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Playing By Heart
Chapter 50
The Neighbors’ House
“Mmmm, smells like spaghetti!” Carmen yelled as she walked in the front door, wriggling her key out of the knob.
“Hey baby!” Shane called out from the couch over the blaring music from the television. She and Tayo were engrossed in an intense Rock Band jam session.
“Tenacious D?” Carmen asked as she shut the front door and walked over to the couch.
Shane paused the game on the faux drum kit. “Yep. You’re good babe.” Carmen bent down to kiss her smiling girlfriend. “They just released ‘Tribute’ for download on the website, so we just bought it.”
“Sweet,” the Latina answered as she pulled the rubber band from her hair to release her ponytail. “Wow, did you guys clean the house AND make dinner?” she asked in awe as she caught a whiff of pine-scented floor cleaner.
“We did. How was church?” Shane asked, pulling her girlfriend down onto her lap.
“Holy.”
“Does that mean you need to do something wholly un-holy now?”
“Like what?”
“Like me.”
Carmen’s giggles and the conversation were interrupted by Tayo clearing her throat. The young couple looked at the bassist who was standing next to the couch looking expectantly at Shane with the game guitar strapped over her shoulder.
“Sorry,” Carmen said before stealing another kiss from the drummer. “Didn’t mean to interrupt the game. By the way where’s Alice? Shouldn’t she be lead vocals?”
Shane and Tayo glanced at each other with guilt-ridden faces before turning their attention back towards the front door. Carmen followed their gaze and saw the rhythm guitarist sitting in one of the wooden dining room chairs in the corner, her hands behind the back of the chair, ankles strapped together with the other guitar strap from the game, and a bandana folded over her mouth and tied behind her head. She did not have a very amused look on her face.
“You guys!” she said as she ran to Alice’s aid. Carmen hadn’t noticed her when she entered because the front door opened and shielded Alice from view until it was closed, and she didn’t bother looking behind it once it did.
“What? We let her eat dinner.” Shane defended. “But we knew that once we turned our backs, she’d be itching to bother Bette while she’s entertaining company.”
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mush1912 says
Now that’s what I call an NC17!!! loving this story even though it’s the 2nd time around, pps!
cutiebear11 says
Hey hun. wow am speechless absolutely amazing. loved alice tied up. (sorry 99break yum.) so funny. Ty you :) :)
wkm says
I’m on vacation, but just had to check to see if you put me out of my misery…. well worth the wait. My mistress you out did yourself. Awesome!
trecelovinit says
Now that was a great NC-17!
Dainty says
Fantastic chapter!!!!!!! Loved it. Had to read it twice for effect. Loved how they stopped Alice from intefering with their evening. Someone should have done that a long time ago and also Bette scotching the door with the chair, that was just too funny. Tina’s first time will of course, not be her last time. Men be damned after Bette. No one else can compare. No I don’t know anyone that can help with the music part but it seems that babylove might be able to help. Thanks for posting and not making us wait. Love the story.
Sharod says
What they did to Alice was kinda wrong, but what happened between Tina and Bette was oh so right.
lucybelly1 says
Loved the Gremlin reference as that was my first car…backseat memories not as funny as Tina’s, but just as awkward! Quite the virgin love scene for you, MeLL…sexy, tender, and much better than the piano would have been. Had to read it twice to savor your every word!
Merlion says
O..M..f..G…!!!!! What an excellent chapter!! The build up was escalating slowly but sure with marvelousy amazing peak!! Thank you! And also thank you for finishing this chapter nicely without any hanging ;-) LOL … I also love the way you wrote about the group interactions, and how they ensure Alice to be under control!! :-p ha3 poor her!! But it’s a good call otherwise who knows!? ;-) … So good to read your story after so darn long day! Thanks again MeLL! :-) Hope you’ll post the update soon!! :-) ps: yup! I do know it’s a song, erm.. which can be having double meaning :-p
MacHoney says
Ohh, this was the perfect mix of tenderness, humour and downright dirtiness. Very true to a woman’s first time with another woman also, at least in my case… ahem… Anyway, beautiful work :)
pattifloatn says
Dang, that was hot. Alice is such a hoot, picking locks and getting into everybody else’s business. Bette and Tina are their own Thunder storm with thunder and lightening streaking through out the room.
mette hartmann says
How does one read responsibly? God I needed the laugh. Poor Alice, but damn woman that was funny, fuzzy cuffs and a gag. Very nice of you not to disturb little P and Tina.
azmama says
The way you constructed the chapter was amazing. That funny intro with the band mates was very funny. Then the description of first time lovemaking was languid, loving and sexual. None of this “slam bam thank you ma’am”. By drawing out their actions over several pages made it all very realistic. Your descriptions were detailed enough to help the reader picture everything but not too much to be intrusive. IMO, one of the best NC-17s that I’ve read on this site, and I’ve read a bunch. ;-) Well done!
babylove says
Yep, I am and I do!!! So far, piano is one of my main instrument because I am composing and writing for myself and for others and for once’ I must say, I’m not doing that bad having over 50 dates a year. And when not performing, I’m composing, writing and arranging music for singers or else . So far preparing Europa and Canada tours with a famous singer. Ok, today it’s very sunny, so I’ll go and get ice cream after that chapter. So smooth and so cool. I like the way you wrote the scene, so tender, so quiet. Thanks for the update. Really enjoy it.
didi1956 says
Another amazing chapter.The part with Alice was realy funny and the other part was realy hot.Thank you.PPS
jessiehyx says
Hey!Actually you’re helping me learn the language. Though I have to look up the new words I love the story. I can enlarge my vocabulary. Thanks again.Looking forward to next chapter.
kins40 says
You have finally put me out of my misery…. Thank you thank you…. This chapter was all I expected and more! You definitely delivered on all my expectations! ;-) looking forward to more …. Much more!
kins40 says
You have finally put me out of my misery…. Thank you thank you…. This chapter was all I expected and more! You definitely delivered on all my expectations! ;-) looking forward to more …. Much more!
ut says
Damn that was so hot and sweet, love it. Poor Alice but that was funny. Please post more, thanks!
favcouple says
Damn girl that was just bloody brilliant. If you say that this was your 1st time writing an NC-17 – I am going to tell you “Get out of here”.:) THat was just absolutely beautiful with the right songs matching each description. Wonderful wonderful wonderful. Thank you.