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CONFRONTATION CHAPTER 7 Conclusion
"Bette!" Jodie pleaded, "Calm down," she said backing away from her. "Surely you can understand my need," she babbled. "I mean, how I needed Tina for this piece. You saw the pictures, she’s beautiful, and that frozen moment I captured is exquisite. This will be magnificent, a work of a lifetime."
"Don’t even speak her name you piece of shit!" Bette spat. "You drugged her and you allowed me to think I gave you the opportunity. You planned this all along so you could rape her."
Jodie was petrified; she had never seen another human being look so cold and ruthless. She truly feared for her life. "Rape? No, you got it all wrong I just loosened up her inhibitions a little," Jodie said nervously making excuses.
"I saw the photo’s Bitch. I know Tina was completely out of it but YOU knew exactly what you were doing. You even posed for the cameras," she said ominously, walking closer to Jodie fists clenched. "I’m going to beat you to death and I’m going to smile the entire time I do it!" Bette promised inching closer to the smaller woman raising a fist.
"STOP!" Tina yelled as she jumped in front of Bette pushing her away from Jodie who was clutching her chest in fear. "Bette! Stop, she isn’t worth it. Bette!" Tina said speaking slowly and clearly to her love, trying to hold her attention.
"T? Get out of the way I have to do this," Bette said stoically.
Tina wrapped her arms around Bette hugging her close, "Bette please, for us, stop love, Don’t do this! You’re my hero but I need my hero with me not in a prison cell," she stated. "Remember we talked about this. We have our whole future ahead of us. There’s a better way. Don’t allow her to hurt that. Please Bette," Tina pleaded.
Bette felt Tina’s arms around her as she continued to talk her down from the murderous rage she was feeling." She finally heard Tina’s whispered words, "I love you! Stay with me love."
Tina gripped Bette tightly, eyes shut as she tried to diffuse Bette’s volatile emotions. She opened her eyes and for the first time saw the pictures that were changing in front of her on various screens. It was her naked self-posing for Jodie. She watched the exact moment when Jodie dropped down between her legs after smiling knowingly to the camera. There was no doubt that this act had been carefully planned and orchestrated. This was the material that Jodie needed to complete her project. She watched herself mouth Bette’s name and tears formed in her eyes. She watched herself orgasm on screen and Jodie stroke herself to a climax over her inert body and a coldness came over her as everything became very clear to her.
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darkhawkdown1 says
Hello cls… you my friend just amaze me… first and foremost your notes made my day… you are brilliant and so very frank and honest and I love it… as for this ‘the final’ it was amazing… the emotions… the sheer adrenaline that was coursing through… just so powerful and then Tina’s punch leading to Tina’s proposal… such an amazing piece and that ending was pure inspiration… how to shatter a soul that has no morals… kill her dreams… you are simply amazing and passionate and well please come back soon… and yes for you I will wear Tights… hmmmmmm… do I look to fruity… LMAO… much love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
resultsonly says
that really was a great finished. I absolutely loved this arc. Thanks again and I look forward to the next story..
Eastmorn says
Oh CLS I’m crushed that the arcs are ending for I have looked forward to each and every chapter! I do hope you start another story soon! I’m not opposed to begging so let me know if that would help. I’m not certain what part of the storyline I disagreed with per your comment — frankly I loved it all. I am so in awe of your talent and I hope you recognize that greatness inevitably produces conflict as well as jealousy…as evidenced by your experience in posting this storyline. Please let your greatness continue to shine…with a hug. East
Pagash says
What a brilliant ending. True poetic (artistic) justice! Revenge can just be so sweet. You truly take us where we have never been taken before, and I for one just love it. I am also looking forward to your next stories. Please keep on doing what you do so well cls.
aandy says
Great ending! The fact that I want your body is supposed to be a secret. Bacon will come after you! Good job, pervert!
fergz1 says
Thank you for writing stories for us and that was a great ending…it was even better with Tina punching Jodie. I hope you bring us another story soon.
BnTPorter says
What can I say? Thank you for allowing me to be a part of this wonderful journey. You are an incredible writer who I am continually astounded by how descriptive and authentic your stories are. The strength and courage that you showed by taking on difficult subject matter, yet handling it with such finesse was breathtaking and demonstrated your amazing talent. I am sad to see this beautiful story end; it is one that I will read many times. Thank you for sharing your story with us. Side note: I loved your author’s note…how appropriate.
gallerist says
thank you cls, for the highly satisfying ending. looking forward to your next fic!
sgtmags says
What an ending! That was amazing. I have truly enjoyed these stories…Please don’t go.
momadukes says
You really did make the earth shake under my feet cls, I had to go back to jump street with this one and chapter after chapter brough more and more of beautiful story of love and devotion to us, as only a brilliant writer could. Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, take your bows, not only for your excellent skills but also for your excellent bravery and knowledge of you self. The world is a better place for people like you that stand behind your convictions and the lovely ladies and gentelmen of this site. Please come back to us soon with something new. Thank you, Md
Dainty says
Tina does have a wicked right hook and I’m so happy that she decked Jodie. That right hook was good and having her destroy the sculpture was an excellent inspiration. I wondered what Jodi was thinking when Tina was telling her the terms of the contract. Good thing Jodi is as dumb as she is very talented, heartless, and completely egotistical. No copies of the photos, I can’t believe she was that dumb. But I guess that shows the level of her ego. I just wanted one of them to beat her into the ground. Never liked Jodie on the show because she treated Bette, Tina and Angelica very badly. Can’t stand her. But they did a good thing by destroying her work, that hurt more than any beating she could have received because now there is NOTHING left of the statue and no one wants to see any of her other work. YEA!!!!!!. Great chapter and you did a wonderful job with the stories, really liked the way you wrote each section. Great job, Please come back soon with another offering for us.
