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Broken Girls with Strange Frames (Ch. 1)
Chapter 1: If I Look Up
I knew I did not love Bette Porter nor had any idea of loving her.
Okay, so sometimes I read stuff. The above is a modified Ernest Hemingway quote – actually, it’s about this Catherine Barkley girl, I don’t know, I never read it. I just thought it applied pretty well to the whole “me and Bette” thing. I’m sure she’d say the same thing, like “I knew I did not love Alice Pieszecki nor had any idea of loving her”
The rest of the quote goes something like, “This was a game, like bridge, in which you said things instead of playing cards. Like bridge you had to pretend you were playing for money or playing for some stakes. Nobody had mentioned what the stakes were. It was all right with me.” I think it applies pretty nicely, too. I just don’t need it – the quote, I mean, although I guess it could come in useful someday when someone asks “So what happened with you and Bette?” and I could reply “I knew I did not love Bette Porter”
Anyway, the quote was useless because I was writing an article for LA Magazine about a generational viewpoint on love and I wanted a really good, recognizable classic lit quote to sort of bridge the gap between contemporary and erstwhile culture. I wanted to be ironic or something. I don’t really read classic lit, though (except 1984; that’s good stuff), so I figured I’d call up Bette, who I won’t say is my girlfriend, and ask her, because I’ve always thought her to be really smart, having gone to Yale and all that (which is one reason why I’m glad I didn’t know her in high school because I can just imagine my hatred of her during yearbook rounds when I would’ve asked “So where you going to college, Porter?” and have to hear her smug answer of “Yale,” because even though she’s not smug now, she definitely was then, you can just tell).
So I called her up and asked if she knew any good classic lit quotes about love and she first was all sarcastic and like, “You could try reading something, Al,” and then when she realized that no one was laughing at that, she changed tactics and was all, “I don’t know – look up some Hemingway. He always has something interesting to say about love.”
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luvs_the_l-word says
this is a great story i dont think ne1 has done nething on bett and alice pleas continue im looking forward to it
Safisio says
Really great story!!! Please keep going…
halfofone says
This is excellent. You’ve got them both down. It has always been hard to imagine Alice and Bette but this makes it seem real.
slurp says
one word: excellent!
B says
excellent really enjoyed this,well written and very funny thanks for shareing it… would love to read more
mercury says
I like it!!! Can we have the rest considering its already complete? :D yes?
roasted_almonds says
Wow! You got Alice’s character down pat. Uncanny. Excellent read. Please post soon.
Lsbn says
Very cute and witty commentary by Alice. Just slightly acerbic, as I would expect. Refreshing to see a B&A beginning. Always wondered what transpired between them.
techgal says
Excellent! I love Alice’s voice!
I want to say, “oh, Pookie, ahhhhhhh”…cause you so know that Alice is gonna get dumped!
This is a story that hasn’t been told!