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Finally On the Ground – (Chapter: La Tempeste)
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There had to be a bar SOMEWHERE on this boring, sterile, whiter than white planet. Even the bazaar had been clean and fresh, way too crime free to be a real bazaar. Well, this was a backwater church planet, you didn’t come here for the parties. Or the fish.
Ashley turned a corner and narrowed her eyes. This was an alley; a seedy alley. And there was one door in it, one that was thumping in and out in an oh so familiar way. Finally, a goddamned bar! Ashley rapped on the door sharply and shoved her hands in her pockets. There was a pause, and then a slot in the door slid back and squinted eyes peered at her suspiciously.
“Give me a fucking drink” she said pointedly.
The slot closed. For a second she wondered if she’d erred and tried to get a drink out of the local sewing society. Then the door swung open and a man let her down a set of dirty stairs. Nope, it was a bar. The usual gun drum was sitting in front of her, and grudgingly she pulled her six shooter out of its hiding place in her jacket and spun it into the receptacle. No guns in bars…damnation.
The bar was half full, and dark. A television played endless psychotic adds from the rest of the world in one corner. A jukebox played the most appalling country and western Ashley had ever heard in another. The bar tender was playing to cliché and cleaning glasses with a dirty rag. She sighed at the sight and strode up confidently.
“Double shot of whiskey and if you short change me I’ll turn your nuts into a wedding present for my mother.”
The bar tender glanced at her and then rolled his eyes. “You could just say please,” he said.
“Well I could, but then you’d think we were friends. Then the next thing I know you’ll be telling me about this great movie script idea you have and I’ll never be able to leave. If it’s alright by you, I’d like to get drunk in peace.”
“No skin off my nose” the bartender grinned, slamming down the double. She payed the man and dosed off half the shot in a gulp. It burned on the way down, but only in the low down tickle good kind of way.
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“And he kisses like a dead trout” LMFAO, that just MADE my day. i laughed so hard. (we momentarily interrupt this comment session to state, OMG my mother has a dog carrier thing, one she straps around her and can carry our dog o.0, ok now back to the originally planned broadcast) ok where was I? oh yea i love it, absolutley. i love Ashley, shes so funny *i agree with your authors note* :] and i go agree with goober, ppl will come around. it really is a great fic, to die for. ok now im late for work, ill chat later :]:]:] oh and i cant wait for the next ANYTHING you post.
hey i loved it! way to spin a different look at things!
Hooot. Thats hot, not hoot with an extra O. You definitely make people happy though, Clomle, without a doubt.
Hey, I’m definitely liking it. Sure, the space thing made me apprehensive at first, but if it’s a story from you, I know I’ll love it. I mean, I adored “Best For Me”, although at first I thought I’d dislike it, what with Spencer being a mom and all. (Still have no idea what “Firefly” is, though!)
Well I definitly like all your other writing .. and though I couldn’t really get into this in the beginning it’s definitly growing on me. Can’t wait to read more :)
“And he kisses like a dead trout” LMFAO, that just MADE my day. i laughed so hard. (we momentarily interrupt this comment session to state, OMG my mother has a dog carrier thing, one she straps around her and can carry our dog o.0, ok now back to the originally planned broadcast) ok where was I? oh yea i love it, absolutley. i love Ashley, shes so funny *i agree with your authors note* :] and i go agree with goober, ppl will come around. it really is a great fic, to die for. ok now im late for work, ill chat later :]:]:] oh and i cant wait for the next ANYTHING you post.
hey i loved it! way to spin a different look at things!
Hooot. Thats hot, not hoot with an extra O. You definitely make people happy though, Clomle, without a doubt.
Hey, I’m definitely liking it. Sure, the space thing made me apprehensive at first, but if it’s a story from you, I know I’ll love it. I mean, I adored “Best For Me”, although at first I thought I’d dislike it, what with Spencer being a mom and all. (Still have no idea what “Firefly” is, though!)
Well I definitly like all your other writing .. and though I couldn’t really get into this in the beginning it’s definitly growing on me. Can’t wait to read more :)
People are just frightened, that’s all. They’ll come around. It seems more than popular in other places that shall currently go unnamed.
People are just frightened, that’s all. They’ll come around. It seems more than popular in other places that shall currently go unnamed.
aye you DO make some people quite happy Clomle, this story will catch on… just give it time and one nc17 chapter *g*
aye you DO make some people quite happy Clomle, this story will catch on… just give it time and one nc17 chapter *g*
it’s wonderful…simply wonderful.
it’s wonderful…simply wonderful.
munching on an apple happily. hah can’t resist it after you describe the way spencer ate hers. crispy. lol. and what are you talking about? i love this fic as much as i love the original star wars. it’s fricking brilliant. and we so need a change of scenery right now. so don’t be disheartened mate, people will flock to this fic when they realise what they are missing!! :)
munching on an apple happily. hah can’t resist it after you describe the way spencer ate hers. crispy. lol. and what are you talking about? i love this fic as much as i love the original star wars. it’s fricking brilliant. and we so need a change of scenery right now. so don’t be disheartened mate, people will flock to this fic when they realise what they are missing!! :)
if you’re doing the writing, the story is going to be magnificent. how anyone could not read jut doesn’t make any sense! i’m not into scifi myself and i just love this. LOVE it!
if you’re doing the writing, the story is going to be magnificent. how anyone could not read jut doesn’t make any sense! i’m not into scifi myself and i just love this. LOVE it!