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I Always Thought It Would Be Me – (Chapter: at the house)
A few weeks later
Every thing was going good for Spencer and Ashley. Spencer got a job at a new school and it is the same school that there son goes to. Ashley left her 2nd job so she has more time with her family.
Ashley (A): I am home
Spencer (S): In the kitchen
A: how was your day?
S: great I love my new class and I love working at Riley’s school I get to see him more. How was your day?
A: great now that I don’t work to jobs do you want to do some thing to night?
S: what did you have in mind?
A: I don’t know go to a club
S: ok what about Riley
A: he can go to your dads I know he wont mind he love to hang out with him
S: ok ill call and ask
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S: hey dad can Riley stay with you to night so I can go out with ash
SD: sure I love to see the little guy
S: thanks dad when can we bring him
SD: about 6
S: ok see you then
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S: we can drop him off at 6
A: ok ill go get hem ready to go so we can get some thing to eat before we drop him off
S: ok where do you want to eat
A: McDonalds
S: ok
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A: come on Riley you have to get ready to go to grandpas ok
R: ok mom just 5 more mins please
A: no we want to get some thing to eat before we drop you off but you can bring your game
R: ok mom I am coming where are we eating
A: McDonalds
R: ok mom lets go
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confused16 says
ok so ill be honest…it does intrigue me that they have a son, but come on give me a bit more to believe….mcdonalds…well ok its reasonable, but there was nothing in this chapter that grabbed my attention and kept it for more than a second…you have to write as though you’re not even going to consider to allow our eyes to stray from the page…like i said it interests me…so dont quit, im sure you’ll find your niche : )
confused16 says
ok so ill be honest…it does intrigue me that they have a son, but come on give me a bit more to believe….mcdonalds…well ok its reasonable, but there was nothing in this chapter that grabbed my attention and kept it for more than a second…you have to write as though you’re not even going to consider to allow our eyes to stray from the page…like i said it interests me…so dont quit, im sure you’ll find your niche : )
RuggerFrmSON says
I agree with Confused16. It was kind of cool to think of them having a kid…but I’m assuming this is supposed to be in the future, so it would have been nice to have some form of background on what has happened in their lives that led them to the point where they have a child. Anyway, writing is like everything else. The more you do it, the better you get. Good luck with your other works.
RuggerFrmSON says
I agree with Confused16. It was kind of cool to think of them having a kid…but I’m assuming this is supposed to be in the future, so it would have been nice to have some form of background on what has happened in their lives that led them to the point where they have a child. Anyway, writing is like everything else. The more you do it, the better you get. Good luck with your other works.