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Don’t Cry Out. – (Chapter: 3. Entanglement.)
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She was a vase.
Well, she wasn’t a literal vase. If she were a literal vase, her feelings would be purely fictional, only used as personification in elaborate novels written by insane authors with nothing better to do than personify inanimate objects as a way to increase their dwindling word counts. But, in the emotional sense, where one feels the need to compare oneself to a certain aspect of everyday life to make it more real and understandable, she was, in fact, very much like a vase.
She was a vase, and emotions were water, pouring continuously from a faucet that was permanently switched on. She, the vase, was only occasionally placed under the stream, however, slowly letting emotions pour into her and build up gradually.
Right now, Spencer Carlin was under a steady stream…and possibly bolted to the bottom of the sink, because she couldn’t find a way out of this one. There was no escaping the emotions that poured into her, no denying them.
She sighed, looking down at the paper that her fingers clung to like a lifeline. She loosened her grip when she noticed that her knuckles were fading to a pearly white color, and took a deep breath. She needed to calm down. If she could calm down, maybe she could shake herself from beneath that stream of emotions that she couldn’t control.
Upon closer inspection, she took note of the physical state of the scrap of paper she’d carried with her on her journey. It was worn from the twisting and crumpling it’d been forced to endure during the trip, however short. Only hours before, it had been attached to a standard sheet of computer paper, resting in her printer crisp and clean. Then it was ripped from its support base, scribbled on with hurried, careless writing, and carted around in the hands of a nervous young woman as she maneuvered her way around Los Angeles in search of Farley Bakery.
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I’m already future cringing for when Ashley catches her out. But for the moment can I say, I LOVE YOUR INANIMATE OBJECT COMMENTARY! i just adore it. It’s so brilliantly done. I loved the metaphor of the paper chasing after the stapler. It was hilarious. I just.. wow, I actually cannot find words to describe how much I love it. You are just an incredible writer. So.. brilliant! I’m on edge for the next update. And some coffee…
ok sooo i’m reaally drunk right now..like alot..and i decided since my gf passed out i’d read some fanfics..and urs was the only one (out of the other 2 attemppts) i’m able to follow along with…and i love it…just as long as spencer doesnt go kookoo in the head in thee near future it’s all good…lol..and im prolly not making any sense but anyway grreat chap plzzzz pms!!!
ohh i love this story :] i’d nearly forgotten about it since it took you so long to update, but i figure i’ll let you slide on this one since i really like the story :] haha but seriously, i really like where you’re going with this. it’s not another one of those really predictable ones. good job :)
oh and i forgot, i’m with Myung on the whole song thing. i looked it up after i read your first post, and fell in love with the band in general. i listened to that song on repeat for like a week straight. i blame you. :)
=o!DUM DUM DUMMM.now, you must write more. before i go to sleep, because if I fall asleep without another chapter to this, i’ll probably go into a cliffhanger-coma.and thats no good. so more?
Great chapter. I`m glad spencer went there to see ashley. Now she only needs to tell ashely her real name.
I’m already future cringing for when Ashley catches her out. But for the moment can I say, I LOVE YOUR INANIMATE OBJECT COMMENTARY! i just adore it. It’s so brilliantly done. I loved the metaphor of the paper chasing after the stapler. It was hilarious. I just.. wow, I actually cannot find words to describe how much I love it. You are just an incredible writer. So.. brilliant! I’m on edge for the next update. And some coffee…
ok sooo i’m reaally drunk right now..like alot..and i decided since my gf passed out i’d read some fanfics..and urs was the only one (out of the other 2 attemppts) i’m able to follow along with…and i love it…just as long as spencer doesnt go kookoo in the head in thee near future it’s all good…lol..and im prolly not making any sense but anyway grreat chap plzzzz pms!!!
ohh i love this story :] i’d nearly forgotten about it since it took you so long to update, but i figure i’ll let you slide on this one since i really like the story :] haha but seriously, i really like where you’re going with this. it’s not another one of those really predictable ones. good job :)
oh and i forgot, i’m with Myung on the whole song thing. i looked it up after i read your first post, and fell in love with the band in general. i listened to that song on repeat for like a week straight. i blame you. :)
=o!DUM DUM DUMMM.now, you must write more. before i go to sleep, because if I fall asleep without another chapter to this, i’ll probably go into a cliffhanger-coma.and thats no good. so more?
