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While Bette was nearing her friend’s place, her eyes widened with surprise after Tina’s hand settled in her lap. Never before had Tina been so aggressive in doing what she wanted – or touching Bette that way at all – and so the gesture sent her reeling with desire and temptation.
It kept her energized until they arrived, and she parked out front.
“Were you trying to get us killed?”
Tina looked over her shoulder to see Bette’s smirk, and smiled ahead. “Sorry.”
“Nah, it’s okay. Man … I really didn’t ever think I’d see the day …”
“The day what?” Tina asked, watching as Bette got off of the bike, only to get back on, but backwards. And just as she was predicting it, Bette slowly pulled Tina into her lap. “Bette!”
“The day you’d ride this thing with me,” Bette chuckled, looking into Tina’s eyes while she felt the shaky legs drape over her own. She hated that she loved the image so passionately, but she tried to hide her feelings for the time being.
“Bette – we can’t be doing this here! What if someone sees?”
“If I can’t be close to you in public, then we’ve got some issues.”
Tina smiled shyly, trying to close her knees, even as Bette was still between them. “Can we go inside?”
“Just give me one more minute with this,” Bette smirked, closing her eyes as she leaned back to enjoy the feel of Tina basically straddling her on the bike. She ran both hands up Tina’s legs, but stopped at her knees, and it was a beautiful feeling. The tingles were mutual.
Tina swallowed hard as Bette leaned back, watching the muscular abdomen covered with the usual tank top and jacket. She knew what Bette’s body looked like naked, and she couldn’t stop imagining it. Suddenly she was wishing Bette would take a greater liberty with her there – anywhere. She needed that touch.
“Alright, let’s go,” Bette sighed, helping Tina back where she’d been sitting so that Bette could get off and help Tina with her equally awkward dismount. “You’re so fucking cute it just kills me, you know that?”
“My legs feel weird.”
Bette slipped her arm around Tina’s waist, and just smiled. She loved Tina more than she could describe.
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Thanks for the update GR :-) … A bit sad to know this is gonna end soon.. I wonder where are you going to take us with this wonderful story. The way you describe their emotion is so full of details and its captivating! The way Bette struggle within is so emotional. And I just glad that finally they are together and more open to each other.. :-) looking forward to your next posting! Thanks again GR! ;-)
I agree this chapter of the story does effectively describe the emotional states of the characters. I notice that Tina has apologized to Bette by admitting her selfishness. She uses the excuse that her loss of priority caused the pain and anguish which occurred in their relationship. What loss priority was she referring to? Was she referring to her marital commitment as being the priority she lost? If so this brings me back to my initial question .Why, did she decide to have the affair? Alternatively, is she referring to her selfishness of not fulfilling Bette’s sexual and emotional needs as loss of her priority? If so, she is confused. Making that her priority will be impossible to accomplish while she is still married to Greg. It is not wised to start a sexual relationship while committed to another particularly a spiritual commitment such as marriage. I also want to believe that Bette owes Tina an apology as well. However, I would need to have this additional question answered before I can accurately draw a conclusion. Did Bette know that Tina was married prior to sexually touching her? If so she absolutely does. Do your thing GrindRight!
very brilliant update i looovvvveeee your story thanks post soon!!!!!
Very different than your other stories but just as good, you write the emotion well
At first I thought you were going to reprimand me for calling you “the onion girl”. I was like “oh god not in front of everyone ”. It’s all good to me, I just didn’t want to offend you. Your Bette is a great combo of cute and sexy. Like a Teddy bear in lingerie ok, no more analogies. Thanks OGR
Another brilliant update and thanks for posting it today. Love it was so well written. Thank you again.
I love your attention to detail you describe the little things that aren’t usually described I like that. And yes this is way different than your other stories, but I like all of your stories so it doesn’t matter to me just keep writing! Lol
Love this story and so happy they have found each other, that they love each other and the great possibility that they can be a couple is just fantastic. Thanks for writing this story and I am enjoying their new found love. Thanks again.
I love how you detail all of the emotions they are experiencing. Hate to see it end because it feels like it just started. PPS
Splendid writing… Sexy, intense and emotional just the way i like it.. I just feel a little sad b/c this story will soon end…can’t wait 4 the next one:-)
As is often the case with your chapters, this was freaking amazing! I felt the emotion as I read it. I’m glad Tina finally admitted she loves Bette.
I love all of your stories.Thank you very much.What about some more chapters?
I’ve read this chapter 2 times and tried half an hour to think about something to say about it… I give up, I’ll repeat myself and tell you once more what an interesting journey have you taken us on with this story. Great chapter, great story :) Have a great day and thank you for writing it! :D
That was great and glad they talk and let them talk more and tell each other how they really feel. Please post more, thanks!