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    Omniscient Dawn – (Chapter: (Clean Version))

    Story written on June 2, 2006 by badgersprite.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=11713
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    Finally, they get the chance, but sacrifices must be made in order to know what they’ve longed to discover.

    Some might consider it ironic how bright the skies were after the storm. It should have been a beautiful picture when it started and it should have started when it stopped. That would have been the poetic ideal. The horrible weather could have acted as a metaphor, reflecting all that went on in the only two lives which meant anything at that time underneath it as critical events passed by at a morbidly fast rate. But it didn’t. Instead it stood in stark contrast to everything, pretty much from beginning to end, almost as though taking the mickey out of their intense and passionate affair which never was. It was meant to be, but it never took place. Then again, how could it be fate if it didn’t happen? Wasn’t it supposed to? Intuition and her heart disputed logic and said it was destiny. Unfortunately, this left her stranded in limbo and, although she hadn’t known it then, the other girl in an equal state.

    The once hurricane-like winds calmed to little more than an exhale blowing on the scape to dry it out a slim few minutes sooner. Sands darkened by soaked up liquids went undisturbed by the humid air or waves that, in abrupt truce, gently massaged the shore. The level of light had risen significantly, but it was not quite done brightening yet and still a little cooler than any day in Los Angeles could possibly be. Clouds had faded to grey, not quite gone yet, and a rainbow held by rigid bonds curved against the blue valued backdrop. For Ashley, there was only blackness. Her crying eyes saw their own interior. She wept on the dawn of an extravagant day. No expense was spared on its décor. It was the loneliest day of her life.

    Eventually, the tears stopped. Either because her grief was too great to express out here where she was open and vulnerable to the hazard of unfamiliar surroundings or numbness had finally set in. But if she was numb then why did she still feel like shit? She felt anaemic beneath the thumb of Atlas who let the weight of the world crush her. The blood in her veins ran breathless and brought no nourishment to any cell in her body, extremity or internal or neural. Her stomach churned with nausea. Her skin paled. Her body lurched in spasm after raging spasm and she couldn’t be sure whether it was due to rogue sobs or a dwindling core temperature, nor did she care. Her brain felt collapsed.

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    2. Your writing is fantastic. I’m not a fan of Mashley. At all. But I like this a lot. Thanks for giving us something different. It’s pretty awesome.

    4. Your writing is fantastic. I’m not a fan of Mashley. At all. But I like this a lot. Thanks for giving us something different. It’s pretty awesome.

    9. ok so it seriously took me forever to read this thing…lol but of course i loved it…its giving me a whole new outlook on madison and ash….im intrigued, lol But seriously i want no i need more details…the whole living in the car…kinda weird. w/e post more soon!

    10. ok so it seriously took me forever to read this thing…lol but of course i loved it…its giving me a whole new outlook on madison and ash….im intrigued, lol But seriously i want no i need more details…the whole living in the car…kinda weird. w/e post more soon!

    11. I read your first story and I was really hoping to see a second one soon and here it is. I really, really like your use of language it’s great to see. I love the build up between Madison and Ashley and I really, really loved the part when Madison threw the ring away. Please post soon. I love Spencer and Ashley together, but I’m not always sure it would really be as rosy as we all like to think.

    12. I read your first story and I was really hoping to see a second one soon and here it is. I really, really like your use of language it’s great to see. I love the build up between Madison and Ashley and I really, really loved the part when Madison threw the ring away. Please post soon. I love Spencer and Ashley together, but I’m not always sure it would really be as rosy as we all like to think.

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