Great chapter. I`m glad spencer went there to see ashley. Now she only needs to tell ashely her real name.
Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes! Thank God! An update from the one and only Korvatunturi! Sweet. I love this post so much. Idon’t care if you thought it didn’t get the story anywhere, I still loved it. And the HOT STAPLER??!!? Omg. Funny beyond belief! So I was all WTF! Korvatunturi actually updated. I thought I went insane but I’m not. It’s really really real. So wicked. PMS! please? For me? You know you love it when I comment. The more u update, the more I comment.
Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes! Thank God! An update from the one and only Korvatunturi! Sweet. I love this post so much. Idon’t care if you thought it didn’t get the story anywhere, I still loved it. And the HOT STAPLER??!!? Omg. Funny beyond belief! So I was all WTF! Korvatunturi actually updated. I thought I went insane but I’m not. It’s really really real. So wicked. PMS! please? For me? You know you love it when I comment. The more u update, the more I comment.
yay! love it. the randomness of the descriptions is cracking, and the ‘lone baker’ makes Ash sound like a bandit or cowboy or something… makes me laugh even if no one else thinks the same! I admire Spencer’s patience – I’d be growing increasingly more insane over the ridiculousness of the situation! Also, I’d forget to respond to my fake name! I look forward to it all coming out – Ash is in for a shock :-D Jx
yay! love it. the randomness of the descriptions is cracking, and the ‘lone baker’ makes Ash sound like a bandit or cowboy or something… makes me laugh even if no one else thinks the same! I admire Spencer’s patience – I’d be growing increasingly more insane over the ridiculousness of the situation! Also, I’d forget to respond to my fake name! I look forward to it all coming out – Ash is in for a shock :-D Jx
I’m sitting at work shuffling my papers and feeling slightly dirty for feeling them up now. And I can’t help but think of my stapler as a bit of a whore now. It’s an electric, heavy duty stapler, you see, so it’s known many a paper in it’s day. Many, many papers at one time even. It’s almost a porn star. ::shudder shudder:: This fic is brilliant. I love how you’ve moved from a seemingly tragic one-shot into a somewhat whimsical and often funny story. Home schooled Spencer, eh? How’d she meet Aiden then? And is she going to be revealed through Aiden and his potential friendship/history with Ashley? (Don’t know if you’re going to have the two of them know each other in this fic – just guessing). Well, I’m also craving coffee now, so I think I’ll go get some. And then actually do some work. Think of that! Actually doing work. Wow.
I’m sitting at work shuffling my papers and feeling slightly dirty for feeling them up now. And I can’t help but think of my stapler as a bit of a whore now. It’s an electric, heavy duty stapler, you see, so it’s known many a paper in it’s day. Many, many papers at one time even. It’s almost a porn star. ::shudder shudder:: This fic is brilliant. I love how you’ve moved from a seemingly tragic one-shot into a somewhat whimsical and often funny story. Home schooled Spencer, eh? How’d she meet Aiden then? And is she going to be revealed through Aiden and his potential friendship/history with Ashley? (Don’t know if you’re going to have the two of them know each other in this fic – just guessing). Well, I’m also craving coffee now, so I think I’ll go get some. And then actually do some work. Think of that! Actually doing work. Wow.
I think Ashley knows who’s Spencer is….but, that’s just me. Maybe Ashley is playing some type of mind game. THis story makes me wonder how Ashley would’ve treated Spencer hadn’t they been friend’s first. Please post again. I was wondering where you went;)
I think Ashley knows who’s Spencer is….but, that’s just me. Maybe Ashley is playing some type of mind game. THis story makes me wonder how Ashley would’ve treated Spencer hadn’t they been friend’s first. Please post again. I was wondering where you went;)
ahhh this story was definitely in need of an update! i’m so glad you blessed us. i love how spencer is obsessed with the enigma that is ashley, and i hope you’ll have spence figure her out… did you know how addictive your writing is? i have too many fixes already! :)
ahhh this story was definitely in need of an update! i’m so glad you blessed us. i love how spencer is obsessed with the enigma that is ashley, and i hope you’ll have spence figure her out… did you know how addictive your writing is? i have too many fixes already! :)