Like Spencer who’s just bending over and taking it (literally). I’m so glad I’m not in high school anymore. Because the truth is, Aiden means no real harm. They (Aiden&Spence) “like eachother”. And its really that simple in high school (most times). My friend dated my ex and my ex dated her sister and her sister and I dated……Please post more soon.
I loved it, so much. and i’m dying for more.NEW EPISODE TONIGHT! i cant wait. …I love you.
Please please keep updating this story! I love it, it’s sooo good. Spencer is just COLD man, did she tell Glen that Ash forced herself on Spence? Man…I understand being scared but I don’t know how Spencer’s gonna talk herself out of this one. Can’t wait to find out!! So PMS!!
how sad..aidan is an asshole and so is spencer…anyways, i really like this story..post soon..peace
how sad..aidan is an asshole and so is spencer…anyways, i really like this story..post soon..peace
Yeah i dont think ash can be happy for them! ouch! Great chapter! update soon!
Yeah i dont think ash can be happy for them! ouch! Great chapter! update soon!
I dont know how many times i have to say this before you get it. You are an amazing writer. The sides of humanity you depict in your fic. are amazing. i could never write as you do. read these words for what they say. This was a great update. a great picture in to heartbreak and angst but having to live in the world. or being forced to live in the world. If we all had and Aiden to pull us out every now and then, how beautiful would it all be? some one to smack you on the head and go RESPOND TO LIFE!! We can all be that for other people , and we all have that in some one whether we see it or not. You are touching on so many different issues, that if i were to begin to explain them here, i’d write a novel. Sarah, i admire you’re abilites
I dont know how many times i have to say this before you get it. You are an amazing writer. The sides of humanity you depict in your fic. are amazing. i could never write as you do. read these words for what they say. This was a great update. a great picture in to heartbreak and angst but having to live in the world. or being forced to live in the world. If we all had and Aiden to pull us out every now and then, how beautiful would it all be? some one to smack you on the head and go RESPOND TO LIFE!! We can all be that for other people , and we all have that in some one whether we see it or not. You are touching on so many different issues, that if i were to begin to explain them here, i’d write a novel. Sarah, i admire you’re abilites
WHAT!?!?? I don’t even know what to say. I usually don’t even punctuate correctly in comments but this one… this one is special. I have read this last post and I was going along pretty well, especially at the ‘fuck off, spencer’ because for the moment… it was perfect. I would’ve done the same thing. But this AIDEN nonsense, good GOD why is Spencer THIS scared about her and Ashley? I can only think she has the same strong influence at home like on the show but worse, these characters… they are so dimensional, full of honest reactions and I am SO devastated for Ashley right now. For her to be a real friend for Aiden right now, I’d just say she’s lying as much as Spencer is. Spence must come around; she can’t just ignore what they have! Damn. Thank you for not making us wait months for this update!
WHAT!?!?? I don’t even know what to say. I usually don’t even punctuate correctly in comments but this one… this one is special. I have read this last post and I was going along pretty well, especially at the ‘fuck off, spencer’ because for the moment… it was perfect. I would’ve done the same thing. But this AIDEN nonsense, good GOD why is Spencer THIS scared about her and Ashley? I can only think she has the same strong influence at home like on the show but worse, these characters… they are so dimensional, full of honest reactions and I am SO devastated for Ashley right now. For her to be a real friend for Aiden right now, I’d just say she’s lying as much as Spencer is. Spence must come around; she can’t just ignore what they have! Damn. Thank you for not making us wait months for this update!