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Weho Behind the Scenes: Malibu
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She rubs her hand down the muscles of my back and begins to scratch me slowly just below my waist.
”It’s back but it’s not scaring me tonight.” I whisper in her ear.
”Good, because you’ve carried me right up to the edge.”
”I just do know how to do that, don’t it?”
”Flawlessly,” Tina whispers and then rolls our lips together.
”Here touch me, I need you, too.”
We lie in front of the fire and race each other along the edges and then pull away.
”It’s my heart bursting, that what it feels like. Baby, God, I want you to marry me. Do you want to marry me?”
”Jesus! Bette! You’re proposing on the edge of an orgasm?”
”Here, let’s see? Am I?” I put my hand behind her head and lift her into my lap.”
”I really like fucking you this way. I like the way your thighs begin to shake when you can’t stop waiting anymore.” I bury my head in her neck as we make love. ”Tina, I want babies and trust with you, and a home. And I want to take care of you and I want to stop and slow down.”
”Baby, don’t stop now.” Tina cries softly into my ear.
”Sorry, I misspoke. I’ve got you. You feel it.”
”I definitely feel it.”
”Please marry me. It’s you I want for the rest of my life.”
”I will. Please let us go.”
”Not yet. I bought your engagement ring this afternoon.”
”An engagement ring? You’re not serious.”
”Where are my pants?”
”Christ! Behind me I think.” Tina kisses me. ”Bette, I’m this close.”
”I’ve seen you multitask. Lean back and open my pocket. There’s a box inside for you.” I smile as Tina wraps her legs around my waist and leans back for the jewelry box.
”Cartier? No, you didn’t!”
”I know you love Tiffany. But this didn’t feel like a little blue box moment. I wanted something deep and red and …” Tina opens up the box and sees her ring.
”You can’t be serious.” Her eyes open wide in amazement as she puts the ring on her finger. It catches the fire light and flashes.
”I will never, ever take this off.” She kisses me tenderly.
”Put your hand on my heart. Do you feel how strange it’s beating?”
Tina puts her hand with her ring over my heart and kisses me again. ”Your heart feels just like mine, Bette. Exploding.”
I take her in my arms and in a moment we connect again. Through the west-facing windows I hear the beating ocean surf, and on my skin her breath coming harder and harder against my neck. My own heart, mixed with the sound of the rising tide, is loud and pounding in my ears. Inside her I focus on that one place I know she’s waiting for – that last pulse we always do together that pushes us over the edge.
”There’s only us.” I whisper to her as we let go in each other’s arms.
Thank you for reading!
Thanks always to Jacky and her team at LesFan.
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Multitasking?! Hot Dayam!!!
Multitasking at it’s very best!!!
Tibette together and talking to each other can take on the World and may need to!.
Great read -thanks.
Fantastic update, really like they talk to and with each other.
And the pictures are amazing.
I savored each sentence as they were beautifully written and the pictures made my imagination go into over-drive. The proposal is a catalyst for a storybook ending and my heart is at peace, now that our favorite girls are together again.
Wow, Balckbird! It was fantastic. very well written chapter.
you know how much I love your talent. but this was something else ;)
It was beautifully written scene as they made love and talked while; their own secret language.
and the end: Bette asked Tina to marry. I loved it! finally ;)
I can’t wait to read how you have implemented what we talked about :)
oh my goodness!….You’re the woman Bette…..I bow to you!
Loved it, thanks. They seem so much stronger this time around.
Nice ring ! Hot update,amazing stories.Thank you.
You do have a way with words Blackbird. This was the perfect scene for them to come back together in so many ways. Just enough words put together perfectly and it was so deep and meaningful. You should have been a writer for the show as you hear them incredibly well.
Thank you for perfecting the show for those of us who became so disappointed in how the show was flowing along so awfully. Now we can rest assured that our favorite couple can go off into the sunset and be strong and sure of themselves as an amazing couple.
I’m so excited for Season 7 to begin and all the adventures our lovely ladies will have with each other! Woohoo, Blackbird, Woohoo!
Wow!! What a well written story. I’ve always told you, BB, you are extremely talented and when I read your works, they unravel in my mind like a movie. I would rather read 7 pages of solid story telling, than 52 pages of uncertainty. I’m totally looking forward to the next book. Tonight, I will toast to you with a delicious French 75, not the “57” variety! ;) Take care chica!!
What an outstanding chapter! Their love transcends present time. That is due to your writing and your clear expression of their devotion. Two bodies, one soul.
Jennifer Beals, page 4, I do declare……oh, my……
wonderfully done.. love the passion.. it is hot!!!! i laughed when bette has to stop at end of almost tina’s orgasm to get tina’s suprise gift a engagement ring… they both truly love each other . love the details of every love stories you done. thanks for sharing this wonderful story and many more. thumb ups!!! 5 stars!!
Finally Together!
This chapter was hot.
Stories were great couldn’t stop laughing…..I hope saga continues…….
Hi BB! It’s me again. Finally I had the time to read almost all of the LWord FF that I have been following here and of course i made the time to read your last 3 chapters that I’ve missed.
So glad that Tee and B are back in each others arms. Of course we all know that they always belong to each other no matter how hard we try to pair them to other girls.
As usual since you are really good in words again i am in awe.
Thanks for this update.
Scribe
For crying out loud, that was tremendous!
This ‘book’ you wrote is amazing. I’ve been at it nearly every evening for the last days and I have to say you really have a way with words. I like your style of writing!
I wished some of your ideas would’ve been part of the show like Tina’s trip to the Gypsy, Bette’s determined break up with Jody and the idea with the media strategist. Thanks for that!
Tomorrow I’ll start reading Touch Tone :))