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    Provocations Linger- Chapter Two (revisited and revised)

    Story written on March 30, 2010 by Zuzu's Petals.
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    The night after ‘Provocations’ is the back drop to an encounter several years later.

    2004- Night of the Provocations opening

    Bette and Tina’s Bedroom

    Tina wasn’t sure how long she’d lain there like that, collapsed on top of Bette. She was trying to filter her thoughts, to focus only on ‘what do I do next’ as her mind cleared. Bette cradled her, one hand tangled loosely in Tina’s hair holding their heads together.

    Tina guessed that they looked no different than they did normally after making love. The sound of Bette’s heart still hammering beneath her ribcage reminded Tina otherwise.

    Sitting up she gave Bette a glance as she climbed off her. She was startled by the transformation she saw: wet, brown eyes rimmed in red, swollen lips and an angry bruise beginning to form around the bite marks Tina had made along her jaw.

    Out of habit she raised her hand to Bette’s face before catching herself midway. Continuing out of bed, she stepped over the remnants of her dress.  She struggled to push the image of Bette tearing it off her from her mind. She went to the closet and pulled down a bag.

    “Tina?” Bette’s voice quavered.

    “I’m going to Alice’s tonight. Where I’m going after that, I’ll have to let you know.”       
     
    Bette sat up, renewed anxiety flooding her.

    “Tina. I think we should talk about this. I think the worst thing would be for you to leave. Please stay and talk to me.”  

    Tina looked at her blankly. She continued gathering her things.

    Bette leapt up from the bed, needing to take action. The understanding that Tina was leaving settled in her brain.

    “Tina, please,” she spoke urgently. “You need to listen to me. Please do not go to Alice’s. Let’s keep this here, between us. Let’s work this out! Tina?” she implored.

    Tina snapped her suitcase shut and took in the area as she backed out of their bedroom. Finally she looked back at Bette and gave a small shrug before leaving,
     
    “I can’t stay here. I don’t know how you would think I could.”

    Hazel eyes dared Bette to answer her. The brunette stared back as Tina left knowing she had none.

     

    2008- American Airlines Flight 5

    “May I get you something to drink Ms. Porter?” the attendant offered.

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    2. I can see and hear Alice’s frustration not being able to contact either one of them. Hilarious. Also can see that cute grin of Tina’s when she giggled at Bette’s message. Hoping for a positive result from their talk. Can hardly wait for it. Thanks for posting.

    5. Hey ZuZu–you got me the first time with this story and I’m even more hooked now! Really great beginning. And how great that Seahurst lit the spark that got you back here writing for us. You are so right: she was the reason that I kept writing; her support was so appreciated. Thanks! Lin

    10. Okay, normally I wouldn’t think about it, but I have to admit I found the idea of Alice in boxers and reading glasses this side of sexy. LOL Bette’s right…the wait is going to kill her! LOL Thank you again for bringing this story back. As you can tell from the comments, there are lots of others who are happy about it too! Thanks!

    16. hahahah Alice will always be Alice hey. She won’t be able to sleep lol waitin the opportunity to ring them to know more.I hope Bette and Tina will use this opportunity to clear the air. PPVS

    17. Hey Zuzu’s Petals, I just adore this revised adventure. The way you are flipping between the past and the present is enticing.It was good to have Bette and Tina able to talk to each other.They now have six hours to sort through some of the unresolved issues.I do hope that they can find a future together after they get some closure.Just brilliant.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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