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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 7)
I managed to get through work the next day without my cell phone; it was still in its current resting place under a cushion of the living room couch. My office phone started ringing, though, before I was about to leave.
“Spencer Carlin,” I answered.
“Hey Spence,” the familiar voice said on the other end.
“Oh… um, hey Aiden. What’s up?”
“My boss just faxed over those proposals you were asking for. He must have messed up and sent them to me instead of your office,” he informed me.
“Alright, well, could I stop over tonight and pick them up? They’re sort of important.”
“That was just what I was going to suggest,” he said.
“Okay… is 8-ish alright?” I asked, not wanting to miss my dog park excursion at 7.
“Yeah, I’ll see you then.”
After another stress-free trip with Carrie, spent talking about brands of dog food our dogs liked, I put Benny back in the apartment and went over to Aiden’s. Of course, Michelle answered the door.
“Hey, come in,” she greeted me. “Aiden just hopped into the shower. He should be ready in a few minutes.” She walked over to a bottle of wine and poured herself a glass. “Want a glass while you’re waiting?” I thought it over, and then decided I would need some alcohol in my system just to be here right now.
“Sure.” She handed me the glass and I drank a bit.
“So… what’s up?”
“Nothing. You?”
“Oh, you know… just exploring the city,” she replied. I took a sip of the wine, and then a gulp. This wait was already too long for my liking. “So, um… Ashley called you.”
“Is that a question or a statement?” I refused to look her in the eyes.
“A statement, I guess. And… you didn’t answer.”
“I’m aware.”
“Any particular reason?”
“I could think of a few,” I responded. I checked my watch; how had I only been in here for 2 minutes? And what was taking Aiden so long?
“She, uh… she called me after. She was… um… pretty crushed.” I stared right at her after that.
“Look, I don’t know what you’re trying to do, but please, just-“ I was interrupted by a cell phone ringing. It wasn’t mine; I was sure of that. Michelle reached into her pocket and pulled hers out, glancing at me before answering it. She didn’t take her eyes off me.
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dddisfunctional says
okay, so i read your Completely Incomplete stories the second they post. And i love how in the summary it’s always Hi my name is Spencer Carlin… you know.continue, this is insanely addicting.
Sweet_confusion says
love love love love love PMS PMS PMS, ill cry. haha well not if you post. ill be extremely happy if you post. :] :]:]:]:]:]
ngasi_lei says
dun, dun dun dun dun, dun dun dun, *swishes cape* All in a days work m’lady. Always makes me feel good to konw i can make sexy ladies hearts melt. Its never to much for Superman to make someones day. You make mine everytime you post. ER, um, NO I dont melt. i’m Supe…r…m…a..n…..damn…kryptonite……typing……must..find..the…sun…to…ga….in….stre..ngth…for…8th….lap
ngasi_lei says
*Swishes cape* okay so i just flew up through the rain clouds and reenergized. and i want to come back to tell you how wonderfully written this post was, if i was unclear in the first message (damn kryptonite).
sache says
ok~ this story is totally fascinating~ i am so addicted that i refresh the list every hour hoping in vain that you will update another post~ PMS PMS~~
1trinity6 says
This story is so helping me get through the days… thank you so much. I can escape from my unreasonably long schedule
hdgallant says
Great chapter. Hopefully now they will want to see one another after 4 years. PMS
virginmama says
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! I am sooo glad that michelle gave the phone to Spencer when Ashley called. I soo want them together again and SPENCER be HAPPY AGAIN!!!! PMS and I can’t wait to see what will happen next!!!
