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Revelations Chapter 1 (Continued from Exploration 1-6b)
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Bette concentrated on Tina, watching for those telltale changes that would lead to her orgasm. When she felt Tina’s inner walls begin to tighten she lowered her mouth back onto Tina’s clit sucking strongly as she tongued her over the edge. "Bette!!!!" Tina cried as she orgasmed powerfully, breathing hard.
Bette slowly withdrew her fingers and then kissing her lovers clit one last time, rearranged Tina’s legs before moving back up to brush the hair that had fallen, from Tina’s face.
"I love you!" Bette reaffirmed smiling down on her woman. "You know, I forgot to ask you officially to be my girlfriend?" she said.
"Is that what I am considered, your girl friend? Tina asked amused.
Bette pulled Tina up by the shoulders and sat down behind her so she could hold her against her and fondle her breasts gently. "Well it’s nice to be able to introduce you to friends and family as my girlfriend but if you prefer I could introduce you as "the woman that sometimes has her nipple clipped to me." Although I can just hear Alice’s response to that right now!" Bette joked.
Tina turned in Bette’s arms, "I would be honored to be your girlfriend" Tina said seriously and then with a twinkle in her eye, " But don’t expect me to put out until the second date!" she said mischieviously.
"Don’t worry, your reputation is safe with me!" Bette assured her. They sat in comfortable silence for awhile and then Bette asked curiously. "So you have never had a girl friend before?"
Tina knew Bette meant a female friend not a lover. "Well I did have one along time ago when I was first entering middle school but that didn’t last long."
"What went wrong?" Bette queried.
"I don’t really know. Her name was Wendy and we became friends after she moved into our neighborhood. We didn’t attend the same elementary school because her family had promised her she could finish her final year at her old school before moving up to the next level but we spent every weekend together and all summer that year. We were both very excited about attending Middle school and we made all these plans about how we would act, how cool we would be, typical teenage stuff. I thought we would be friends forever but it’s funny how fast your priorities change. A few months after we started our new year, she met up with an old friend from her elementary years and I became the third wheel. You know, I almost got in a fight once trying to defend her from this butch bully." Tina said.
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Just write whatever you want to write. People should read whatever they want. If they don’t like it, they shouldn’t read it. I read everything you write so obviously I am ok reading it. Keep up the great work!!!
Wow! So intense, but I loved it. That was so hot. And you’re brave for writing it too, because a lot of people don’t respond well to it. Totally different side of these two! Wow. Thanks so much for posting!
Hmmm…Pepper, the Police Woman. Really kind of groundbreaking in it’s way. Angie Dickenson had her charms, but I have to admit the starched hair-helmet (now with extra bleach!) she perpetually sported was never my cup of tea. Your girls are moving quickly, declarations of love and moving in and what not. And that Tina is just downright fast, if you know what I mean. Oh well, she seems to be ready to stay home now, even if she shows no signs of settling down. Will they ever wear undergarments again?
This chapter was SO GREAT!!! Damn that was HOT!!!! If some people do not like they will not read. But I am here to read what ever you want to write for us. Thank you
Thank goodness you posted again! I was so worried you were ending the story with the last ground-breaking chapter. I loved the last chapter of exploration so I’m not certain what the folks were concerned about. As for this chapter… what can I say but you write the art of seduction between these two so well I just melt everytime I read a new shared adventure. Please MORE…SOON…
I don’t think that you went to far in the last chapter of Exploration. I really like this story and the direction that you are taking it. There are other popular authors on this site that write more controversial scenes. Follow your instincts, write what you want to write and don’t worry about our opinions. Please keep posting and I promise to keep reading.
TOTALLY HOT!!!! PPS
Loved the end with Cagney & Lacey. That was hilarious! pps
I haven’t thought about Cagney and Lacey in forever. That was a great chapter. Thanks for posting!
How is it that Tina did not know about theses shows, well she really did know? Even though she is in the movie business, some of these same TV stars end up in the movies. Can’t wait for Bette and Tina to live together.