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Letting It Lie (5) – final chapter
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wZaMf63ZkTk&feature=quicklist
Song is by Natalie Merchant, called "My Skin". (3:36 is my favorite verse.)
Final Chapter
Together, they acted like a couple of teenagers, completely incapable of waiting for privacy while they kissed up to the door of Bette’s apartment. The stairs were tricky, but with some agility and skill, the two women made it to Bette’s door.
"I wanted to touch you …" Tina panted, pushing her body into Bette’s back while she waited for the door to be unlocked, "Before … but I couldn’t. Not in front of him …"
Bette was starting to get shaky with the prospect of having Tina in her bed again. She tried so hard to just hold the key properly, but Tina was making it difficult – kissing the back of her neck.
"But now … please let me touch you …" Tina continued, her voice hoarse. "I’ll make you cum so hard … I promise … I won’t stop until you can’t take any more."
She knew how much those words would affect Bette, and they were doing an excellent job. She watched as the brunette dropped her keys in the rush, and groaned, having to crouch to reach them. Tina watched Bette’s shaky composure and smiled. She hadn’t seen her that nervous and excited since they had first started going out.
"I’m sorry," Tina smiled, resting her hands gently on Bette’s hips. "I didn’t mean to tease you so badly-"
"I’ve waited too long for this," Bette interrupted, swinging the door opened and pulling Tina in with her, grabbing the back of her neck with enthusiasm.
Tina agreed with a moan, allowing Bette to pull her close again, this time laying hungry kisses all over her neck and down to her chest. She felt her shirt being tugged down to show her cleavage, and watched as Bette dropped her head to press into her breasts. She tilted her head back only slightly, Bette’s hands moving up her sides.
"I can’t stand," Tina breathed, moaning as Bette’s lips tracing back up her neck.
Bette answered without words, turning Tina away from her to press her chest into her back. She walked down the hall with Tina in her arms, trying desperately to keep from tripping. Her lust was distraction enough at this point, never mind the gorgeous woman in her arms.
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funnyone says
I’m glad Rick was more than just the selfish creep who wanted to watch. And that he cared enough about Tina to let her go for her happiness.
sgtmags says
That was ……..amazing!
scarlett26 says
Just catching up on all of your postings. What a great, great story. Really touched my heart and I am soo thankful that you shared your talent with us. I’m going to save this one so I can read it again and again. Thank you!
iluvmuzic says
sooo intense so beautiful bravo GrindRight, excellent!
Dainty says
Great story and I hate to see it end. It was full of love, forgiveness and the inevitability of a reconnection and the ability to restore their lost one and only love. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Rau says
whoa!! but still sad!!
AmandaMG says
loved this story, and i also hated to see it end, but you did a great job… waiting for more from you
januz says
story’s very intense and the writing, very vivid. hope you can post again soon.
socal says
Thank you for such an original (and hot!)take on the B&T relationship. You have a writer’s gift for knowing how to leave a story at the perfect time. Bravo.
talaula says
Awesome grindright, you did it just right. I would love to see more posts from you. Thank you.
Pagash says
What a beautiful and bittersweet story. Your writing is brilliant. I can’t wait to read more of your stories.
chelseagal says
Intense but beautiful at the same time.. forgiveness can be so beautiful in the aftermath of pain. Thanks for a sharing this story with us… Lets see a few more stories from you in the future.
akalittlered says
Amazing story!!! So full of love and sadness but also joy and forgiveness. Thank you
favcouple says
Excellent story GrindRight! Loved it nd thank you for this. It was different but oh so beaufiful. Thank you!
beachlife says
Wow powerful! :)
miamigrl says
Wow! That was powerful yet different. I enjoyed it very much but sad to see it end. Thank you.
ut says
That was excellent and awesome story, love it, thanks for sharing it with us!
Labrys7575 says
Absolutely without a doubt, the best TiBette story I’ve ever read! Thank you.
lipitora says
It was a wonderful story. have me a lot different feeling, but the best moment was the end.
BnTinmyhead says
Great story thanks.