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Revelations Chapter 1 (Continued from Exploration 1-6b)
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Revelations Chapter 1
Bette sat sipping a hot tea while she ran her hand through the blonde hair draped on her lap. They were both dressed casually for a lazy afternoon. Bette had borrowed one of Tina’s t-shirts and an old pair of track pants. Tina was dressed similarly for comfort. Both women had gone "commando" after Bette pointed out that she was turned on knowing Tina was braless and easily accessible if she got …hungry. Now, she was listening to her lover speak, warmed by her words.
"I love you" Tina whispered looking up at the brunette that had become the world to her in such a short time. Bette put her tea cup down and leaned down to bring their lips together. Tina opened her mouth welcoming Bette’s invasion, "Mmmmm, your tongue is so warm", Tina murmured cupping the back of Bette’s head to hold her, effectively fusing them together. Tina sucked gently on Bette’s tongue moaning softly.
Bette leaned back smiling, "You can’t be aroused again?" she asked incredulously referring to the sex marathon they had been participating in the last two days. "I would have thought you would be sick of me by now?" Bette joked.
"I seem to be permanently aroused by you love, you just have to look at me and my pulse starts to race. Feel," Tina said bringing Bette’s hand down over her left breast."Can you feel my heart race?" she asked seductively, closing her eyes.
Bette’s mouth went dry at the sight of her hand cupped intimately over Tina’s breast. "Yes," Bette hissed as her own libido sprang to life. Tina’s nipple pebbled under Bette’s hand. "Yes I can feel your heart" she said. Spurred to action, she lifted Tina’s head up off her lap and pulled off Tina’s t-shirt in one swoop. She then crouched down on the floor beside the sofa as she gently laid Tina back down on the couch. Bette looked down at her near naked love, running her eyes over her abdomen and breasts. "You are so hot!" Bette said slowly.
Tina turned her head towards the woman she loved and made no attempt to cover herself from Bette’s view. She saw Bette’s eyes flare as they roamed over her body and then fasten on the waist band of her track pants. "Do you want me to remove my pants?" she asked softly.
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Just write whatever you want to write. People should read whatever they want. If they don’t like it, they shouldn’t read it. I read everything you write so obviously I am ok reading it. Keep up the great work!!!
Wow! So intense, but I loved it. That was so hot. And you’re brave for writing it too, because a lot of people don’t respond well to it. Totally different side of these two! Wow. Thanks so much for posting!
Hmmm…Pepper, the Police Woman. Really kind of groundbreaking in it’s way. Angie Dickenson had her charms, but I have to admit the starched hair-helmet (now with extra bleach!) she perpetually sported was never my cup of tea. Your girls are moving quickly, declarations of love and moving in and what not. And that Tina is just downright fast, if you know what I mean. Oh well, she seems to be ready to stay home now, even if she shows no signs of settling down. Will they ever wear undergarments again?
This chapter was SO GREAT!!! Damn that was HOT!!!! If some people do not like they will not read. But I am here to read what ever you want to write for us. Thank you
Thank goodness you posted again! I was so worried you were ending the story with the last ground-breaking chapter. I loved the last chapter of exploration so I’m not certain what the folks were concerned about. As for this chapter… what can I say but you write the art of seduction between these two so well I just melt everytime I read a new shared adventure. Please MORE…SOON…
I don’t think that you went to far in the last chapter of Exploration. I really like this story and the direction that you are taking it. There are other popular authors on this site that write more controversial scenes. Follow your instincts, write what you want to write and don’t worry about our opinions. Please keep posting and I promise to keep reading.
TOTALLY HOT!!!! PPS
Loved the end with Cagney & Lacey. That was hilarious! pps
I haven’t thought about Cagney and Lacey in forever. That was a great chapter. Thanks for posting!
How is it that Tina did not know about theses shows, well she really did know? Even though she is in the movie business, some of these same TV stars end up in the movies. Can’t wait for Bette and Tina to live together.