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Friday Night at the Club (Time of Day 17)
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Alice tapped Tina on the arm. “That woman down there, the redhead, is totally staring at you.”
Tina turned towards the direction Alice indicated. She saw the woman, but she was nothing that particularly interested Tina. “She is not.”
The woman winked.
“She totally is, Tina. Why not go say hi?”
Just then the shots arrived. Tina put money down on the bar. “Because we’re taking these back to our table.”
“You know, maybe it’s time to get back out there.”
“Maybe I don’t want to be back out there, Al.”
“Well you can’t just pine away for Bette.”
The bartender set the change on the bar. Tina took some of it, leaving the tip behind. “Who says I’m pining?”
Alice looked at her friend. “You’re up to something.”
“I’m up to enjoying myself, Al. That’s about it.”
They took the shots back, setting them on the small table. Each of the women grabbed one.
“To Shane and Paige,” Tina said. tipping her drink towards the two women. The others murmured in agreement then each pounding down her shot. Tina coughed a little as the drink burned at her throat.
“Out of practice, my dear?” Helena teased.
“I’m sure I’ll have more chances to practice tonight,” Tina replied as the server set bottles of beer on the table.
Shane took Paige’s hand. “Dance?”
The two of them headed towards the floor.
Helena picked up a beer bottle and clinked it against the one that Tina was holding. “Ah, to be young and in love again.”
“Young, anyway.”
Each of them took a swig from the bottles.
“I want to dance,” Tina announced.
“Oh no, you’re not taking Helena and leaving me here alone.” Alice picked up the extra shot glass and downed it.
“Come dance, Alice.”
“Nope. I’ve given it up for lent.”
“Lent’s over, Alice.”
“Doesn’t matter. Besides, TK, I think your hottie’s coming over to see you.”
Tina looked up and saw the red-haired woman from the bar walking towards the table. She still didn’t see the woman as her type or herself as particularly interested, but the woman wasn’t unattractive.
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Bette is still so in love with Tina. The need to communicate and not in the bed They know they are good there, To talk. thanks
thanks for including the kiss. pps.
Pseud its okay to be a lil confused.Loved the chapter I was hoping that Bette would follow her.Great job as usual. PPS.
Love your writing! :) PPS!
hopefully shes not drunk. that was great and yes you are a great writer. thanks.
Thats awesome!
Well that kiss is interesting. Hopefully Bette isn’t drunk and she knows what she’s doing. Tina’s getting out there and getting meat tagged is great. Shows Bette what she’s missing. Hence the kiss. Hopefully a drunk Alice set Bette straight. As always I enjoy this. Great stuff. Thanks.
Never ever say your bad!!!! It was just a little error. We forgive you and still love your writing.
See what happens when real communication takes place? Yippee!
I love your writing. They have a chance.
And pseud, you’re not a bad writer, just a little confused.
Never worry, pseud. Do whatever you like with the timeline; your story, your rules!
I love your writing!!!! This is so great. I hope Alice let Bette have it when Tina walked away. I am glad they talk. Tina and Bette have a chance together now I hope. Thanks PPS
The three words “Bad” and “writing” and “pseud” do not go together, in any way, shape or form, so let’s hear none of that. This chapter was on a par with everything else you’ve posted, and I quite enjoyed it. Now, I hope that kiss was borne out of Bette needing her actions to speak louder than what she’s been afraid to say, and it’s not just the jealousy (the presence of which speaks volumes anyway). Great stuff, pseud, thanks.
I picked up on that blip in the last chapter but chalked it up to creative liberty or whatever it’s called. I’ve seen worse mistakes. I figured Bette would show up, but I wasn’t expecting that kiss! PPS
oh yes