rivergirl2121 says
hoooo what an ending!!!!!!!!!!!!! ur just amazing!! i love this story and the ending tina that was a great move i said it before the best way to punish an artist is to mess with his art. tibette are sweet how tina didnt want bette to hurt jodie, a smart woman. fab ending cls!! thank u for weverything. i read aaaaaaaalllll ur storys and hope u will start another one
without labels says
Wow this was one of the most amazing endings of a story that I have read, you did a magnificent job writing this story, it was so full of surprises and challenges for us as readers to read and for you as a writer to write, I appreciate all the efforts that you put while writing this story C, and the kind of openness that It took to accept and welcome all the comments left on each chapter. You are truly one of a kind, brave writer that we have on this site and I am so happy that we had the pleasure of knowing you and your talent through your stories. Thank you so much and I hope we can see another wonderful one soon. Love
tenofive says
See, Bette, revenge IS a dish best served cold! Great job, cls. And, sorry, no relation to sevenofnine from Star Trek TNG. Needed an identity one morning and looked up at the clock – it was 10:05 and that’s what I used.
kant_help_it says
Awww..C its over. Such a great writer you are. Really enjoyed stalking you…er your story!! Hope you have a few more up your sleeve as I’m not done with you yet…and yes I realize you LOVE it!!! Kant
bettefortina says
Well, well, well….you sly writer you. I toltally didn’t see that coming. I thought Bette would kick Jodie’s ass and spend the rest of her years in prison for murder and Tina will kill herself or somethung from not being able to be w/ Bette. But what Bette and Tina did to Jodie by destroying her greatest piece of work was just so POETIC. I love the thought and planning and the way they destroyed the piece together, finally putting to rest that horrible day forever. OK, CLS….what’s up next? I know you’ve gotta have another story in you (or at least i hope you do). Don’t leave your fans (impatient as we are) waiting too long :)
pattifloatn says
I am saddened that this story has come to it’s end. I have thoroughly enjoyed all aspects of this ongoing story. I hope that you will continue to write despite some numb skulls inability to either not read or to act childish. Thanks for continuing even when you were ready to walk away. You are a better person for continuing.
t_daze says
I was hoping stupidly that this chapter would never come..but you ended it off so well cls…and that BITCH got what she deserved…nice one TINA thats why I love you;)thanks for persevering through all the hard times..you have shown strenght of character and have guided us writers in a way no one else could with your dedication to a great story!Thanks again..cant wiat for an new one..bring it on girl!
GoWithTheFlow says
What a fantastic end for this great story!!! You never cease to amaze me with your writing!! Thank you soooo much for sharing your talent with us. But you will be back SOON with a new story – wont you!? PLease!? please!!? PRETTY PLEASE!!!?? :) Thanks.
robbeedee says
Hey CLS, As they say revenge is a dish best served cold and here Tina and Bette did just that. Loved how the gals dealt with their anger at Jodi. Bette was sneaky in locking Tina in the closet before heading out to punish Jodi. And Tina was her equal in freeing herself for this prison and then saving Bette from doing something life shattering. Tina’s knock out blow was perfectly placed and just enough at that time. Sweet to see how these events brought Bette and Tina even closer. Tina’s proposal was so precious and emotional. The destruction of Jodi’s scrupture a fitting ending. Just awesome. Thank you so much for your courage and twisted thinking. A true original tale. Your Loyal Fan.
jp22 says
That was almost more merciful than Jodi deserved… but it was fitting. It was how Tina and Bette were able to deal with what Jodi did, and I’m glad they were able to put it behind them and move on in a positive way. Great story, cls, thanks for writing it and sharing with us all. Please come back with another story soon. Take care.
lc2138 says
Well I’m glad that Tina punched Jodi and that she and Bette destroyed the sculpture, but I still think that Jodi got off a little too easy. Even if her dreams were crushed she still did something unthinkable to someone else. Your stories have been truly enjoyable and had a lot of people thinking. Thanks for posting, and I hope you write more soon.
AmandaMG says
OMG that was brilliant… i was hoping to see the look on jodies face and you did not disapoint me/us… so glad tina got a nice punch in there… too bad she didn’t break her jaw… great job lady.. can’t wait to read what else you have up your sleeve…later babe
skycaptain says
great great story. i’m so glad you decided to stick around. hope to read many more stories from you in the future.
annaluis says
I don’t believe that Bette would ever destroy art especially when it shows Tina. Even when the circumstances are as worse as the are I think she would appreciate it for what it showed – Tina’s love for Bette. But despite my opinion on this fact – the story was worth to read. I’m looking forward for more. :)
Jackiee1 says
Way to go Tina
bettyvhall says
Great job my dear, You finish the story and climbed the mountain,you didn’t give up. Love the punch to the jaw, that wasn’t enough,but satificed us. Tina and Bette was so brave to smach the piece and took all Jodie’s hope for a bright future. Hope to see your name soon on this site.
Rau says
Immortality!!!! I’m not as kind or level-headed as T I would have crippled her hands 4ever!!! But u as usual wrote a masterpiece of precision timing and mood. Thank u. and thank u for the shout out, u r very welcome to my support. Genius must not be denied. I’m hoping u will dream up another scorcher for us sometime in the not too distant future. Again, thank u for your time, energy, courage and creativity.
akalittlered says
My friend that was so Amazing and wonderful!!!! Glad to see Jodie got what she had coming to her. I hope we see a new story from you soon. Thank you
ntnrml61 says
I totally loved the ending…..it was perfect and the only way to get even! 10 stars gf!! :)