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Chapter 28 – CONFRONTATION
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Author’s Comment –
Now for some discussion and lots of angst!
There is a short section with some medical info – just a few sentences. The doctor in Bette just had to ask!
Both women are on edge and wary of the other. Each afraid to show their true emotions & feelings. Yet, desperate to immerse themselves in the other once again as they had done so long ago.
Where will it lead this time? . . .
Thank you for reading.
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Previously from Chapter 27 –
A kaleidoscope of images of Tina speed through her mind. Images she didn’t want to remember at this moment.
Searing memories of being with the blonde – kissing Tina, caressing Tina, claiming Tina as her own. Flashes of the blonde’s creamy skin under her fingertips, the sweetness of the other woman’s mouth, the sensuous scent of her womanhood, the feel of . . .
FUCK!!
Bette screamed in her head.
“Bette?” Tina called out to her.
“Huh?” Bette blinked, realizing that Tina was speaking to her.
“Are you alright?”
“What?” The brunette swallowed hard, her cheeks reddening under her makeup. Her train of thought thankfully broken.
“You, um, seem . . . distracted.” The blonde noted as she tilted her head to the right.
“Uh, no.” Bette shook her head slightly, retreating back to her evasive mode. It was safer there. “No, I’m . . . I’m okay. Um, just a lot going on with the conference.”
“Yes, I assume you have a lot on your mind.” Tina offered a small smile of understanding.
“Uh, yes.” Bette tried to smile back. “Still much to do. The Porter Corporation has a key role in this convention.”
“I’m sure it does.” Tina nodded. “Your corporation is a powerful player in the medical field worldwide.”
“True.” Bette had to agree proudly. She had shaped the corporation to her goals and priorities over the last decades. For betterment of medicine for the world.
“Well, I’ll try not to keep you too long.” Tina nodded, imagining the strain that Bette must be under at this time.
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I liked the way this part of their conversation played out. The back and forth with them was very telling.
Tina discovered further that something is happening with Bette that isn’t normal. I’m sure Tina will have lots of questions about that in the near future.
Bette’s internal war with herself about how she’s reacting to Tina and her proximity to her. Gut wrenching.
And Tina being super emotional because of the situation even though she promised herself not to be. Not allowing Bette to ‘hide’ from her and calling her out on her past actions.
Great chapter and so excited for what happens next.
Thanks for your trust in me with this part of their conversation. I spent a great deal of time on this part of their discussion & rewrote it several times.
Tina’s interest is heightened about Bette’s health & what is going on with her.
And yes, Bette is once again at odds with herself – should she or shouldn’t she??
Thanks for you time & best regards.
Okay, another chapter and Tina still does not know if Ashley is in the program or not. Tina is seeing more signs that Bette is not well. And instead of asking for Bette’s help, she is demanding it. Based on what? That they were once friends and lovers? That she is still angry over how the relationship ended? No, because Bette is the only one who can help Ashley and Ashley deserves it in front of everyone else. For me Tina’s demeanor is so off-putting, I would want someone else to be her contact person in Ashley’s care. I might also consider that I may have made a good decision some 15 years ago in breaking off the relationship? But I guess, love is blind…
As to Bette, she knows why Tina is there. First of all to get Ashley help. Okay, why not give her that? Why play this I do not know why your here game or assume she wants to talk about the past. Just tell her Ashley is in the program and will get the best care our team can offer. Then give her the contact information for scheduling and arrangements. But instead, Bette goes through all this gobbledygook and never gets to the point. Its a simple question: Is the Porter company going to treat Ashley or not? All the protocols and health questions can be handled by some else. Bette has rather poor communication skills and Tina is a bull in a china shop with no manners what so ever.
Thanks for the chapter….
When someone in your family is this sick, we would do anything to save them, get angry, demand, nothing is too much! I think you’re being particularly unfair to Tina when you suggest that Bette was probably right to cut ties, don’t you think?
As for Bette’s illness, how can someone from the outside and without medical knowledge realize something is this wrong; Bette has always been a workaholic, who barely eats when she’s stressed, Do you know the symptoms of hypoglycemia!?!
I’m so glad you understood the frame of mind I had in writing this chapter in this manner.
Emotions are very high for both women & when it’s a life & death situation, a person is all in to do WHATEVER is necessary to accomplish their goal.
Thanks for your support & encouragement.
Thanks for the feedback,
See you next chapter.
Great give and take between these two.
Tina’s growing concern for Bette – she noticed her physical appearance the night before and how Bette seemed to be a paler portrait of herself. And then in this meeting, Bette’s near fainting and dizziness has certainly caused Tina to be concerned about her health.
Will Bette say anything about what happened all those years ago?
Will Tina tell her how hurt and saddened she was?
