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The Stress Fracture, Chapter 8: The Serpent Tattoo
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Boston Police Headquarters
Boston, MA
10:30am, Wednesday, February 20th
Captain Elliot Stabler watched the expression on his detective’s face. It went from confusion, to shock, to anger, and now looked back at him without a trace of emotion. But she hadn’t said a word, hadn’t offered one bit of protest.
“You do know without you, these cases would still be in limbo, none of them connected. You’ve done good work, Bette. This decision isn’t a reflection on you or your ability to do the job.” He spoke kindly, a hint of sympathy in his voice.
She continued to look at him, her face blank.
Olivia was standing at the closed office door, leaning against it while she crossed her arms and watched both Bette’s posture and Elliot’s eyes. He kept looking up at her as if to plea for assistance, but Olivia gave none. It had not been her decision, and it was one that Stabler could see she did not agree with.
“At any rate,” Stabler continued, “the Chief felt that the inherent conflict of interest with Barrow’s case and Walsh’s grandson made handing over these unsolved murders to homicide a better move all around.” He sighed at her lack of reaction and added, “For everyone.”
Bette didn’t move a muscle as she sat across from him. She simply listened and watched the conflict in his face, the worry in his eyes. Perhaps he didn’t agree with the move either, but was merely the messenger.
“Anyway, I’ve got a sensitive case I need you and Olivia to follow up on. It broke last week and cyber-crimes was handling it, but their captain thinks our unit is better equipped to deal with it.” He pulled out a folder from the pile on his desk and placed it unopened in front of her. “I have to say, I think this is one that needs a woman’s touch.”
When Bette didn’t reach for the folder, nor even bother to acknowledge she’d heard him, Olivia came up behind her and picked it up, flipped it open. After scanning a few pages, she looked up at Elliot.
“These kids are all minors, Elliot,” she said.
“That’s my point, Liv. You know how devastating it would be if any of them gets collared with a sex crime conviction. It will follow them the rest of their lives. We need to find a way to resolve it, and quickly, before one of the parents decides to bring in a lawyer and press charges.”
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I’m sorry. I’ve been bad. So bad apparently Hellbent owes me a spanking! But looks like I’ll get dinner out of it from Hidingnshadows! :)
Does it help that this is a NC-17 chapter with a love scene at the end? Writing one in 3rd person objective was impossible, but I did my best. Sex scenes aren’t my strong point.
There’re only 2 more chapters to go!!! It looks like from my PMs many of you already know what’s been going on, but I promise there are a few twists you haven’t seen coming.
Also sometime tomorrow, I’ll be posting some good news on the activity wall. I’ll give you a hint: You might want to go back and reread The Groves: A Ghost Story because soon I’ll be removing all but chapter one as my “agreement” specifies I can’t leave up more than twenty percent of the original.
Thanks for reading and commenting. Sorry again for the delay.
Now I’ll be perfectly honest with you BenMac I haven’t read this story simply beaus of lack of connection to the other main characters whose shows I’ve never watched (excuse this clueless straight girl) HOWEVER I dare say you are the strongest writer on this site in my opinion and I’ll admit I have read your other stories at least a few times (Eternal Rocks should be published in some form, goodness!). The Groves was such. a wonderful story so I cannot wait to see what you have for us there (it scared the bejeesus out of me at times) but what a gem.
And essentially the reason for me writing this before rambling on, never apologize for your tasteful NC17 posts. They’re breathtaking!
Stop apologising ! You are Always worth waiting for :)
Great news regarding ‘The Groves’ it’s one of my favourite stories :)
Would love you expanding more of the H+ stories too. A completely different scenario with our favourite duo.
Thanks again Ben I’m not thinking too much as to where this story is going just enjoying the ride in your telling :)
This is awesome again; your writing is incredible good. I will miss this story when finish; I am thrilled with this chapter.
Thanks
Indeed, stop apologizing, you are worth the wait!
only 2 more chapters, sad to read that, but we still get 2 more.
You don’t want comments on our thoughts and i respect that, but i pray that it isn’t what i suspect, my heart is not that strong enough.
Thanks for the update!
I’m relatively new to your writing but you are at the top of my favorites! I’ll try to get to the Groves ASAP. And like the others, stop apologizing. The best is always worth the wait!!
Loved it, thanks
Ok – so I have someone around the corner from you…..
Loved this chapter, this has been a hard, but amazing ride. I’m sad to see it’s ending, but thrilled to hear about the Groves!
I’d say you write sex scenes quite well, my dear. It seems as though Dr. Kennard is quite the puppet master what with all her wealth and influence. Definitely interested in what the “mission” is. And I suppose it’s no spoiler to say that as soon as I read the chapter title, I immediately recalled the letters Harry wrote down for Bette. You know how to weave a tale BM. Looking forward to the next!
Well that was a page turner of a chapter. Very nice ending. Sexy yet very tender. Thank you for sharing your amazing story telling talent with us yet again. Congratulations on your book! Can’t wait to read it.
This Tina is good looking,good in sports, fit, with a nice body, a wit, brains, courageous, extremely wealthy, well connected, powerful, healthy, sane, with no apparent psychological traumas, sexy, good in bed, takes initiative, well traveled, artistic, with good taste in decoration and food, a knowledge of wine, history, art and culture and effectively protective. Address and telephone number please? Love the story!
So much revealed, but I would have shot that bastard, at least in the arm or knee. Glad that Munch came along. Very happy that Tina was there for Bette and was able to take care of her. Tina’s reach seems unending. Interesting that Tina used Melvin’s words to Bette.
We are so lucky you are a part of this fabulous community! What a great group of both writers and readers here. THANK YOU for all your contributions! We will be so supportive of your official publishings, as well!
Is it bad that I get giddy every time I see a new post from you BenMac? You’re truly one of the most talented writers on this site. You give our beloved Bette and Tina distinct personalities and traits with each story. The story line is always so, so interesting and well written. The twists and turns unfold elegantly leaving some mystery that builds the suspense with each new chapter. To say that I can’t wait for the next 2 chapters is an understatement, but I know I’ll be sad when it’s over, so … maybe a sequel? ; )
When you will post the next chapter ?
Sorry for the delay. I hope to have it up this week sometime. I’m just doing the final edits. Thanks for checking in.
Thnx! Ive been anxiously waiting. Ive read all ur stories here a few times and im a big fan. Im fascinated with ur diverse story lines and how u manage to stir different emotions from ur audience. Congrats on the book!