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Rescue CHAPTER TWO BY “aandy”
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“Actually, if you aren’t too hungry, I wouldn’t mind a dip now.”
“Sure, okay.” Bette turned back and led Tina down the ledge to the pristine pool of water. “My clothes are always safe on that rock.”
“Have you jumped off the waterfall yet?”
“I’ve thought about it. I would really rather get off this island though. I can’t leave you alone here.” Bette pulled her pants down her legs, and draped the clothing over the rock.
Tina followed suit and dropped her clothing on Bette’s. She stepped into the water behind Bette, trying not to watch the body move in front of her. The cold water hit her legs and she gasped. “It’s not that cold. You’ll get used to it.”
“You have a great body.” Tina closed her eyes and admonished herself for saying that aloud. “I’m sorry. It slipped.”
“That’s okay. So do you.” Bette dove under the water and reappeared about 20 feet in front of Tina. Tina followed dipping her body completely under the cold refreshing water. She quickly emerged and looked around for snakes. Bette read Tina’s mind. “There aren’t any snakes around right now.”
“Are you sure?” Tina continued looking around the water.
“Yeah. Keep your feet moving and if they get close, it will scare them.”
“Until one of the bastards bites my ass.”
Bette laughed and swam toward Tina. “I’m the captain, I’ll protect you.” Bette continued to swim in a circle around Tina, laughing the entire time.
“The island seems to be pretty plush. I can’t wait to explore some more. Maybe I could go with you in the morning and try to help you.”
“I’m guessing Jodi finally died?” Bette kept her head away from Tina.
“Yeah, I just finished burying her with the others.”
“I knew she wouldn’t make it. You did a good job taking care of her.”
“There were many injuries. It was a blessing; I know she was in a lot of pain.”
“Karma.” Bette swam under the spray of water.
“What?” Tina swam after her, unable to keep up with the athletic woman.
“That woman hurt so many people in her life. It was only fitting that she suffered a little too.”
“I’m guessing you two didn’t get along.” Tina slowed her stride treading in front of Bette.
“We used to get along great until she started fucking anything with a pulse.” Bette turned her head again and whispered, “Including me.”
“Wow! I didn’t know that. I knew she was making her rounds through the entire flight crew of our company.”
“It was a one-time thing. Didn’t mean anything but it still kind of hurts to see someone you’d just slept with laughing it up with another person 2 feet from you.” Bette dipped her head under the water and swam away again.
“I’m sorry. I had no idea. She was a bitch.”
“Yep.” Bette waded to the edge of the water. “We better get going so we can get everything ready before dark.”
tbc in Chapter 3 by "cls"
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sounds promising!!! :) keep it up! Thanks. :)
That was Great!!!! Thanks PPS
Jodie and Jenny offed in one fell swoop? You sure know how to please your readers! Thanks.
This is an interesting concept for a storyline. Sort of like “Castaway”, which was an incredible movie. I can’t wait to find out what torture that cls has in store for the women.
alrighty lets see just much ur going to torture us,lol :)PPS
They are two beautiful woman, How many of us would like to be on the island. Heck I’m to old and to straight to have that picture in my mind. thanks
Just read both chapters and can’t wait for the third. No reason the two of them can’t enjoy their time together while waiting to be rescued… be such a shame to waste a perfectly lovely pool of water!
Guys this is so good!! I’m already hooked can’t wait for the next chapter! :)
I’m so excited about this story….it is so much fun! Give us more soon..please??
Great story! How can Tina maintain control with Bette swimming around her? Tina is stronger than I am…being stranded on an island with Bette, that’s my fantasy :) . PPVS
I’m with Tina – I frickin’ hate snakes. Thank goodness Bette is available to offer a little bathing entertainment. Okay so when does the GOOD stuff start to happen – other than Jodie dying and all. Bring it on! We definitely need some island action before the rescue planes find them and I’m not talking about finding a few mangos. PPVS
Sooo, now it’s CLS turn, huh? How are they going to furnish the “camping” site? What other food provisions was Tina able to rescue? How are they going to establish some sort of communication with the outside world? Who are the people that may worry about the disappearance of the plane? Well, these are really some questions that may help to develop the story a little bit further. Thanks for sharing this fantastic story. Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick)
O.K. so let me get this straight…Bette and Tina…alone, just the two of them…on a deserted island…naked…in a pool of water…together. Oh yeah, this story has more than promise! Great going girls…over to you Cls.
“I’m the captain, I’ll protect you.” ohhhhh how corny but sweet!!
no more jodi, tell them no more focus on jodi, she has had a merciful release…lol…pps
Bravo! Good job gals,love the flow of the story…not to mention the content!!! LOL at the fact that two of my NOT so favorite characters are bye bye. Thanks!
amazin story please post soon :)
cls…bring on the torture…CANT WAIT….and what an awesome concept for a story ladies..LOVING IT!!