Clarity says
Paging Michelle, paging Michelle. I found your jets and I’d be happy to return them so you can cool them immediately. Way to avoid Spencer flipping like Farrah Fawcett’s hair in the 70s, Michelle. Looks like Spencer is well on her way to ending Operation Misery Loves Company, Kozmic. Spencer needs to pump her brakes…as well as pull up the parking brake! Although she may see the light at the end of the tunnel now that she’s spoken with Ashley, make Ashley work to get back into your…life, yeah, that’s it. Hopefully Ashley and Spencer will discuss the implosion of their relationship face-to face over a nice bottle of Hershey’s…wait, I meant to say wine. What? What’s everybody looking at? Honest mistake! Kozmic, please accept my sincerest apologies for failing to comment on the two chapters you posted yesterday. I was unable to due to going into distributive shock after reading about two girls and one bottle of Hershey’s Chocolate Syrup. As you can see, I’ve made a complete recovery. Note: Despite shock, Clarity completely endorses the use of chocolate syrup in future stories and chapters. Raise your hands to receive your virtual high-5 for your fantastic writing Kozmic. Please post soon!
savingme says
HURRAY!! Finally…a little cooperation! SO glad that Spencer is acting like an actual human being again. And I LOVE the fact that Michelle totally set both of them up…so stealth!! Now all we need is a little reuniting rendevous….;) great update honey!!
dddisfunctional says
okay, so i read your Completely Incomplete stories the second they post. And i love how in the summary it’s always Hi my name is Spencer Carlin… you know.continue, this is insanely addicting.
Sweet_confusion says
love love love love love PMS PMS PMS, ill cry. haha well not if you post. ill be extremely happy if you post. :] :]:]:]:]:]
ngasi_lei says
dun, dun dun dun dun, dun dun dun, *swishes cape* All in a days work m’lady. Always makes me feel good to konw i can make sexy ladies hearts melt. Its never to much for Superman to make someones day. You make mine everytime you post. ER, um, NO I dont melt. i’m Supe…r…m…a..n…..damn…kryptonite……typing……must..find..the…sun…to…ga….in….stre..ngth…for…8th….lap
ngasi_lei says
*Swishes cape* okay so i just flew up through the rain clouds and reenergized. and i want to come back to tell you how wonderfully written this post was, if i was unclear in the first message (damn kryptonite).
sache says
ok~ this story is totally fascinating~ i am so addicted that i refresh the list every hour hoping in vain that you will update another post~ PMS PMS~~
1trinity6 says
This story is so helping me get through the days… thank you so much. I can escape from my unreasonably long schedule
hdgallant says
Great chapter. Hopefully now they will want to see one another after 4 years. PMS
virginmama says
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! I am sooo glad that michelle gave the phone to Spencer when Ashley called. I soo want them together again and SPENCER be HAPPY AGAIN!!!! PMS and I can’t wait to see what will happen next!!!
Clarity says
Paging Michelle, paging Michelle. I found your jets and I’d be happy to return them so you can cool them immediately. Way to avoid Spencer flipping like Farrah Fawcett’s hair in the 70s, Michelle. Looks like Spencer is well on her way to ending Operation Misery Loves Company, Kozmic. Spencer needs to pump her brakes…as well as pull up the parking brake! Although she may see the light at the end of the tunnel now that she’s spoken with Ashley, make Ashley work to get back into your…life, yeah, that’s it. Hopefully Ashley and Spencer will discuss the implosion of their relationship face-to face over a nice bottle of Hershey’s…wait, I meant to say wine. What? What’s everybody looking at? Honest mistake! Kozmic, please accept my sincerest apologies for failing to comment on the two chapters you posted yesterday. I was unable to due to going into distributive shock after reading about two girls and one bottle of Hershey’s Chocolate Syrup. As you can see, I’ve made a complete recovery. Note: Despite shock, Clarity completely endorses the use of chocolate syrup in future stories and chapters. Raise your hands to receive your virtual high-5 for your fantastic writing Kozmic. Please post soon!
savingme says
HURRAY!! Finally…a little cooperation! SO glad that Spencer is acting like an actual human being again. And I LOVE the fact that Michelle totally set both of them up…so stealth!! Now all we need is a little reuniting rendevous….;) great update honey!!
Change says
Aww, Michelle, such an ass yet so fucking adorable!! LoL, I guess we all should have a friend like her=D RIGHT ON SPENCE & ASH!! WOOT!! PMS!!
Change says
Aww, Michelle, such an ass yet so fucking adorable!! LoL, I guess we all should have a friend like her=D RIGHT ON SPENCE & ASH!! WOOT!! PMS!!