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Friday Night at the Club (Time of Day 17)
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The club was packed with women. Many had moved to the dance floor as the DJ spun tracks that included a mix of new stuff mashed with oldies.
In the low lights, Tina negotiated through the crowd to find Shane and Paige at a back table. Helena and Alice had already joined them.
“TK, you made it.” Alice hugged her in welcome.
Tina liked the spot they’d selected. It was farther from the speakers, so people could hear each other without so much shouting. “Of course.” She gave each of her friends a hug and a peck on the cheek. “I haven’t been out in a while, though. Looking at the crowd I feel old.”
“Tell me about it.” Paige responded, earning a playful nudge from Shane.
“Happy Anniversary you guys! Can I get you something? A drink? A shot?”
Shane half-heartedly tried to wave off the idea of shots, but Alice took the offensive. “That’s a great idea. A little kamikaze action to get the party going.”
Alice took hold of Tina’s shoulder and helped her friend towards the bar. “You look ready to party.”
Tina had selected a pair of jeans along with a sheer silver sleeveless blouse over a black camisole and bra. “I thought it was time to get out into the world.”
“Of course it is,” Alice agreed. “Next it’ll be time to find you a woman.”
That comment brought an internal cringe, and Tina felt it time to change the subject away from herself. “Heard anything from Tasha?”
“What?” Alice yelled over the noise.
“Tasha?”
“Oh. A couple letters. A short email. Nothing really.”
“Something, Al. She’s reaching out for you.”
“I guess.”
“Have you written her?”
“I’ve tried but…”
“Alice, try. She’ll appreciate it.”
“Yeah, I know.”
They arrived at the bar just as a woman was stepping away, and were able to get a spot near the front. “6 kamikaze’s,” Alice shouted at the bartender.
“There’s 5 of us, Al.”
“I’ll do one for Tash…and I’ll write her when I get home.”
“Write her when you’re sober.”
“I’ll write twice.”
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Bette is still so in love with Tina. The need to communicate and not in the bed They know they are good there, To talk. thanks
thanks for including the kiss. pps.
Pseud its okay to be a lil confused.Loved the chapter I was hoping that Bette would follow her.Great job as usual. PPS.
Love your writing! :) PPS!
hopefully shes not drunk. that was great and yes you are a great writer. thanks.
Thats awesome!
Well that kiss is interesting. Hopefully Bette isn’t drunk and she knows what she’s doing. Tina’s getting out there and getting meat tagged is great. Shows Bette what she’s missing. Hence the kiss. Hopefully a drunk Alice set Bette straight. As always I enjoy this. Great stuff. Thanks.
Never ever say your bad!!!! It was just a little error. We forgive you and still love your writing.
See what happens when real communication takes place? Yippee!
I love your writing. They have a chance.
And pseud, you’re not a bad writer, just a little confused.
Never worry, pseud. Do whatever you like with the timeline; your story, your rules!
I love your writing!!!! This is so great. I hope Alice let Bette have it when Tina walked away. I am glad they talk. Tina and Bette have a chance together now I hope. Thanks PPS
The three words “Bad” and “writing” and “pseud” do not go together, in any way, shape or form, so let’s hear none of that. This chapter was on a par with everything else you’ve posted, and I quite enjoyed it. Now, I hope that kiss was borne out of Bette needing her actions to speak louder than what she’s been afraid to say, and it’s not just the jealousy (the presence of which speaks volumes anyway). Great stuff, pseud, thanks.
I picked up on that blip in the last chapter but chalked it up to creative liberty or whatever it’s called. I’ve seen worse mistakes. I figured Bette would show up, but I wasn’t expecting that kiss! PPS
oh yes