Great writing and thanks for the update.
Hey,
Glad this chapter got your attention. It took me a hot minute to rework & get it into a reasonable state in order to post.
Lots of stuff going on, but they’re finally making progress.
Thanks for reading.
Fireworks indeed with these two.
I want Tina to find out everything about Bette and what’s going on with her now. And then why Bette broke up with Tina all those years ago.
This was enjoyable with the back and forth – great dialogue and them challenging each other.
Post the next part now!!
Thanks
Hi,
I worked a long time on their dialogue & the responses. The Bette part with her dizziness seemed like a good part of the story to interject the issue with Bette.
Thanks as always for supporting this.
I appreciate it so much!
Ughhh that’s all I can say …
Excellent chapter, please post soon again.
Hey Izzie,
Thanks for reading & what CAN I say??!!!
The rest of the convo is up next.
Thanks a bunch.
Fireworks for sure!
So much I loved about this chapter –
Tina being so determined to get Bette’s help for Ashley…Bette’s momentary concern that Tina might be sick…Tina caring for Bette when she was dizzy, Tina will figure out soon I think that Bette isn’t well
And the ‘intimate intensity’ and tension between them…such great writing
Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks Collins!
Hey, I’m excited that you like so much about the chapter.
There was a lot to digest & convo to process.
I tried my best to depict their emotional state as well as both of them trying to be rational & it not working as well as either of them would have liked.
Emotions like these can be messy & temperamental – especially when someone’s life is in danger.
I was thinking of your sister as I wrote about Ashley & how much Tina would sacrifice for her being able to live.
Thank YOU for your support.
OMG – this was soooo gooood!
The back-and-forth struggle for control between these two was everything I could have hoped for.
Can’t wait for Tina to find out about what’s happening with Bette and for her to insist that Bette gets the medical help she needs just like Ashley.
Thanks for this – great work.
Tina will definitely circle back about Bette’s health after she gets confirmation that Bette will help her with Ashley.
Next few chapters will move the story along quickly.
Thanks & stay tuned!
Bette and Tina have been apart 15 years. Tina has no idea if Bette is a practicing physician, researcher, or administrator. She had two children and lost her father and brother. She has a serious disease. Tina knows none of this. She is no longer a part of her life yet demands Bette drop everything and treat her sister. Tina nor we readers know if Bette is a practicing physician. Tina is rude and constantly interrupts and is demanding without listening to what is being said. They have no relationship anymore. They don’t know each other. As for hyperglycemia what does that have to do with anything? And how would Tina know anything about Bette’s life habits? That appears to be an assumption Tina and of yours from your comment.
The first words out of Tina’s mouth are “I believe we have some unfinished buisness.” Does this sound like a woman who is scared, worried, anxious about her very sick sister? Not to me. It sounds like someone drawing the battle lines for confrontation on what happened 15 years ago. I am not swayed by her speech that she is there to get help for her sister. Her anger seems more about their non-existent relationship rather than the lack of information coming out of Bette. That seems to be the direction this author wants to take this story. And that is what the author is doing. For me, I cannot be sympathetic to Tina when her main thrust for seeing Bette is not Ashley’s benefit but to get answers from what happened so very long ago. The chapter ends with Tina still in the dark as to whether the company is going to include Ashley in their treatment programs but points that Tina is about to have a “showdown” conversation on their breakup. And that, for me, does not make Tina very likeable, much less loveable. Her priorities seem very much out of balance and her timing could not be worse.
So Bette is not very likeable because of her ghosting of Tina all those years ago. And Tina is ….. well, I don’t really know; just seems to want to corner Bette and get answers. And Ashley is her vehicle to get them. And that for me does not make me want to root for Tina either. Bette is sick, so my sympathy is with her now, and of course with Ashley.
Thanks for taking time to reply again.
I hope you’ll find some joy in the next chapters.
Lots of strife going on here and still many unanswered questions.
I could feel the tension in the room and certainly understand Tina’s anxiety and fear for her sister.
Bette – trying to stay neutral – and we all know she won’t!
Overall, great writing and I’m super charged for what is still yet to come.
Fav lines this time –
‘From Tina –
“Good, because this is too damn important for us to volley back and forth like in a damn pickle ball game.”
‘I think, at the very least, you owe me a little more time. Don’t you?” . . . ‘
Pickleball – you are so channeling JB!
Glad you caught the pickleball reference!! I just couldn’t resist with JB frequently talking about the game & how she enjoys it so much. She’s a riot about it!
Yes, TK got some good lines in this chapter.
I liked when Bette asked TK when she had become a doctor. I could feel the sarcasm from Bette.
And when TK calls Bette out about her forgetfulness about eating correctly.
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
See ya soon on the next update.