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Revelations Chapter 1 (Continued from Exploration 1-6b)
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"A fight? What happened?" Bette asked curiously. She couldn’t picture the beautiful slender woman in front of her involved in a school yard brawl.
"Well, we had just begun Middle school and this bully, Nikki, and her two half wit goons decided we were easy game. They went out of their way to annoy us. I think they were pissed because we wouldn’t buy drugs from them and for some reason that really ticked them off because they made it their mission to terrorize us at every opportunity. They would try to stop us from getting to class on time, stand around our lockers and swear at us, try to intimidate us, just stupid stuff like that. I wasn’t really afraid of them but there were three of them and the two half wits were roughly the sixe of a small school bus so it made things very hard for us. We tried different routes to class, moving our lockers, never walking alone but Wendy was really scared. I decided we weren’t going to let them interfere in our lives any more by standing up to them but my friend wanted to go with the flow. It all came to a head one day when we were confronted in a hallway and Nikki decided she was going to beat on us if we didn’t give in. I don’t even know what it was she wanted now, money probably, but I do remember she physically threatened my friend and I stepped in front of Wendy to protect her. Me, who had never been in a fist fight in my life. Nikki laughed at my show of bravado and in that moment I felt something inside me snap. I took a step towards the bitch, not backing down to her threats and it was the most amazing thing. I could see in an instant the surprise come over her face when I didn’t cower like the other girls did with her. She looked me in the eye and I think she could tell I was serious, I was actually going to beat the crap out of her if she laid a hand on either of us. Suddenly she looked at her two goons and said something typical like, "Ahh, it’s not worth it, com’on" and they all walked away. I couldn’t believe it. I was estatic! The reign of terror was over and I thought my friend would be thankfull."
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Just write whatever you want to write. People should read whatever they want. If they don’t like it, they shouldn’t read it. I read everything you write so obviously I am ok reading it. Keep up the great work!!!
Wow! So intense, but I loved it. That was so hot. And you’re brave for writing it too, because a lot of people don’t respond well to it. Totally different side of these two! Wow. Thanks so much for posting!
Hmmm…Pepper, the Police Woman. Really kind of groundbreaking in it’s way. Angie Dickenson had her charms, but I have to admit the starched hair-helmet (now with extra bleach!) she perpetually sported was never my cup of tea. Your girls are moving quickly, declarations of love and moving in and what not. And that Tina is just downright fast, if you know what I mean. Oh well, she seems to be ready to stay home now, even if she shows no signs of settling down. Will they ever wear undergarments again?
This chapter was SO GREAT!!! Damn that was HOT!!!! If some people do not like they will not read. But I am here to read what ever you want to write for us. Thank you
Thank goodness you posted again! I was so worried you were ending the story with the last ground-breaking chapter. I loved the last chapter of exploration so I’m not certain what the folks were concerned about. As for this chapter… what can I say but you write the art of seduction between these two so well I just melt everytime I read a new shared adventure. Please MORE…SOON…
I don’t think that you went to far in the last chapter of Exploration. I really like this story and the direction that you are taking it. There are other popular authors on this site that write more controversial scenes. Follow your instincts, write what you want to write and don’t worry about our opinions. Please keep posting and I promise to keep reading.
TOTALLY HOT!!!! PPS
Loved the end with Cagney & Lacey. That was hilarious! pps
I haven’t thought about Cagney and Lacey in forever. That was a great chapter. Thanks for posting!
How is it that Tina did not know about theses shows, well she really did know? Even though she is in the movie business, some of these same TV stars end up in the movies. Can’t wait for Bette and Tina to live together.