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Letting It Lie (5) – final chapter
Suddenly, as if they were caught in some strange time warp, they felt removed from the situation, and all of the memories were back. It was inevitable. The smell of the baby’s things, the sounds of their old air conditioner, the feel of their old bed beneath their writhing bodies. Everything was back the way they had known it.
Tina smiled into the kiss, tears flowing from her eyes with happiness. She just let them fall, searching for Bette’s hands to intertwine their fingers together. She was panting already, deep moans coming from the back of her throat as she started to grind.
Bette released one of her hands and removed the lasting barrier to touch Tina again. She needed to take her like she used to, and with complete trust between them again. She opened her eyes and kissed Tina’s tears away, whispering into her ear, "Tell me if you want me to stop, baby."
"No," Tina sniffled, looking up to Bette with watery eyes. "Please don’t stop."
With that request, Bette pushed her fingers between Tina’s legs and moaned at how whet she had become. "T …" she whimpered, pushing two fingers into her at once.
"Fuck!" Tina gasped, grabbing at the comforter above her head.
Bette could read her easily, and she smiled at how much Tina was enjoying it. She hadn’t been able to take her the way she wanted with her husband watching, but now with Tina all to herself, she did what she knew Tina wanted. She started to build up the pace, kissing down her stomach.
"I need to taste you," she whispered, her tongue travelling down hungrily.
"Take me," Tina breathed out toward the ceiling, her legs shaking the moment she felt Bette’s tongue on her clit. She hadn’t felt that expert tongue on her in four years, and the attention was long overdue. She wanted to writhe about with pleasure, but she couldn’t find it in herself to separate from Bette’s talented muscle for even a moment. She tried to still herself, her hands finding Bette’s beautiful head of hair and tangling themselves in it. "Ooooh yeah … just like that baby … uhh! Yeah … don’t stop …"
Bette was listening to Tina’s words, but she let herself lose it between Tina’s legs. She closed her eyes and devoured what she had so desperately missed all those lonely nights. She had tried seeing women over the years, but nothing ever compared to Tina, and she didn’t find any use in pursuing anything lesser. She had two sexual experiences since Tina, but was left terribly unsatisfied both times. The sex might have been good, but it wasn’t Tina. She wanted to cry just at that thought, now able to do with Tina exactly what she wanted.
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funnyone says
I’m glad Rick was more than just the selfish creep who wanted to watch. And that he cared enough about Tina to let her go for her happiness.
sgtmags says
That was ……..amazing!
scarlett26 says
Just catching up on all of your postings. What a great, great story. Really touched my heart and I am soo thankful that you shared your talent with us. I’m going to save this one so I can read it again and again. Thank you!
iluvmuzic says
sooo intense so beautiful bravo GrindRight, excellent!
Dainty says
Great story and I hate to see it end. It was full of love, forgiveness and the inevitability of a reconnection and the ability to restore their lost one and only love. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Rau says
whoa!! but still sad!!
AmandaMG says
loved this story, and i also hated to see it end, but you did a great job… waiting for more from you
januz says
story’s very intense and the writing, very vivid. hope you can post again soon.
socal says
Thank you for such an original (and hot!)take on the B&T relationship. You have a writer’s gift for knowing how to leave a story at the perfect time. Bravo.
talaula says
Awesome grindright, you did it just right. I would love to see more posts from you. Thank you.
Pagash says
What a beautiful and bittersweet story. Your writing is brilliant. I can’t wait to read more of your stories.
chelseagal says
Intense but beautiful at the same time.. forgiveness can be so beautiful in the aftermath of pain. Thanks for a sharing this story with us… Lets see a few more stories from you in the future.
akalittlered says
Amazing story!!! So full of love and sadness but also joy and forgiveness. Thank you
favcouple says
Excellent story GrindRight! Loved it nd thank you for this. It was different but oh so beaufiful. Thank you!
beachlife says
Wow powerful! :)
miamigrl says
Wow! That was powerful yet different. I enjoyed it very much but sad to see it end. Thank you.
ut says
That was excellent and awesome story, love it, thanks for sharing it with us!
Labrys7575 says
Absolutely without a doubt, the best TiBette story I’ve ever read! Thank you.
lipitora says
It was a wonderful story. have me a lot different feeling, but the best moment was the end.
BnTinmyhead says
Great story thanks.